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Three is Not a Crowd – Part 2
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As they kissed and whispered endearments during their afterglow moments Tina began to once again get excited about the pending presents, “do you want your pressies now babe?”
“Yeah, please T!” Tinas enthusiasm rubbed off on Bette, as she saw the way Tinas eyes were sparkling, her smile broadening.
Tina moved from Bette and reached under the bed, she brought out a wrapped box, with a big golden ribbon tied around it. She placed it on Bettes lap with a big smile; she leaned over to place her lips against Bettes, “Happy Birthday sweetheart, I love you!”
Bette removed the lid from the box and saw five further wrapped presents, wrapped in the same gift paper and ribbons as the larger box. She picked out the presents one by one and began to feel them, shake them, trying to guess what was inside, prolonging Tinas excitement. She began to tear open the gifts in size order starting with the smallest which revealed a very brief thong with the word sexy written across the front, this brought a chuckle from Bette as she held up the underwear to look at.
The next present was a cd that she had been talking about recently and the third was a replacement for her favourite perfume that recently run out, Bette felt the wrapping of the next present and correctly guessed at a book, but when she opened it she found a rare 1st edition copy of a book that she had been trying to find a copy of for months, The Complete Works of Claude Monet, she owned many art books containing his art but she particularly wanted this book due to the colour plates that were included, as she flicked through the pages her eyes became wide, her smile infectious, “Oh T, this is fantastic, where did you find it? Ive been looking for one of these for months, thank you T, its perfect!” She leaned over and gave Tina a big kiss of thanks.
“Open the last one babe,” Tina was eagerly anticipating Bettes reaction to the final present; she hoped it would be well received.
Bette picked out the present from the bottom of the box, it was a large flat package, wrapped again with the same gift paper and ribbons, attached to this present there was a gift tag, which simply read To The Most Special Woman in the World. Bette gently tore the paper back, knowing this was a special gift, as she parted the wrapping she began to make out the picture inside, before it was fully in view she glanced at Tina with tears in her eyes and smiled.
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The synergy of you two is fucking amazing. Now, if IC would have this as the final season episode of TLW, it would make many people happy. But that doesn’t seem to be her goal for this show.
It raining like hell here in Texas, I;m going to save on the water and go stand in the cold rain That was hot,never in my wildest dream would i believed that Tina would share Bette with another woman. I never would. thanks
OMG YAY! You know how much I dream about tibette & Helena gettin it on! WoOoOo Sweet! As, I can not wait for the next Chap! Gd collab
WOW! And I thought that you both wrote so well individually. Ally with your so well writen stories without anything left out and Jobage with your gallery scene, I am left speechless. My dreams are no where as hot as this. Keep this up and this site will explode.
Damn this is hot and this is gonna be unbeleivable. OK let see whats next, thanks!
un-fucking-believable!! holy hell u guys r so bad!! in such a good way! i want so much more!!
Hey hey flames all over the north east of england soon to be a national water shortage – that was fantastic girls i dont comment a lot being a bit shy but HOLY CRAP this deserves comments regardless – cant wait for the next one but maybe it should come with a fire hazard warning!!!
Somebody call 911, I’m on fire.
Trust me gals -if you thought that was hot wait until you see the next chapter. it made me blush as i wrote my part – and thats before Jo starts beefing it up. Jo – its a honour to work with you babe A x
OMG!!! It’s 6:30 in the morning and I’m about to have a f…ing heart attack!!
its not just WRITING love scenes where we Brit girls are creative !!
hm mm mm bloody hell maybe I should make a trip to England pretty soon. I never thought you girls over there would be so damn creative when it comes to love scenes.
Oh my fucking god, so hot and sexy – like Mad Maggot I’m on fire here….you both know I love you gals, brits are definitely the best :o)). Ally you have to stop those comments or I will not survive LOL. Your crazy brits – have a great sunday and thank you for this :o))
Okay, you guys CANNOT WAIT until next sunday to post the next chapter. The set-up is absolutely suberb. I’m thinking 69’s for everybody!!! Please post soon!
Great comments so far, glad all the readers are enjoying the ride… so far… the next chapters comments will be reeeaalllyyy interesting… beacuse its reeeaalllyyy hot writing it… Al, my friend, I think we’re coming up with some good stuff here, great what the North East & South West can do together!
Holy Fuc**** Sh**! This is incredible. I mean WOW! I’m blown away at how hot that little snippet was; you have got to post the rest of this ASAP. I can’t wait to read what happens when they really get down to business. Who’s going to tatse whom; and whose going to touch whom…..i can’t even think staright at this point. I can’t wait for the continuation of Bette’s b-day celebration.
OMFG!!!! This is so hot, please don’t leave us hanging for too long.
Ally, you are so bad but in a good way. You and Jo are both such fantastic writers individually, but this collaberation is just–there aren’t any words to describe it. I know everyone wants the next chapter ASAP, but take as much time as you both need to write the next chapter.
wow, I swear this is amazing…and I think we need to have another award level for best NC-17…Jobadge you are the bomb, both of you together are amazing talent that we are greateful to have!!! Go girls…got o love those brits…
fuck… i need a cold shower… hell i should just jump into the frozen pool… dam girls… this is so fucking good… please please post again…
You saucy English wenches! Could this turn into a regular thing, like a weekly bridge club? OK, Ally, we’ve discussed this, I’ve warned you, but as you’re in collaboration with Jo, I’m only giving you half a demerit for the ‘mocha’ thing. From here on out, if either of you pulls that one out, I’m jumping all over you! Eagerly awaiting the next chapter, you naughty things.
OMG this story makes me so proud to be british lol hot hot hot damn cant wait to see the rest of the action post asap dnt think i can wait a week great girls
And British minds and imaginations are hot hot HHOOTTT!!! Wow!!! Please keep on writing. I’m looking forward to another chapter from you BBaB!
Absolutely great stuff. I totaly love the story and can’t wait to read more. Really f*ing amazing. My respect and post soon.
man post now!!!
We’re both typing as fast as we can!!!
i guess i’m in minority but i was just laughing through the last part…not because it’s not hot, it was…but i’m an old fashioned girl, three-some just doesn’t do it for me knowing that B&T are in a loving commited relationship…i could understand if they were in trouble like it happened on QAF…sorry…or maybe i’m just too straight to let my imagination go wild…great writing though…whatever make pps happy