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Time Heals All Wounds, Ch. 8
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“So they assumed the name Shane meant I was a guy, and you let them believe it,” Shane prompted.
“Yeah. Well, I didn’t actually agree, but I didn’t discourage or correct them,” Carmen acknowledged softly. “But I’m ready to tell them. I don’t think I can do it without you there with me. I’m just so tired of hiding who I am to some of the people I love most. All these years of hiding and lyingmaking up fake boyfriends.”
“You created imaginary boyfriends?” Shane asked with a snort.
“I was scared, okay?” Carmen defended herself, punching Shane lightly on the shoulder. “I know it won’t be so bad with you there, and hopefully they can see for themselves why I love you so much. I’m just so afraid of how they’ll react, especially Papa. I’m the only girl in the family, you know.”
“Must have been hard growing up in a house full of boys,” Shane remarked.
“It wasn’t that bad,” Carmen replied. “I used to steal their clothes all the time, and check out their girlfriends behind their backs,” she confessed with a grin.
“You have a big family?” Shane asked, picturing a young Carmen growing up with several rowdy but protective brothers, the entire family gathering together for dinner and holidays. She felt a tug of sadness inside as she wondered what that had been like.
“There’s quite a few of us,” Carmen said. “And we’re pretty close. That makes this even harder on me.” She eyed Shane a moment, noticing the slight look of sadness in her eyes. “Do you ever wonder about your family?”
Shane sighed. “Sometimes. I did a lot the first few years I was in foster care, but then I stopped caring. Now I just try not to let myself. I’ll always still love my mother, even after the ***** I went through because of her. I could care less about my father, since I never knew him. I’ve never met my brother, so it’s harder for me to imagine where he might be now. It’s just weird to think that somewhere out there is a guy who might look something like me. I mean, he could have my eyes, for all I know. I wonder if he turned out better than I did?”
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why Alice is acting cold like this?..im sl glad Bette have a jog again and in a place she likes and without that pig and it seems Tina is a little better..cant wait for more post soon thanks :o)
i thought alice wanted dana to ask her to stay–did you get a new alice?
Damn it Alice!!! hahah that was a great chapter, im glas that things are looking up for tina and bette, even kit. I hope all goes well for Carmen and Shane, Keep up the great work and post soon!!
ehh…why is alice actin like she that she needs to stop trippin i thought she wanted dana to come after her….she is pure whackness.
Oh my! I can’t believe Alice did that. Poor Dana.
I love this fic like I love all of your stories but like most everyone else I’m a tad confused on Alice’s mindset. So far everything has been usually a POV internal dialogue on Dana so I’m not quite sure what’s going on in Alice’s head. In the previous chapter she was talking about all she wanted was for Dana to tell her not to go and here is Dana showing, a little late, to basically say that and she gets enraged. I do see how it would be grating to be told someone is there to “make you” do something but I’m still perplexed about her reaction. Nonetheless, I’m sure you have a reason for Alice acting this way and I’m sure you will explain it wonderfully through her thoughts as you’ve done thus far with all of the characters. But dude, seriously, if Alice wants back with Dana after this she is the one who should do the begging. And most anyone who reads my fics knows how much I love Alice. I almost always take her side. But not this time, bad Alice, no biscuit! lol. Anyway… to end my mindless prattling feedback here’s my usual end line: U rite gr8!!! Post more!!!!
that was so sad. i was NOT expecting alice to react like that 1 bit. you really through me off there. i think it will be good though, its always nice to build it up before they make their ultimate decision. i really enjoy this fic. keep up the good work. :)
Like everyone else, I’m a tad confused about Alice’s reaction but I have no doubt you have your explaination for it. Great job with this fic, it kept me on the end of my seat.
very very bad alice there was no need for that but what will happen next please post soon I can’t wait to see what happens with every one I love it
Drama for Alice and Dana. Glad Peggy kick Frankling’s ass out of the CAC and let Bette in that chair of the CAC. Ok what a surprise they have for Kit. Post soon!
Wait for the next chapter. It’s all part of the plan. Trust me on this. :)
I’m a tad confused isnt this what Alice wanted some big chivalrious act on the part of Dana to prove how much she loves her and wants her in her life.
Great chapter, really looking forward to your next. It is nice also to see that KIt is having the start maybe of a new relationship. Please post asap.
now that was harsh from alice.
Hey nice chapter! lots of stuff going on. Nice talk there with Carmen and Shane..they are cute toguether. Finally Bette is back to where she belongs..hope things will start to get better now. Kit flirting! ha its nice. Tina is getting help..im glad!. Alice is nuts ?? lol she wanted Dana to get her back and now she says NO ?? Dont give up Dana!. Post soon.
gosh alice is stupit….
I love the conversation between Shane and carmen.
Poor Dana. I have no idea how you can make this up, but I can’t wait to see your plan. I love your Sharmen. Post soon =)
Wow, I think I’m as confused as the other. I have faith that you’ll make sense out of this with the next chapter. The story’s great. Can’t wait till you post an update!!!
I really love Alice, but right now I’m a little confuse, WTF Alice! lol, she doesn’t even want to talk O_o . I wanna watch Dana doing something like this in the show, fighting for Al.
Great Chapter! Helna’s dead-yippy! Franklin fired-he deserves worse! Bette back at CAC-all is right w/ the world!