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Thick and Thin (Part 11)
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Bette, ever the voice of reason, “Don’t worry she probably just ran out of charge and is stuck in the traffic with half the rest of the population of LA.”
“Bette I saw her car on the news, her blue mini was smashed to fuck.” Shane’s voice cracked and she began to break down
Bette, famous for her poise in the toughest of situations kicked into gear.
“Shane we don’t have time to get upset right now, we need more information. Have you said anything to Dana?”
“No she’s asleep and I’m not about to wake her. She likes to sleep off the worst of her treatment, she was prescribed sleeping pills and she just took a couple.”
“Ok good that buys us some time from her point of view. I’m on my way over.”
“No don’t we need to get to the hospital, casualties were being split between County and the Medical Centre.”
“Ok you take County I’ll take the Medical Centre.”
“What about Dana?”
“I’ll phone Tina.”
“Ok”
“Take care, good luck.”
“You too.”
Shane rang off and as the composed herself she saw a police car drive up the drive toward Dana’s condo where Shane was sitting on the front step.
Shane was smoking a cigarette, her hair was more unruly than usual and her mascara was smudged from her tears.
“Afternoon Ma’m, can I ask you your business here?”
“I’m having a cigarette, what the fuck is your business?”
“This is private property, do you know the homeowner?”
The cop obviously thought that famous tennis players wouldn’t have friends like Shane McCutcheon.
“Yeh I do as a matter of fact.”
The cop looked at her with a sceptical look in his eyes as he moved past her and went to ring the doorbell. Shane grabbed his arm before he rang it.
“You can’t do that.”
“I’d suggest you unhand me, you can get arrested for things like that”
“We need to speak to Miss Fairbanks urgently.”
“You can’t tell her, not yet. She’s just spent the last 6 hours having chemotherapy burning her veins. I just got her home and into bed, she can’t handle hearing this yet.”
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I can’t wait to see where you take the story from here but I just hope that alice and dana will be happy and healthy together in the end please post soon great update I love it
so you are writing as we speak right? your next post is only mere hours away right? you can’t do that! you can’t have alice hanging in peril like that. jeez!!! give a girl a heartattack why don’t ya! please post soon!
DUDE! U SERIOUSLY CAN NOT LEAVE IT LIKE THAT I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENEDS. PMS! PLZZZZZZZZZZZ
Thankgod Alice is alive. I hope she’ll be able to walk again. Poor Dana.
Like I said before WOW…Please post soon!
That’s was seriously intense…and you thought it would make us feel better? She lives, but she may have brain damage be paralyzed and permanently disfugured? Okay, so I may still need those antis-depressants. :-[ Seriously, G, you’re doing a really good job with this. Please find the time to post again soon!
Oh my gosh! That was crazy. Please let Alice pull through and make a smooth recovery. Dana needs to make sure that she takes care of herself as well. Great update. I’m really enjoying it. Can’t wait for more.
Wow is right! Sorry i haven posted b4 but i sure have been reading!That was vert intense and im sooo glad alice is alive! Please let Al recover perfectly,Dana needs her! please post soon! Totally awsome story,keep up the good work!
OMG!!!! Drama! Please let Alice be ok. Liking the story alot, please post again soon xxxxx