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Three is Not a Crowd…Part 4
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“Oh yes, I do, I have never experienced the depth of love that you and Bette share and I so want to see the vision that is perfect and total love between two women, I saw it for the first time when I witnessed the two of you at The Planet. Yes, I understand that this fulfills another part to your fantasy Bette, wanting me to watch you both?” Helena looked to Bette, as she voiced that last part of her sentence.
“How much did you two talk about?” Bette asked, looking at Tina.
“All of it babe, Helena knows and understands our wants and our boundaries, it wouldnt of been fair not to explain all of that before coming here today.” Tina explained.
“Of course, your absolutely right, Im sorry, I didnt mean to doubt you.” Bette smiled at Tina and leaned forward to kiss her, “Im sorry sweetheart, I dont even know why I even asked that question.”
“Its OK baby, why dont you lie down,” Tina had a wicked look in her eye and a smirk upon her face, “I really need to say happy birthday to you again…”
Helena watched in fascination as the two women conversed about something that could have potentially been big and had been made small, through their complete and utter trust and honesty with each other.
Helena moved toward the love seat, she sat back having recovered from the onslaught of being made love to by the two gorgeous women who were now about to partake in their own act of love, her own body still feeling very relaxed following the oblivion she had so expertly been taken to by these wonderful lovers.
Bette laid back on the bed, Tina sat at the base contemplating her move, she locked eyes with Bette and moved slowly toward her on her hands and knees like a predator, preying on its next meal, the eyes never wavering, her head still as the arms and legs moved deliberately in slow motion, her intent obvious, her prey knowing it was not going to stand a chance of survival, Tinas primal instinct coming forth as her prowl continued further up the bed.
Helena looked on, she could see Bettes eyes, dark and mesmerized by the woman preying upon her, her chest rising and falling with the breathing of anticipation, her hands clenched the sheets at her side, her legs fidgeted slightly, growing wary of the pending onslaught she was about to receive.
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Ally and Jo that chapter was phenomenal. That was so well written I can’t even tell which parts you each wrote. I felt like I was a voyeur in the hotel when I was reading this. I can’t wait to read what happens next. If it’s any hotter you both are going to burn up this site.
and its fucking not over yet… OMG… i had to take care of business like helena did… dam girls… this is hot… please continue with this birthday present
damn and the birthday apparently continues……..
*thud* *thud* *thud* unbelievable & outstanding *thud* … i actually was enjoying it so much that a contact fell out of my eye
i actually meant to say that it was unbelieavably incredible and outstanding… not “unbelievable”.. in a word, i simply loved it.
ohhh yall’s writing is never enuff
Ohhhh, there is more to come, goody. I thought that I was going to die. It was as if I was in the room with the three of them. You two are phenomenal writers in your own right, but together you blow the roof off of the tallest building in the world. I hope you will continue your joint venture even when this story comes to an end. Thanks for the visual treat.
Don’t leave us hanging for too long, I’m off to the showers, a cold one that is.
This was white hot…totally incendiary. Edgy, provocative to say the least and joy of joys..it is not over. I don’t think that TLW Tina (maybe not Bette too) would agree to this but it might help this marriage. What happiness…postings today (mostly NC-17s) by you guys, swimmie, seahurst . A reader’s NIrvana.
well i’m disapointed theres to be no sexfest…………..are you two crazy? if you don’t realise that this is the hotest thing on the site you are quite simply both madly and sadly deluded. For gods sake don’t keep us waiting – to hell with your individual stuff!
Hey BBAB, that chapter was HOOTTTT! It demonstrated the love that Bette and Tina have for each other and their willingness to trust each other and Helena. And do I understand you corectly? Is there more to come? Bring it on!!! Soon.
God, ladies, I hardly know what to say. I hardly think you need me to tell you that was hot or anything, but that was hot and everything. Yup, waiting for the next installment with bated breath, just like everyone else.
greatttt!!!!!!!!!
I’m waiting,can do anything else right now, to numb. thanks
i liked the act better than the preaching, can’t wait for the next chapter!!
AMAZING!, I wonder if we could get this on the show, Oh wait, Tina took the train back to straightville :(
What can I say. Oh to be in that 3some Fuck Fuck Fuck what more can be said
OMG, that was beautiful. A few days from now is my birthday, and somehow I’m pretty sure thats not what I’m getting. DAMN.
toy time!!!!!! Please Please Pleazzzzeee bring the toys ladies. This story makes me feel so dirty but in a good way. Know what I mean?
Great again… So damn hot. Thank you guys for all this fun. When is my birthday? Some weeks to wait,booooo…
OMG I don’t know what to say – I’m utterly speechless….in the amazing way :o))
So fucking hot and awesome, love it!
You ladies did what you set out to do..to make this in NO way a cheap thrill,or any kind of F*** fest…as ye like to put it!!its been written with alot of dignity,….and class…With every word it showed the deep love and respect that Bette and Tina have for each other..and a respect for Helena…Thats what ye wanted to get across…and thats what ye did…..OH and did i mention it was F****** HOT too…lol…