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Timid Devotion (Part 10)
"Yeah, it’s really nice," Bette smiled, feeling a new happiness for the place as she read Tina’s wondrous expression. She got so much joy from Tina’s smile.
"So, what do you want to do?" Bette asked, walking slowly across the grass with Tina in hand.
"Umm …" Tina started with a smile before letting go of Bette’s hand. "Race you!"
After shouting out, the blonde bolted for the trees and Bette was left confused and shocked. After a moment to register what had happened, Bette ran after her with drive.
"You’re losing," Tina laughed, shouting back to Bette.
Bette smiled at the adorable sight of Tina’s prefect ass, but tried to remain focused. "Am not!"
"You’re a loser!" Tina laughed, just running harder.
Bette laughed to herself at Tina’s feisty attitude and ran up beside the blonde, keeping pace with her.
"So … am I supposed to … win … or lose?" Bette huffed, forcing a smile from Tina as she just pushed on harder.
"Don’t let … me win," Tina huffed back when they were near the trees.
Bette sprinted ahead and into the trees with laughter.
Tina stopped and rested her hands on her knees with fatigue. She looked around but the further she walked in, the more curious she got as to her date’s whereabouts. "Bette?"
The brunette was panting as well, looking back to Tina who obviously couldn’t see her. She didn’t want to scare her, so she started walking back to her.
"Bette? Are you there?" Tina asked, trying not to get hit in the face with branches.
"So I guess I’m not a loser anymore," Bette chuckled.
Tina looked around with a smile, still unable to locate Bette’s exact location. It almost sounded like her voice was coming from everywhere.
"Bette? What the hell are you doing?" Tina laughed, trying to listen for sounds.
"Boo," Bette smiled softly, standing behind Tina with her hands on her hips.
Suddenly and unexpectedly, Tina screamed for a moment, nearly falling to the ground with relief when she saw it was Bette. "Shit," she gasped, a smile gracing her face, "Bette you scared me!"
"Aww," Bette chuckled, taking Tina in her arms and holding her, "Sorry. I didn’t mean to scare you."
"What are you doing in the depths of the park forest?" Tina chuckled, enjoying the warm embrace. She felt cozy with Bette holding her head on her shoulder.
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(47 votes, average: 3.89 out of 5)
OH WAY TOO SLOW BUT KINDA CUTE AS THEY flirt and foreplay. Liking it very much though. PPS
Enjoying their play…
They are really too cute together. Bette is displaying an enormous amount of patience, very endearing. PPS.
how flirty and cute!:)PPS
Oh…simply the best. I could see the two of them flirting back and forth, enjoying the beauty of the day and each other. More, more, more!!!
Delightful. They are, in Shane’s words, “too f–king cute.”
Love all the flirting! They are just too cute together! Good luck working out whatever it is and know that I’ll be here waiting to read your awesome stories! but PPS:)
too f-ing cute indeed.. love it cant wait to read more!
Love their playful banter and them flirting with each other..thank you for posting… love it love it! :)
Yes, the park can be fun. Done that!! I thought you forgot about us.. PPS
I wan to be in that park and watch them from a close distance, wow B that was such a lovely and a sweet chapter my dear. I miss your regular posts B, and your place is always reserved. I love them together like this, it’s really nice and the image itself gives you butterflies in your stomach, the beginning of any loving relationship is great and exciting, but when love grows it becomes more passionate. Thank you so much my dear B, you are great and I can never get enough of your talent and creativity. Love you my friend. Good luck.
arent they so cute….thanks to the writer..LOL
I have to agree…. very cute:)
Bette and Tina are flirting, and you write that so well. Thanks, Biisexi.
These two are adorable – but Bette needs to lighten up a little – if Tina’s flirting don’t be so uptight! I hope in the next chapter they go back to touching NOPE i mean torturing each other (I laughed so much when I read your comment)! PPS
okaaayyy They are super sweet … :P hoping for more like “on fire” but I guess it will come later. great chappie. It is good to see Tina being comfortable with Bette when they are outside…lets see how she reacts when she runs into someone she knows :S
Love this B&T they are very cute lol! An your pace is fine..Anticipatio is good lol PPVS xx
What a amazing way to spend the day with someone special: talkin, having laughs, playing and groping in the park.LOL
they are soooooooooooooo cute
I think I need a nice walk in the park like that. :) Very sweet. I love the pace of this story! Thanks for posting!
wonderful! love this playful two! PPS!
They are so cute and sweet, love them. Please post more, thanks!
Yea…The pole…I was really expecting a mention of the pole there…Jen was so cute in the interview about the pole..xD
What a sweet chapter! I love the pace and can’t wait until these two finally come together. ; )
Oh love…so great…I am really enjoying this story..thank you so much. Its so wonderful to see how comfortable they are together…couldnt have it any other way;)