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Time Heals All Wounds, Ch. 8
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They both watched her walk away. “Okay, obviously this changes our plans. We’d better regroup with everybody,” Bette said.
Tina nodded and gave Angelica another spoonful of baby food. “Better call the party-planning committee. Oh, baby, what was your news?”
Flipping open her cell phone, Bette smiled. “You know, I think I’ll save it to announce at the party,” she said, a secretive look on her face. “Now you call Shane and I’ll call Dana.”
“So this is our mission?” Carmen asked, a confused look on her pretty face. “To sit at Alice’s desk?”
“And await another phone call,” Shane added, kicking her feet up on Alice’s desk. “You know Dana – she tends to be a bit overdramatic sometimes. Something’s up, though.”
“So I guess we just wait,” Carmen agreed, plopping herself in Shane’s lap.
Shane playfully let out a loud groan and then moved to get comfortable, draping an arm around Carmen’s shoulder. “You do know that if we break this chair, Alice is gonna kill us, right?”
“She has to find us first,” Carmen pointed out, smiling. “We’ll go far, far away where she can’t find us.”
“Like where?” Shane asked, smiling back.
Carmen scrunched her face up thoughtfully. “A cave in the middle of the desert or something. We’ll become hermits, hunting our own food and running around naked.”
“Running around naked?” Shane repeated, the corner of her mouth lifting. “I could get into that.” Her fingers stroked Carmen’s shoulder.
Carmen turned her head to kiss her, and soon the pair was locked in a heated embrace, lips fused together and hands wandering in a way that elicited soft sighs. Shane pulled her lips away for a moment. “You know how I said Alice would kill us if we broke her chair? Well, she’ll really kill us if we keep this up.”
“She won’t know,” Carmen breathed into Shane’s ear.
Shane closed her eyes a moment as a chill ran down her spine. “Oh, trust me, she’ll know. She seems to have a sixth sense when it comes to knowing about people having *****. Besides, not only will the chair be broken, it’ll be in pieces, and that could be a giveaway.”
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why Alice is acting cold like this?..im sl glad Bette have a jog again and in a place she likes and without that pig and it seems Tina is a little better..cant wait for more post soon thanks :o)
i thought alice wanted dana to ask her to stay–did you get a new alice?
Damn it Alice!!! hahah that was a great chapter, im glas that things are looking up for tina and bette, even kit. I hope all goes well for Carmen and Shane, Keep up the great work and post soon!!
ehh…why is alice actin like she that she needs to stop trippin i thought she wanted dana to come after her….she is pure whackness.
Oh my! I can’t believe Alice did that. Poor Dana.
I love this fic like I love all of your stories but like most everyone else I’m a tad confused on Alice’s mindset. So far everything has been usually a POV internal dialogue on Dana so I’m not quite sure what’s going on in Alice’s head. In the previous chapter she was talking about all she wanted was for Dana to tell her not to go and here is Dana showing, a little late, to basically say that and she gets enraged. I do see how it would be grating to be told someone is there to “make you” do something but I’m still perplexed about her reaction. Nonetheless, I’m sure you have a reason for Alice acting this way and I’m sure you will explain it wonderfully through her thoughts as you’ve done thus far with all of the characters. But dude, seriously, if Alice wants back with Dana after this she is the one who should do the begging. And most anyone who reads my fics knows how much I love Alice. I almost always take her side. But not this time, bad Alice, no biscuit! lol. Anyway… to end my mindless prattling feedback here’s my usual end line: U rite gr8!!! Post more!!!!
that was so sad. i was NOT expecting alice to react like that 1 bit. you really through me off there. i think it will be good though, its always nice to build it up before they make their ultimate decision. i really enjoy this fic. keep up the good work. :)
Like everyone else, I’m a tad confused about Alice’s reaction but I have no doubt you have your explaination for it. Great job with this fic, it kept me on the end of my seat.
very very bad alice there was no need for that but what will happen next please post soon I can’t wait to see what happens with every one I love it
Drama for Alice and Dana. Glad Peggy kick Frankling’s ass out of the CAC and let Bette in that chair of the CAC. Ok what a surprise they have for Kit. Post soon!
Wait for the next chapter. It’s all part of the plan. Trust me on this. :)
I’m a tad confused isnt this what Alice wanted some big chivalrious act on the part of Dana to prove how much she loves her and wants her in her life.
Great chapter, really looking forward to your next. It is nice also to see that KIt is having the start maybe of a new relationship. Please post asap.
now that was harsh from alice.
Hey nice chapter! lots of stuff going on. Nice talk there with Carmen and Shane..they are cute toguether. Finally Bette is back to where she belongs..hope things will start to get better now. Kit flirting! ha its nice. Tina is getting help..im glad!. Alice is nuts ?? lol she wanted Dana to get her back and now she says NO ?? Dont give up Dana!. Post soon.
gosh alice is stupit….
I love the conversation between Shane and carmen.
Poor Dana. I have no idea how you can make this up, but I can’t wait to see your plan. I love your Sharmen. Post soon =)
Wow, I think I’m as confused as the other. I have faith that you’ll make sense out of this with the next chapter. The story’s great. Can’t wait till you post an update!!!
I really love Alice, but right now I’m a little confuse, WTF Alice! lol, she doesn’t even want to talk O_o . I wanna watch Dana doing something like this in the show, fighting for Al.
Great Chapter! Helna’s dead-yippy! Franklin fired-he deserves worse! Bette back at CAC-all is right w/ the world!