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Timid Devotion (Part 12)
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"It was?" Tina asked, obviously excited as she continued to read Bette’s expression. She smiled when she realized what she was seeing. "Can we stop somewhere?"
Bette frowned with confusion. "What? Where?"
"Umm … I think it’s like two streets ahead," Tina smiled.
"Oh … okay …" Bette answered, pulling into a residential area, driving through a relatively secluded area.
Tina thought the street up ahead would be perfect. "Here! That street."
Once Bette turned onto the street, Tina asked her to park.
"What the hell? Where are we?" Bette laughed, looking around in confusion.
"I love seeing that look," Tina smiled, being honest with Bette.
"What look?"
"That one," Tina replied, "The look that is begging to touch me and kiss me."
Bette blushed and turned to the window, pursing her lips. "You like when I can’t control myself?"
Tina giggled, "No …" she started, watching Bette turn her head as she shifted around, "I like this." She leaned in to kiss Bette as she spoke, the kiss fairly innocent because they were still in public.
"Mmm …" Bette smiled, bringing her hand up to Tina’s neck.
"Can we just …" Tina started, pulling away from the kiss, "Can we maybe move around a bit?"
"Where?" Bette asked, placing her hands back on the steering wheel.
"No," Tina grinned, squeezing into the backseat, "Here."
Bette’s jaw dropped and her eyes widened at Tina’s proposition. "You want to make out … in the-"
"The backseat," Tina finished, resting her arms over the seat and watching the shock on Bette’s face.
"Fuck yes," Bette answered once she got her voice back, getting out of the driver’s seat as she took her keys out of the ignition, and opened the door to the backseat. She crawled in with desperation before closing the door behind her.
"Come here," Tina whispered, laying on her back as she invited Bette over, sending shivers through Bette’s entire body. She could even feel it in her toes.
Bette eagerly leaned over the blonde and was glad there was a surprisingly large amount of space in the back. She grinned at that thought, and hiked Tina’s leg up to her hip. Although Tina was wearing capris, Bette could still feel the soft flesh up to her knee. She looked down at Tina and kissed her, their mouths parting instantly. It was obvious that Tina was aroused as well.
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it took me for ever to get thru this one damn people here at work keep disturbing me..i am trying live each moment like i am the horney Tibette….LOL
geesh i hope the fire company is waiting to hose them off when they get to work! :)PPS
So just say it…dammit…
Wow, Tina is really coming out of the gate fast. I love the way you are writing this story and portraying Tina. I was even more fascinated with the way Tina came out to the gang and happy that Bette took Tina away before asked nosey Alice asked a million and one questions that were none of her business, besides it would have embarrased newly admitted Tina. But the backseat scene surprised me even more, never thought Bette would do it. I also wonder who the heck was on the telephone. I thought it might be someone trying to tell them the police were coming and to get out of there. lol. Loved the updates. Just catching up and I lvoe them. I see you have already posted again. On to the next one. Thanks for posting.
Tina just stole my heart with that one simple kiss in front of the gang. Wow! Such a wonderful way to make their introduction as a couple. I can certainly understand why Bette was so turned on by her special blonde. I wonder who was calling???? As always, you leave me wishing I had another chapter to read immediately!!! Post when you can…
when r these bunnies gonna do it?! Lol.
I am not sure that I would have been able to stop. I can understand the wanting their first time to be special. Hopefully that special time will come soon.
That was amazing!! I love the connection between Bette and Tina. I think that it is really sweet how Bette is taking her time with Tina and not rushing her. They are so sweet together. The tension is great…I wonder how they will work after that make-out seesion…lol! Oh and I loved Alice’s reaction! It was priceless. =) Great job and PPS!!
WOW – that was some make out session – even better than what i was thinking! And I am proud of Tina for telling everyone she was with Bette – and with a kiss and all! Now one question does Bette still feel that Tina is not one hundred percent ready? They almost couldn’t stop themselves – please just put them both out of their misery and let them have some FUN! You know I am a BIG FAN – your stories are the best and the highlight of my week! PPS
And what’s wrong with car sex?!! Why does the first time always have to be perfect? It never turns out that way no matter how hard you try LMAO :)
way to go, tina! loved how she came out to the gang – brave and sexy :) loved the update!
How is it that they could control themselves at times like THAT?I’ll probably never understand…You got to come when you got to come…
hooooooooooo that wass the best coing out everrrrrrr and may i say a great way of saying good morning to bette lol tina is so soooo sweet and bette rule. bette is in love
That chapter made me smile. I love how they are acting a bit like out of control teenagers. It’s cute. Thanks for posting!
Can’t wait for your next post!
dude that was so HOT not sure i can get back to my work without a cold drink now though. great post!loved how Tina came out to the group. lol at Alice still trying to set tina up and loved their self control or lack of :) thanks biissexi
Well, good morning to you too….. I cannot go to work after this..LOL Muy caliente (very hot). Biissexi, thanks for the update. please post very soon. Loved it!!!!!!!
Biisexi, thanks for this cute and hot story. LOVE it.
I have to give Btete a round of aplause for stopping where she did…wow..BUT as for Tina’s entrance in the beginning..kissing Bette…AWESOME AWESOME…made me wanna shout out at that moment “YOU ROCK!” lmao…I wonder who was on the phone..one of them is about to have a terrible day-I have a sneaky idea its Bette…but ill hold on until your next chappy..for how long..aaahh…not to sure…so get crackin lady lol..thanks bi for a wicked story..as always, you have not dissapointed. You really have ben one of my fav writers since i joined this site!
Tina walking in and kissing Bette….I never saw that coming..it was perfect. You have got to be the queen of tease at the moment…damn…I can’t wait for the next chapter…I see that t_daze is all ready crackin the whip…so I will just sit back and wait. : )
am i first to comment? wow… as always an excellent update! your writing is dynamite and B&T are sexy and sincere! so sweet really. You wrote the rest of the gangs reactions perfectly shanes reaction reminded me of season 1 end of pilot when she sees B&T in the morning… i imagine that smile she gives in this story! well done my friend
How on earth are these two going to get any work done being all flustered like that??? Loved how the gang found out, I can just imagine that happening! Love this and can’t wait for more:)
There is something people must suffer at this contemporary days.Havent you hard about a “circunstancial deafness”?It´s, for example, when a cell rings and you just can´t listen to it – when you are…making out, having sex,…Bette must do an effort to be deaf at some moments :) Great chap! Thank you, dear,also for the kind pm.
Loved how tina came out to the gang! Yeh! Love this update… hot make-out session! :)
Awww they are so cute and sweet, love them. Please post more, thanks!