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Timid Devotion (Part 15)
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Tina slid her shorts down until they pooled at her ankles and then she kicked them onto a lounging chair. She turned with a big smile, "Let’s swim!"
Bette met her eyes with an amused smile, but still couldn’t speak. She made her way outside, following Tina in a trance. As the sun spilled onto her, she looked out and saw Tina slowly stepping into the water on the stairs.
"Are you coming in?" she asked, knowing just how evil she was being.
Bette watched the blonde’s toned thighs touch the water, causing ripples to form in the pool. She tried her best not to stare, but she was so excited, it was proving very difficult.
"Tina," she started, clearing her throat, "I … umm …" she mumbled, wishing she didn’t feel so weak as she took a step forward.
"You might wanna change into a bathing suit," Tina chuckled, winking soon after, "I’ll wait for you right here. Just don’t be too long."
Bette nodded with a smile and disappeared into the house. ‘What the hell is going on? Is she trying to torture me?’ Bette screamed in her mind, finding her own bikini and changing much faster than usual.
Tina only had to wait a few minutes before Bette appeared again. This time she was wearing a very trendy black bikini that showed off her perfectly formed body.
Now it was Tina’s turn to stare. She straightened up and stared at Bette with a look of interest and desire. She had never felt so strongly for a person in all of her life – man or woman. Her lips parted at the sight of Bette’s body revealed.
Bette walked over to the stairs and stepped all the way in, leaving Tina on the stairs.
"So, you like swimming?" Bette smiled, turning to face Tina with her abdomen above the water.
"I … d-do …" Tina stuttered, smiling at her own mistake and blushing.
Bette was trying to hide how utterly lost she was at the sight of Tina in that bikini. It was light blue and exposed more than Bette had seen of her before. She took it all in and was extremely thankful for the water, because she was sure she was soaked from the sight before her.
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tina isn’t ready yet soon though!! very soon! :)PPS
They are adorable together but Tina has to be willing to get diiiirty w/Bette. Tina’s still nervous silly w/Bette.
i bow for you! this chapter was amasing! you described their feelings so well!! thanks! PPS :)
you already know my answer don’t you? never TOO evil,really..it seems to be an equal dose of lustful teasing…done in only the style you do SOOOO well…thank you, they are sooo cute
My goodness sooo cute sweet sweet torture but man will their sex be explosively sweet! I always look forward to your updates the stories are just amazing! Ok so bring on the dancing! ;) PPS
Bette is much stronger then me its like she is in a perpetual state or arousal…
Bette is being really good and Tina is so so naughty…
To tease or not to tease…that is the question. Geez…these two are killing each other…and the rest of us in the process! Personally, I think they both are ready to implode from sheer lust. Now that they have both confessed their love for one another, I hope Tina begins to feel more comfortable with the idea of sharing herself with Bette. I don’t know how much longer I can bear the tortuous teasing…
Great update.. don’t know who was more evil but they are so so cute together. Thank you and hope you’re feeling better :)
Tina is such a tease oh well they are lol, that was sweet and cute, they are wonderful. Please post more, thanks!
Those two are in so much trouble. Neither one have the ability to continue to stave off an assault from the other much longer. Who will give in first?
such a cute chapter….I do believe you are the tease..oh sorry..that is Tina.
They are too cute!
I should think it’s about time………
Ha! I loved it :) Your B&T are too cute together, and I have to say that your Tina is definitely a bigger tease than mine :P They weren’t too similar in the end, we clearly just both love our water lovin’, what can I say ^~ Can’t wait for the next chapter, I’m a big fan of dorky dancing, especially when it comes courtesy of Ms Kennard ;)
you had me worrying there when Tina headed for the bed… After S5 finale, dancing with these two… (i’m speechless) so, really look forward to Tina’s awesome moves! P.S. get well soon…drugs and sleep usually help but I’m pretty sure writing is the best cure (lmao)
Sweet Torture is all I can say! How much longer is Tina gonna be able to hold out, she knows she wants it to happen! PPS:)
i get it, tina is trying to kill bette and biissexi is trying to kill me…nice move!!! i dont think tina is ready…not yet but they are cute as helll, i realy realy lobe how bette is so caring for tina, its adorble and heartworming
such sweet torture! lol loved the ‘i love you’ moment. can’t wait for tina to be ready.
Still PG13? LMAO….. I thought I would at least find an “R”……. Awesome as always :)
Well this chapter actually had me laughing a bit. I can’t get over what a tease Tina is. But as Bette pointed out she’s curious because it’s all new. I love that Bette is so sweet, but I think she might reach her breaking point soon. Hopefully it’s the same moment Tina reaches the point of readiness. Thanks for the great chapter!
Tease yes, but so very delightful!!!!!
Tease yes, but so very delightful!!!!!
Great update. Let’s get back into the pool. Wow!!!!!! Give Bette some props for not jumping onto Tina. The temptation is enormous. I love this story. Please post soon.
I’m worried that Bette may spontaneously combust with all Tina’s teasing. Although, Tina’s doing a fine job of torturing herself as well. How adorkable is Tina with her dance moves?? Can’t wait for your next chapter.
not only is tina torturing bette, you’re torturing me too with the thoughts of how they will finally get together. keep up the good job!!
Behave is such boring word… I could never ever ever resist this way! I dont know if they´re fool or brave, I just know that I could never resist to women. Enjoyng a lot your story,miss…thanks
They said “I love you,” YEAH ! I am glad Bette couldn’t keep it in any longer! It is amazing that just the sight of Tina makes Bette lose her ability to speak – these two have it so bad for one another!Is Tina trying to test Bette’s self control? Does she want Bette to just crack and take her in a moment of passion – because I think she is really breaking Bette down! I think a straight jacket is the only way to avoid the big ‘woops’ (two of my favorite lines in this chapter) ! Tina is playing with fire here because of her lack of experience – I totally agree with Bette testing Tina’s self control – its not nice to tease – but I get that she is just trying to judge if she is ready for the next step. Maybe a little sexy dancing will put them over the end – because in my opinion its got to be close? right? PPS !
Oh the cuteness….so wonderful, and I have to sympathise with T on this one…I suck at dancoing to..but its the sucky dancers that love it the most it seems:)thanks lady for another great chapter…and the etasing, is not just between them..you killing us here woman!!
Awww…they are soo cute! =) I thought Bette was going to die from Tina’s torturing. lol I love the chemistry and the whole story! Great Job!