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Third; pt. 2
As she did that, Bette climbed on the bed to Tina’s side, and started kissing her, feeling Tina respond to Alice’s actions. Bette then moved down to Tina’s *****, sucking on each, nipping, ensuring each was fully aroused.
Then she continued down Tina’s body. Getting Alice to reposition a little, Bette was able to meet Alice’s tongue on Tina’s *****. They both continued for a few moments, bringing Tina close to the edge.
Alice felt a hand under her chin as Bette pulled her away from Tina, and brought her mouth up for what seemed like the sloppiest kiss she’d received since junior high. It was then that Alice realized that Bette was tasting her wife’s essence.
While Bette did that, she placed her hand within Tina, thrusting in with all of her fingers as her thumb working on Tina’s *****. It was a tight squeeze, but she knew the position that would work, and that would bring Tina to a quick end.
The fact that while she did this, she felt Tina’s hand stroking her back and *****, and tasted Tina in Alice’s kisses was driving Bette mad with desire.
Tina could feel the climax building, and it was only moments until she felt as if her body tumbled over some edge as the ***** struck. She pulsed within, tightening on Bette’s hand. As the pulses relaxed, she felt Bette’s mouth upon hers for some deep, slow, relaxing kisses.
As Tina let out a sigh of contentment, Bette felt onto her back, propping herself up with one elbow. She crooked a finger at Alice, who climbed over Tina to straddle Bette’s hips. “Pieszecki, I owe you one,” Bette growled.
“Yes,” Alice agreed, leaning forward to kiss Bette. She felt Bette’s hands under her *****, urging her to move forward. She complied, coming to a point where Bette’s mouth could reach her *****.
To Alice, she wasn’t sure what it was, but it somehow seemed that Bette found places within her that none of her other lovers had ever discovered, or even tried to find. In what seemed to be mere moments, Alice went from merely horny to completely engaged in the act.
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(46 votes, average: 3.59 out of 5)
I so enjoyed this story. But poor Alice. lol
Uh…err…um…yeah, that’s about the extent of my verbal abilities after that story. Bette wanting to please Tina and in a small way Alice as well, knowing how alone she has felt. I can honestly say that I don’t think any of MY friends would be that accomodating! Whew, time for a cold shower.
Yay! I am so happy you continued this fic. Of course, this isn’t something I want to actually see happen to Bette and Tina, but hell, it is fanfic!
Very funny… and um… something else.. yeah.
I noticed this morning that you had posted this story, but I don’t read certain stories until my work day is done. Ah gentle fan fic writer, you lead me over a tortuous path that winds slowly to a vision beyond my imagination. I’ll read anything you write pseud, even if I have to pause and remind myself “it’s just a story, it’s just a story.” Seriously though, I really did enjoy it. Not soon to be forgotten, I assure you.
A…aah…ah!
hahaha omg, so funny!
Damn that was so fucking awesome and shock, damn can’t beleive Bette and Tina do that. So fucking amazing and love it!
Since I understand the meaning of fanfiction, I thought the story was great. Hot. Good Job.
you just rock! I love how you willingly go against what the masses want. And that was…damn…whew…yet hysterical at the same time. Loved it!
Holly shit!! P I can’t beleive they put her back on the couch. So why did you stop there?? it would be funny if alice started to have flashbacks. Anyways I don’t know where you are but it 12 here in cali. Just wondering what the hell you are doing posting so late are you scared of the reaction of this story.
not two but three of my favourites! Anytime you want to write about these again,,,pleeease continue! Fantastic!
You dirty dirty girl, that is so wrong…. ;)
My eyes! My eyes! I think I have gone blind. (I hate to admit it but this was good. Stop, though. Please.)
you are so bad ….using alice like that…but fuck it was so good… as long as it was just a fantasy….damn girl
Haha..loved the chapter, im glad u decided to post this chapter. thank u
Alice in Tibetteland. I so wanted to be Alice. That was…damn, that was hot!
hehehe so fantastic and so evil dressing poor alice and putting her back on the sofa the poor girl is gpnna have flashbacks to her “dream” for weeks hehehe – love this story
Aw, they’re such good friends. This was great! But then again, I’ll take Bette/Alice anyway I can get it.
Hmmmmmm, I liked it. Have to admit I wasn’t sure at first, but you pulled if off. Oh, also wanted to say HOT – very HOT.
I’m glad you went with it…. so dirrty haha
Loved It!
well holy hell that shit was awesome and funny and oo ya fuckin hot!! great story!
OK I have to admit that was hot but TiBette is sacred (forget Candace and Helena, shit or the chick in the bar in NY for that matter). TiBette needs no one else to satisfy their needs — shit look at Bette, any questions?
just back in town and wow, you’ve been busy! thanks for all of the postings. i for one certainly enjoyed them!
It’s not my cup of tea, but cheers to you for brewing what you please.
One day later… so hot I had to find it and read it again!!!
I just read this today….pseud, you are the bomb! simply “amazing!”