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Thinking Back. Chapter 4
“Did he leave peacefully?” I ask……afraid of hearing the answer…….
“After I threw him out on the deck, and slammed the door….”
“Did he ever hit Tina before or show any kind of hostile behavior?”
“now that I think about it, NO….he only started acting that way after the ‘party’…..”
I took out my black book and pen, and I began to write these things down….. “OK….I am going to do some more checking, and I will let you know what I find…..if you remember anything, or need anything, and I mean anything from me……my number is…..555-5556.…..please don’t hesitate to call….” she writes the number down and hands him the paper….. “I have to get into the office….so…..like I said…….anything……call me……”
“Thank you Miss Porter..” he said as he stood, “and thank you for being there for my daughter….”
“Its my pleasure……” I say as I walk through the front door and to my car. I head to work with nothing but thoughts of the accident, and then Tina getting beaten…..I had to find out as much as could about this……seems that I remember an accident involving a mother and her daughter, and the mother being killed, but for the life of me, I cant remember the family’s name……..I arrive at the office in full speed, wanting to find this info out…….I walk in….. “Someone get me that detective on the phone…..”
“Um, which one Miss Porter?”
“The one with the Tina Kennard case……I need to talk to him….pronto…..”
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“Detective Sparks on line 1…” came over then phone intercom.
“Thank you .” I respond……..and pick the phone up……
“Detective, this is Miss Porter…..do you have anything else on our Mr. Roberts?”
“No ma’am…..”
“Well, use this little tad of info that I got, and see if you can get him to open up….ask him about a party 6 months ago, that he attended and got into a fight with another young gentleman.”
“What does this have to do with the case, 6 months ago?” he asked eagerly
“Seems as though our client, has remembered something…..and it is very interesting to say the least…..do you remember 6 months ago, a lady and her daughter were hit head on, and the mother was killed? The daughter survived?”
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griffen says
Love this story and have been waiting for more. Can’t wait to see what happens next. great job!
skycaptain says
Wow…Tina snap out of it…Bette needs to kiss her a snap her out of her trance. Keep posting…it’s addictive.
BetteAndTinaForever says
crazy…..bette totally needs to comfort her somehow to get her out this…post soon
4everTB says
Great story! I love this… Can´t wait to read the next update, so please post soonnnn!
pattifloatn says
WOW! Tina really did get her head hit hard. Bette looks nothing like Eric. On a serious note, head injuries can cause all kind of strange behaviors. I hope that between Bette and Tina’s family that they are able to get Tina into a more stable condition. Great Story.
xxjoey6 says
Oh I Love this story been looking for it everyday cant wait to see what happens next. Pleas eplease post soon
ut says
Wow awesome!
BBR3 says
great story, always waiting for more.
StormyOne says
Bette called her baby, and I think Tina’s flirting.. Love the story
fergz1 says
I sure hope you post again very soon. Great story.
akalittlered says
Great Story. Thank you PPS
NYGayLady says
Wow. I know that’s a good start, but it takes quite a bump on the head to mistake Bette for a… shudder… man.