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This Goodbye
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I take the elevator up to find her and walk my way to her desk, but alas she isn’t there. I pout and I turn to walk away when I meet her crystal blue eyes.
"Hey," she says awkwardly.
"Hi," I said, and we stood there silently, until I buck up the courage to say something, "Tina, have dinner with me."
"What?"
"Tonight. I don’t know if you’re busy, but have dinner with me. At my house, I’ll cook. I just want to send my good friend off with a nice Southern dinner."
"I don’t know, Eric is working overnight and I have Joshua."
"Kit can watch Josh. Josh and Katie can have a sleep over."
"Bette, I…"
"Please Tina," I said and it sounded more begging than I had intended it to.
"Alright," she said and for a second my semi-broken heart beat once more. I gave her my address and told her to be there at seven.
I had managed to make my grandmother’s favorite chicken and dumplings. Tina had tried some before when I brought some to work once and she loved them. I thought she’d love the sentiment. After a while I heard my doorbell ring. I was relieved to find her on my doorstep, her blonde hair down a black top with the v-neck revealing her clevage with jeans and some flip flops. Even so casual, she is stunning. I invite her in and lead her to the kitchen.
"Wine," I ask and she nodds. I pour her a glass and she sips.
"Lovely."
"I hope you found my place ok."
"I did. Kit’s place was easy too, considering she lives one street over," she said and smiled.
"Yeah, Kit actually told me about this house."
"I like it. So nice and cozy. I love all the artwork you have on the walls."
"Thanks," I said and smiled.
We sat for dinner and for the first time in a month, we talked with no awkardness. Maybe it was the wine that loosened us up but we talked for an hour. Then she decided it was time to leave. My heart was breaking, I’d never see those beautiful eyes again, I’d never get the chance to see her smile or hear her laugh.
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They say what doesn’t kill you makes you stronger… keep faith in the fact that there is a somebody for everyone…you may just have been mistaken in thinking she was the one….and the very thing is just waiting around the corner to knock you off your socks. .trust me on that one… :0)
Thanks for sharing this. That this is very real for you made the already sad ending sadder :( I second kins40 – think of this love as an appetizer for what’s to come, a great love hopefully. Chin up!
Great one .. I don’t know which situation is worse yours bettes or mine for that matter
Great one .. I don’t know which situation is worse yours bettes or mine for that matter
Great story,thank you.You will find the right women,don’t be sad.
Great update. Hope you are healing. Someone will come along, who knows she might come back.
Wow. Sorry I can’t find the right words. Be strong.
Wow this is so sad .. I’m so sorry .. My heart breaks for you, I know how you must be feeling. I do hope you feel better though I’m sure it’ll take some time. Don’t rush it and take as much time as you need. There’s a lot of things I personally hate hearing whenever I’m heartbroken so I won’t say them to you but what I can say that I honestly believe is that one way or another .. it gets better. Stay strong and keep on writing .. It helps
very good poor bette another one please thanks!!!!
That was great, don’t be sad my friend, you will find someone. Thanks for the post!
if I know Tina and Bette like I think I do im sure somehow, somehow in this story probably years down the line they found their way back to each other im sure it.. Tibette love never say goodbye not even at the end!