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Time Heals All Wounds, Ch. 6
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“I told you, I’m going to do what I should have done already. I’m going to stop Alice. We’re going to the airport,” Dana answered, grinding her teeth together in frustration. “That is, if we can ever make it out of this traffic.”
“All right, Dane!” Shane exclaimed, pumping her fist and turning around to give Carmen a high five.
Dana finally broke into a smile. “I just hope she’ll listen to me,” she admitted. “I hope she’ll stay.”
“She will. She has to,” Shane said reassuringly. “You guys are meant to be.”
“But this traffic,” Dana protested, gesturing with a hand. “If we have to wait much longer, I might miss her! She can’t get on that plane!”
“Just be patient,” Carmen said, trying to keep from looking worried. Dana was right; she was cutting it close on time already.
Dana craned her neck once more. Traffic was still at a complete standstill. “You know, I can see the top of the parking garage from here” Dana trailed off thoughtfully.
“***** it,” she murmured to herself, throwing the car into park and flinging the door open. She jumped out. “You take over, Shane. I’ll call you.”
“What?” Shane said, dumbfounded. “What the ***** are you doing now, Dane?”
She got no response, as Dana had already turned around and began running up the middle of the road, threading her way through the stopped traffic.
“I’ll be damned,” Shane muttered, sliding over into the drivers seat and helping Carmen climb into the front. “She’s going to run to the airport. Dana’s not giving up.”
Dana pumped her arms and felt her feet slapping the pavement as she began a desperate run up the street toward the airport. She darted past cars and weaved her way through lanes, keeping the top of the parking garage in her sights as she started coming closer.
Alice. Alice. Alice. The name repeated itself over and over in her head, matching the rhythm of her feet pounding the street. I have to stop her.
“Can this day get any ***** worse?!” Bette demanded, looking up toward the ceiling of her car. “What’s next – locusts?”
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I loved the determined Dana running to the airport – pass Bette’s car.
please make alice stay!!
you´re doing a f*cking great job!!
Dana running to Alice instead of away. Glad that Alice got through to Bette.and Tina knows she needs help. Jenny wouldn’t want this to happen in Tina life Maybe she will get help Angie needs her Mom,Bothe of them. thanks
This is the Dana who makes me swoon, love that scene of her running to airport, got my heart pounding good. Again I’m enjoying the Sharmen relationship here more than the show.
will dana make it in time or not and will alice get on the plane if dana is there or not I can’t wait to find out please post soon I love it
The airport scenes is awesome and Tina need help now that is good. Post soon!
ohhhhhh i love airport scenes! please let dana get to alice on time
Foxfire,
First time I have commented on this marvellous sequel and the orignal story “All shock Up”.
Just a little note to say how much I enjoyed the first one and this follow-on is fantastic and fabulous.
Your writing is so natural and asy to read as the story motors along.
After all the tragedy it is pleasing to see that Dana and Alice are meant to be. Now if only they can re-unite in the airport. After some head knocking that is.
Kit has been a tower of strength throughout and I am ecstatic at her speedy recovery. Hopefully it will be a full one.
Tina asking for help is the second step in her return to the fray and her partnership with Bette. The first was realising that she had a problem.
Bette can now take her head out of the sand and bug out of her ass so that she can move on a get a job. She does have a family to support.
Good to see that Shane is the constant sage and enjoy her buddung romance with Carmen.
Oh how times have changed and keep me entertained.
Thank you so much for this gift.
Your Loyal Fan.
for the first time i saw dana runing for something she want..i hope she get Alice on time…and about Tina..i feel her pain and im glad she asked for help cuz Bette was really lost to help her she didnt know what to do..i hope B&T will be fine soon they all need each other right now..another great chappy psot soon thanks