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Time Heals All Wounds, Ch. 6
Alice wrestled with her suitcases a moment before managing to fling them into the Saab’s trunk, causing the car to bounce a little with the weight of her luggage. She then hurried around to the passenger side and jumped in.
“Jesus, Alice. What did you pack – bricks?” Bette asked, slipping on her sunglasses and putting the car into gear.
“Those are the bodies of all the smartasses I had to kill,” Alice shot back. “So watch out.”
“Who’s calling who a smartass?” Bette demanded, putting on her turn signal as she merged onto the freeway.
“Anyway, you try packing enough clothes and stuff for six weeks. It gets heavy,” Alice pointed out.
“And Dana is okay with this?” Bette asked curiously.
“Mmm-hmm,” Alice lied, looking away quickly.
Bette sensed something was up. “Alice,” she said disapprovingly. “What’s going on?”
Alice shook her head. “Nothing, Bette. By the way, thanks for the ride,” she added, hoping to change the subject.
Bette sighed. Fine, let Alice play that game. She didn’t have time for this. “You’re welcome. But why didn’t you have Dana take you?”
“She’s still kind ofum, not exactly happy with me right now. Besides, it would be a lot harder on us both if she took me to the airport,” Alice replied. “So, when does Kit get to come home?”
“Tomorrow,” Bette answered, changing lanes carefully. “You know, she’s probably going to be disappointed that you won’t be here to see her when she goes home. She was thrilled when you came to visit her in the hospital.”
Alice bit her lip. “I know,” she said regretfully. “But if I don’t leave now, I might never go.”
Bette shook her head. “I don’t understand why you have to go in the first place.”
“I told you why. Dana and I need some space and some time apart before we get married,” Alice said, beginning to get tired of having to repeat this to everyone.
“Alice, that doesn’t make much sense. It’s only going to drive you two further apart. Running away from your problems doesn’t solve them,” Bette said knowingly.
Growing angry, Alice snorted. “Like you’re one to talk.”
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(36 votes, average: 3.44 out of 5)
I loved the determined Dana running to the airport – pass Bette’s car.
please make alice stay!!
you´re doing a f*cking great job!!
Dana running to Alice instead of away. Glad that Alice got through to Bette.and Tina knows she needs help. Jenny wouldn’t want this to happen in Tina life Maybe she will get help Angie needs her Mom,Bothe of them. thanks
This is the Dana who makes me swoon, love that scene of her running to airport, got my heart pounding good. Again I’m enjoying the Sharmen relationship here more than the show.
will dana make it in time or not and will alice get on the plane if dana is there or not I can’t wait to find out please post soon I love it
The airport scenes is awesome and Tina need help now that is good. Post soon!
ohhhhhh i love airport scenes! please let dana get to alice on time
Foxfire,
First time I have commented on this marvellous sequel and the orignal story “All shock Up”.
Just a little note to say how much I enjoyed the first one and this follow-on is fantastic and fabulous.
Your writing is so natural and asy to read as the story motors along.
After all the tragedy it is pleasing to see that Dana and Alice are meant to be. Now if only they can re-unite in the airport. After some head knocking that is.
Kit has been a tower of strength throughout and I am ecstatic at her speedy recovery. Hopefully it will be a full one.
Tina asking for help is the second step in her return to the fray and her partnership with Bette. The first was realising that she had a problem.
Bette can now take her head out of the sand and bug out of her ass so that she can move on a get a job. She does have a family to support.
Good to see that Shane is the constant sage and enjoy her buddung romance with Carmen.
Oh how times have changed and keep me entertained.
Thank you so much for this gift.
Your Loyal Fan.
for the first time i saw dana runing for something she want..i hope she get Alice on time…and about Tina..i feel her pain and im glad she asked for help cuz Bette was really lost to help her she didnt know what to do..i hope B&T will be fine soon they all need each other right now..another great chappy psot soon thanks