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This Goodbye
"Thanks for dinner," she said, her cheeks flushing.
"You’re welcome," I said breathlessly. We hugged and then a sort of electricity came over us. I held onto her as her arms went from around my waist to my neck and she looked at me in the eyes. Her expression was different, it was the look of longing. Our faces were inches apart and she bit her lip. It drove me wild and she closed her eyes and planted the softest kiss on my lips. I couldn’t believe it happened. Then at once I was devouring her mouth, our breathing becoming heavy. Her mouth opened so that my tongue may do it’s work.
I lead her to my bedroom and lay her softly on the bed. I look down at this gorgeous sight before me and my heart sings. She lays there and smiles. I reach over to my ipod and turn the music on and it plays softly. I want to make love to her. I want to show her what I’ve been dreaming, what she’s missing. I lay next to her on the bed and I kiss her, slowly as my hand caresses her face. I then kiss her cheek, the spot behind her ear, down her neck to her clavicle and she moans softly. I kiss between her breasts and my hands make their way under her top.
I gently remove her top, revealing a red bra and my heart does flip flops as I see her beautiful cream colored skin. I kiss her chest, down her breast bone and then her stomach, stopping just above her the top of her pants. My hands find their way to her back and I unhook her bra and I look up to Tina’s eyes for reassurance and she nods. I lift the bra up and toss it to the side.
I gasp at the sight of those rose colored nipples atop her perfectly round breasts. I immediately devour them, make her cry out in pleasure. Her moans making me wetter by the second. I lick each nipple with hunger and she squirms at my touch. My hand makes it’s way to Tina’s jeans and I mindlessly caress her ass. I kiss down her stomach and my hands squeeze her breasts and I stop at the top of her pants. My hands touch the button and I smile at her. She shudders in excitement and I unbutton it. As I unzip her pants my breath catches as I reveal a lacy red thong. I pull her pants off and I stare in amazement. I rip my shirt off and she gasps and I kiss her again and she undoes my bra, her hands exploring them. She sits up and takes each one in her mouth. I shudder as I feel her warm breath on me.
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(70 votes, average: 3.47 out of 5)
They say what doesn’t kill you makes you stronger… keep faith in the fact that there is a somebody for everyone…you may just have been mistaken in thinking she was the one….and the very thing is just waiting around the corner to knock you off your socks. .trust me on that one… :0)
Thanks for sharing this. That this is very real for you made the already sad ending sadder :( I second kins40 – think of this love as an appetizer for what’s to come, a great love hopefully. Chin up!
Great one .. I don’t know which situation is worse yours bettes or mine for that matter
Great one .. I don’t know which situation is worse yours bettes or mine for that matter
Great story,thank you.You will find the right women,don’t be sad.
Great update. Hope you are healing. Someone will come along, who knows she might come back.
Wow. Sorry I can’t find the right words. Be strong.
Wow this is so sad .. I’m so sorry .. My heart breaks for you, I know how you must be feeling. I do hope you feel better though I’m sure it’ll take some time. Don’t rush it and take as much time as you need. There’s a lot of things I personally hate hearing whenever I’m heartbroken so I won’t say them to you but what I can say that I honestly believe is that one way or another .. it gets better. Stay strong and keep on writing .. It helps
very good poor bette another one please thanks!!!!
That was great, don’t be sad my friend, you will find someone. Thanks for the post!
if I know Tina and Bette like I think I do im sure somehow, somehow in this story probably years down the line they found their way back to each other im sure it.. Tibette love never say goodbye not even at the end!