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    Time Heals All Wounds, Ch. 6

    Story written on October 21, 2005 by Foxfire.
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    Alice and Bette argue; Alice is leaving; Shane tries to talk some sense into Dana; Tina asks for help.

     

    They drove for several moments in silence before Shane decided she couldn’t stand it any longer.  “Dana, how could you just let her leave?”

     

    “I have no control over Alice, Shane.  She’s free to do whatever she wants,” Dana replied, staring straight ahead.

     

    “But Dana – ” Carmen began, piping up from the backseat.

     

    “If she loves me, she’ll come back,” Dana added, struggling to keep from crying once again.

     

    “***** it.  I have to tell you something, Dana,” Shane said suddenly, deciding Dana deserved to know Alice’s real plans.

     

    “Shane,” Carmen said warningly from the back, trying to keep Shane out of their business.

     

    Shane shook her head and turned sideways in her seat.  “No, Carm, she deserves to know and I’m going to tell her.”

     

    “Tell me what?” Dana demanded, glancing confusedly back and forth between Shane and Carmen.

     

    “Dana, Alice isn’t leaving for three weeks.  She’s leaving for six,” Shane explained carefully.

     

    “What?” Dana exclaimed, pounding a hand against the steering wheel, causing the horn to honk.  “She lied to me?  She lied to me!”

     

    “I told you that was a bad idea,” Carmen hissed to Shane, gripping the back of the seat.

     

    “Look, Dane, you needed to know.  Now, she must have had her reasons for all of this.  I don’t know what they are, but I respect the fact that she felt strongly enough about this to go about it this way,” Shane continued slowly, seeing the tenseness in Dana’s arms as she gripped the steering wheel tighter.

     

    “She lied to me,” Dana repeated.

     

    Shane took a deep breath.  “Dana, I think you should stop her.”

     

    “What?” Dana and Carmen asked in unison.

     

    “Listen to me, Dana.  Just listen to me and take my advice this once, even if you never do again.  You can’t let her leave.  Spending so much time apart and putting that much distance between you guys won’t solve anything.  What you guys have is real, and most people don’t get a chance at something like the love you two have.  Don’t ***** it up.  Whatever it takes, make her stay.”  Shane’s voice turned softer.  “Keep her home with us where she belongs.”

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    3. Dana running to Alice instead of away. Glad that Alice got through to Bette.and Tina knows she needs help. Jenny wouldn’t want this to happen in Tina life Maybe she will get help Angie needs her Mom,Bothe of them. thanks

    4. This is the Dana who makes me swoon, love that scene of her running to airport, got my heart pounding good. Again I’m enjoying the Sharmen relationship here more than the show.

    8. Foxfire,

      First time I have commented on this marvellous sequel and the orignal story “All shock Up”.

      Just a little note to say how much I enjoyed the first one and this follow-on is fantastic and fabulous.

      Your writing is so natural and asy to read as the story motors along.

      After all the tragedy it is pleasing to see that Dana and Alice are meant to be. Now if only they can re-unite in the airport. After some head knocking that is.

      Kit has been a tower of strength throughout and I am ecstatic at her speedy recovery. Hopefully it will be a full one.

      Tina asking for help is the second step in her return to the fray and her partnership with Bette. The first was realising that she had a problem.

      Bette can now take her head out of the sand and bug out of her ass so that she can move on a get a job. She does have a family to support.

      Good to see that Shane is the constant sage and enjoy her buddung romance with Carmen.

      Oh how times have changed and keep me entertained.

      Thank you so much for this gift.

      Your Loyal Fan.

    9. for the first time i saw dana runing for something she want..i hope she get Alice on time…and about Tina..i feel her pain and im glad she asked for help cuz Bette was really lost to help her she didnt know what to do..i hope B&T will be fine soon they all need each other right now..another great chappy psot soon thanks

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