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Timid Devotion (Part 16)
"My hair is a mess," Tina laughed after having looked in the mirror, "I’m gonna look like a hobo."
"You can shower here," Bette offered with a smile.
Tina turned with a smile, "Oh can I now?"
"I promise I will behave," Bette nodded, "I’d say I’ve been pretty good so far."
Tina sauntered over to her. "You have been."
Bette sat on the couch with both fear and anticipation of how Tina would tease her next.
"And I would love to give you a little reward," Tina smiled, "By teasing you again. I hope you don’t mind too much."
Bette smiled and looked to Tina’s perfect body in her bikini, in desbelief that she was so lucky. "Don’t you dare."
"Don’t what?" Tina asked with a smirk, "You don’t want this?" she asked, getting down to straddle Bette on the couch.
Bette let out a silent breath and didn’t know where to put her hands. "This is bad Tina."
"You can touch me Bette," Tina smiled, "I trust you."
"I don’t trust me," Bette mumbled to herself, nearly at eye level with Tina’s breasts. "I think … maybe … I think we should change – you … you should change. And shower. And put clothes on!" She pursed her lips together after accidentally shouting the last bit.
"But I just want a kiss," Tina smiled, "And then I will change. I even brought a dress for our night of dancing."
"Oh good god," Bette breathed, closing her eyes in agony of the teasing she was forced to endure.
"It’s cute Bette," Tina explained, "Don’t worry."
Bette opened her eyes again and looked up into Tina’s eyes. ‘She has no idea how hard this is on me. It’s different when you know how good it can be. She has no idea what lesbian sex is like … just let her play if she wants to play … be patient.’ Her heart was already racing as she tried to calm down.
Tina smiled, "Hey Bette?"
"Yeah?"
"Is it … really hard on you when we’re this close? Because it’s hard on me." Tina confessed, looking into her girlfriend’s eyes for an honest answer.
"Are you kidding?" Bette chuckled, "Tina … this is killing me …"
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(47 votes, average: 3.83 out of 5)
I really hope that Tina will be ready soon. I don’t know how much longer Bette can hold out. Bette is being really sweet though, I love how she is so patient. =) PPS!!
OMG! How is Bette surviving all this endless teasing??? I am so in awe of her patience. Tina will be absolutely kicking herself for waiting so long once she finally conquers her apprehension. I just want to say…the erotic dancing is going to kill me!!! AGGHHHH! Bring it on!!!
Amazing amazing amazing writing!!! OHHHH Tina PLEASE be ready!!!! I can’t wait!!! Poor Bette! :) PPS!!!
OoooOOOooo…They’re going dancing with Tina commando? Bette’s in for the time of her life! I liked Alice’s voicemails…Haha
This is an achingly slow burn…but I like it!!!!!!
I was just thinkin’….could you give me ample warning when you decide to post “the deed”? You know I’m going to end up on the floor and I’d rather get there and wait for it than fall. LMAO
Tina may be Superman’s daughter with the ability to change that fast and in turn being Bette’s Kryptonite!
Good gracious alive, what is Tina doing to Bette. Both are going to melt into a puddle of butter with love as a topping. Maybe it is time to stretch a little further on Tina’s end of the deal.
That was great and hope Tina will be ready for the next chapter cause she is killing Bette and us here lol. Please post more, thanks!
is tina going to be ready in the next chapter or you’re still in the mood to torture us a little bit more? :) lovely update!
I’m glad that you have them taking their time. Tina still has a couple things to sort out. Soon it will fall into place, but no more advice from Alice. :) Thanks for posting!
love it, love it, love it!!
Bette is being really good! i wonder who will crack first!:)
Alice is so funny. I hope Tina gives Bette some loving some, before she explodes. They are both dressed to kill. Great post. PPS
hmmm why is tina not ready and what does she not have on under her dress….humorous
Let the teasing continue over dinner…
Brilliant Chapter – Really enjoying this story, and I say torture us some more…Imao – Its so fun to read! PPVS xx
Oh man! I don’t know who’s getting tortured .. Bette or us :) Are you going to allow them and us to finally get some relief. Thank you for posting and glad you’re feeling better :)
Wow..how do you make them so breathless,with so little effort?! It’s just keeps getting better and better..but phew!! Talk about some foreplay!! I don’t think poor Bette’s gonna make it!! And I don’t think she even really wants to at this point. Thank you my friend!!
I am such a fan! I always feel a bit happier when I see you’ve updated… Inspire me to sit down and try to write something! Anyways greatbupdate as always… I wonder what tuna said to alice? Thanks for updating!
I meant Tina by the way not tuna LOL typing on a phone is difficult apologies LOL
i love ittttttttttttt. listrn i dont thing i ever been teased like ur doinh to us in my life. bette is amazing and tina is so sweet and innocent its so lovely how bette is keeping her safe. torture us a little bit more plssssss
I actually like your teasing)))
ok I am bette to crack first…these two are lovely but killing each other or at least one of them are…Alice is being Alice…so I wonder what holding Tina back..?? Then again maybe a twirl on the dance floor with her Bette will push her in the right direction..
I bet Tina cracks first…it will be Bette’s reward for all that will-power and restraint. She does deserve an award!
Tina’s more than ready, except Alice probabaly scared the crap outta her with her advice, and Tina knowing Bette’s past probably isn’t helping either, she’s just scared she won’t please her woman the way she knows she’s gonna be pleased! Wonder how torturous dinner is gonna be…and what’s really for dessert?? PPS:)
So, she has probably never had an orgasm, huh? Interesting! Something to look forward to..
there is nothing wrong with waiting but what is alice up to? :)PPS
Aweosme as always….and its so interesting, with the two stories…how different the characters are. I am impressed you don’t get confused…lol…but I like the progress of this story, and they are so super sweet together…thanks again Bi…xxx