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Timid Devotion (Part 9)
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"Hey," Bette said quietly, breaking the silence between them. It was the only thing she could think to say in the midst of the tension.
Tina’s eyes were still locked to Bette’s as she smiled back. "Hey."
The tension was killing them both, and Bette knew she had to say something else or she would go crazy. It was hard for her to behave herself. "So … do you like the, um … the movie?"
Tina smiled at Bette’s nervousness, realizing she should probably be more nervous, but instead she just felt excited. She wanted to kiss Bette again. "Yeah."
Bette could sense Tina’s desire and felt like she would lose control soon if Tina didn’t. Her breathing had become very deep and slow, trying to maintain her sense of control.
With a growing smile, Tina leaned in a bit further and shifted on the couch so her lips met Bette’s.
The brunette sat facing forward, her head turned to Tina while the blonde was facing her. Slowly, their lips pressed harder against each other, wanting more. Tina parted her lips slightly, letting her tongue tease Bette’s lips. It felt so good, Bette gasped and parted her lips as well. She felt a tingle, her body taken over with desire. Her lips met Tina’s softly and deeply, inhaling through her nose.
Tina pulled back for a moment and looked into Bette’s eyes, her dilated pupils a tell tale sign of her arousal. "I love kissing you."
Seeing that soft smile caused the corners of Bette’s lips to turn up. She couldn’t stop the smile from touching her own cheeks. "I love kissing you too."
Tina giggled softly and leaned back with a mischievous grin, "Can we just kiss for a while?"
Bette chuckled and let her body give in, crawling across the couch to the blonde. "Mmm yes," she answered happily, laying herself ontop of Tina. She moaned at how great that felt.
"Oh god," Tina whispered, feeling Bette’s lips on her neck. She instantly felt her body reacting, as she closed her eyes and swallowed hard, tilting her head away to give Bette more room. She had never felt so aroused by a simple kiss on any part of her body, never mind there.
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OMG the tension, how in god’s name are they gonna walk?LOL :)PPS
I wonder if the walk will be a short one to the bedroom…they might actually make it there without starting to remove articles of clothing…whew! There is so much desire between these two, it’s like a powderkeg waiting to explode. Did you per chance take time to write two chapters???
So,this is “taking it slow” huh? Feels like the speed of light to me…! LOL
Love it! I love both the stories, but this one best, so far.You have a fan. ;o]
I am exhausted, the tension between them sucks the energy out of me. Making out…… it’s been awhile. LOL
Love this .. thank you so much for the update… so they’re not going to last with this “taking it slow”… LOL!!!! But I can’t wait to see how their walk goes… Great update! :D
“can we just kiss?” is the sweetest question ever! but really Tina? how can you “just kiss” bette? nearly impossible as this chapter has clearly portrayed! love it!
I don’t know if I could “just kiss” either one of these women..thanks for another great chapter. pps
How can they take a walk? Would’t they rather re-watch Jumanji..its such an entertaining film LMFAO
Mercy, I don’t know how they can find the strength to walk to the door let alone outside the house. The sexual tension is so high they could float to wherever they wanted. I can hardly walk after reading what they were doing. This just can’t last for much longer. How can you write this wihout falling off your chair biissexi? Lovd it. PPS
Mercy, I don’t know how they can find the strength to walk to the door let alone outside the house. The sexual tension is so high they could float to wherever they wanted. I can hardly walk after reading what they were doing. This just can’t last for much longer. How can you write this wihout falling off your chair biissexi? Lovd it. PPS
Mercy, I don’t know how they can find the strength to walk to the door let alone outside the house. The sexual tension is so high they could float to wherever they wanted. I can hardly walk after reading what they were doing. This just can’t last for much longer. How can you write this wihout falling off your chair biissexi? Lovd it. PPS
why r they teasing themselves? enuff already!!!! lol.
I love the tension between the two. They are so loving and playful…I really like your story. I wonder how they are going to last. lol PPS!
Their desire for each other put together is like a bomb waiting to explode…and when it does, it will be a hell of a night for both of them. I think the make out sessions are really fun…Bette is so cute trying to contro, herself :P Great chappie, good luck with school ;)
I am not sure that either one can hold out much longer. I know that Bette wants to take it slow, but their bodies are not allowing that to happen.
Ahh you such a tease my friend for leaving us like that lol. They are sweet and hot but they taking things slow its killing us here lol. Please post more, thanks!
mmmmmmmmmm….yummy…You could cut a block out of the all the tension in the air!I liked the Bonnie Hunt touch~Hunt…=)
They aren’t exactly going slow anymore. :) Love it. Love this story. Thanks for posting!
Timid ….Right
These two can’t possibly last much longer – they are on fire for one another – and dirty thoughts – Yikes – if even one mentions something to the other – its on! They are so cute together – trying to be respectful of one another – but all the while tourerching themselves
Yikes i hit leave comment before I was done. See thats how little I comment on stories but since your stories are so amazing I could not be a silent reader anymore. PPS – can’t wait to read more!
“Apparently we can read each other’s minds”, well that my dear friend is because great minds think alike! lol Oh the tension between these two, I have a feeling they’re not gonna be walking anywhere but to the bedroom! PPS:)
They will need to walk very, very slowly. They are one HOT couple. Great job!!!!! PPS
great chapter. tension between these two is incredible! PPS!
OH Babe…WOW…WOW…I know I am sooo behind but had to leave you a message. What a magically wonderful chapter..I LOVED their interactions. My dear..you rock my world;)