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Thick and Thin (Part 11)
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The cop looked at Shane before turning to his partner.
“Hearing what?”
“I take it you’re here about Al? Please don’t tell me she’s you know..gone.”
“I only have the authority to divulge that information to two people, may I ask your name?”
“Shane McCutcheon”
The cop smiled slightly, “Figures, you recognise this?” He handed her the faded piece of card that had until recently been forgotten at the back of Alice’s wallet.
“Shit, I’d forgotten about these. The three of us wrote them out after 9/11. Fuck.” Shane’s brain clicked out of her memory and into 1st gear.
“How is she?”
“She’s in a bad way by all account but she’s in good hands. We can take you to her, she’s at LAMC.”
Shane was torn, she wanted to see Alice as soon as possible but didn’t want to leave Dana. If Tina came over, Dana would know something was wrong as soon as she saw her there and it wouldn’t be an ideal environment to have Angelica in, for neither her nor Dana. Shane made up her mind, knowing that Bette would look after Alice and that Alice would want Shane to look after Dana for her.
“Thanks but I should stay with Dana, Al would want me to. Our other friend is on her way.”
“Ok ma’am.” And with that the police officers were on their way.
“Shane what’s up?”
“The cops were just here, its bad Bette. She’s at the Medical Centre.”
“Oh God.”
“Tell Tina not to come over. I’m staying here with Dana. I need to be the one to tell her when she wakes up and this isn’t an ideal place for Angelica to be right now.”
“Ok Shane you’re absolutely right.”
“Bette, tell her we all love her.”
“Sure but Shane, she already knows.”
“I know but tell her whether she is conscious or not, if she hears it might pull her through.”
“Ok I’m almost there, I’ll phone soon.”
Shane closed her phone and went back inside. Dana was fast asleep as she had left her, the sleeping pills having kicked in. Shane lay down on the bed next to Dana, wide awake and waiting for her to wake trying to find a way to string together the words she would need to say as soon as her best friend woke.
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I can’t wait to see where you take the story from here but I just hope that alice and dana will be happy and healthy together in the end please post soon great update I love it
so you are writing as we speak right? your next post is only mere hours away right? you can’t do that! you can’t have alice hanging in peril like that. jeez!!! give a girl a heartattack why don’t ya! please post soon!
DUDE! U SERIOUSLY CAN NOT LEAVE IT LIKE THAT I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENEDS. PMS! PLZZZZZZZZZZZ
Thankgod Alice is alive. I hope she’ll be able to walk again. Poor Dana.
Like I said before WOW…Please post soon!
That’s was seriously intense…and you thought it would make us feel better? She lives, but she may have brain damage be paralyzed and permanently disfugured? Okay, so I may still need those antis-depressants. :-[ Seriously, G, you’re doing a really good job with this. Please find the time to post again soon!
Oh my gosh! That was crazy. Please let Alice pull through and make a smooth recovery. Dana needs to make sure that she takes care of herself as well. Great update. I’m really enjoying it. Can’t wait for more.
Wow is right! Sorry i haven posted b4 but i sure have been reading!That was vert intense and im sooo glad alice is alive! Please let Al recover perfectly,Dana needs her! please post soon! Totally awsome story,keep up the good work!
OMG!!!! Drama! Please let Alice be ok. Liking the story alot, please post again soon xxxxx