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Timid Devotion (Part 14)
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"… Yes," Tina finally answered, earning a look of disbelief from Bette and nervous laughter.
"Are you kidding? … Is that a joke?" Bette asked, suddenly feeling breathless and wishing she didn’t have to focus so much on her driving.
"Well, I’m not saying … that … yet … I’m just saying that maybe you can let go a little …" Tina smiled, reaching out to hold Bette’s hand. "I feel bad that you always have to stop it, you know?"
Bette’s smile grew, "Really? Are you sure?"
"It can’t be that hard," Tina teased, giving Bette’s hand a squeeze.
"Oh god," Bette chuckled, "Yeah, keep thinking that."
"But I can try too, right?" Tina asked as they stopped at a light, "I mean, I want to be fair."
Bette glanced over at her and it was the sweetest sight, Tina’s face lit up with hope and belief in her own control. She took a deep breath as the light turned green, and eased on the gas again.
"And what happens if I … kiss your neck?" Bette teased, wondering how Tina would last.
"Heyyy," Tina pouted with a smile, "I can control myself!"
Bette chuckled, "If that’s what you want to do, I’m all for it. Let’s try it that way then."
Tina smiled with victory and sat back in her seat again, relaxing without difficulty.
It wasn’t long until they arrived at Tina’s appartment. Bette had been enjoying the peaceful silence of the night as she looked over to the angel at her side. Tina had fallen asleep in the comfort of Bette’s company. She loved that Tina felt so at ease around her, but also knew she would probably feel bad for having fallen asleep.
Bette took a few more moments to drink the sight in before putting her hand over Tina’s and squeezing gently.
Tina moaned softly and shifted in her seat. The brunette rubbed her hand over the back of Tina’s until she finally opened her eyes. She jumped as she realized she had just been sleeping.
"Ahh! … Oh sorry …" Tina started, rubbing her head, "Sorry Bette. I guess I was really tired."
Bette smiled, "It was really adorable."
Tina blushed, "I really don’t even know how to thank you. It was so sweet of you to just drop by and help me out like that."
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I love this story. I love the sweetness and caring attitude they both have for each other. It’s funny seeing them trying to keep their libidos in check.
Slow and tender. Great!
that was soooooooooo sweet i love itttttt i love how sweet tina is and bette ur so in love i cant stop ,my goffy smile when i read ur story. bette is such a romantic
That was so cute. I am glad that Bette let Tina know that she is her girlfriend. I love the tenderness. =) PPS!!
that was a really sweet chapter! love the pace of this story!
I love both your stories, this one for the sweetness and the anticipation, and the other one for what else — the plain hotness.
How beautiful was Bette to go all the way back into the city to pick up Tina, when she couldn’t get a cab. Great update. PPVS
haha no work today got to enjoy it and just see how cute these two are.
awe how sweet was bette so adorable! tina to funny! :)PPS
Slow and tender….I love it! PPS
AH sooo sweet! It meltsy heart. Bit boy does Bette have an iron will I’d be dying
Beautifully tender – these two just ooze softness together. When Tina loses her fear about their first time together, I know it will be indescribly beautiful. Fantastic writing!
Great Update… love their sweetness together and trying to behave. Thank you :)
So sweet – great update as always ! I loved the part “Do you want me to stop controlling my urges?” – Hey just the fact that they are even talking about urges is a big step! These two have so much un-spoken love between them it is heart warming to read! Thank you for your stories! PPS
I’m getting diabetes as we speak here (well, as I read)…It would be cool if they had their first night together on the Earth Hour… xD with all the lights off…(that, or a zombie appears…hmm)
Been hooked to this story from the beginning, love the adorableness of these two and the story flows along at a perfect pace :) Looove it. Also can’t wait to read the chapter you commented about earlier :P i’ll take it as a compliment that our chapters sound so similar lol Keep em’ coming!
Tina is so lucky that Bette is her girlfriend. Bette made an effort to get Tina home safely. So Bette and Tina are now official GIRLFRIENDS.
Love it love it love it! Can’t wait for more!!! :)
too danged cute!!! loved it.
Awww Bette’s adorable! Loving both your stories sweetie – Cant wait for more PPVS xx
Oh bi…what can I say…your writing..especially of their characters is something that pulled me to your stories in the first place. Having being one of the first authors I read, I gained my confidence to write…and everytime I read a story from you, you renew that faith!tahnks for that babe!
Hey, dear…SOoooo cute…. :)
I like Tina am very tired right now seeings it’s 1:30 in the morning, but I saw you posted and I had to read! Bette is Tina’s knight in shinning armor! lol Can’t wait for the next chappie:)
They are so sweet and cute, love the way Bette with Tina. Please post more, thanks!
Bette going to pick up the oh so tired Tina was so sweet. I love this story. Thanks for the post!