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Timid Devotion (Part 18)
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"Okay, but I don’t really know what to do," Tina said, taking a deep breath in. "I don’t know what to do or what to say to her about it. I can’t just say ‘Hey Bette, wanna have sex?’"
"Uhh … yeah-ya-can!" Alice said, staring at her wall.
"No!" Tina laughed, "I want it to be just as romantic as Bette has wanted it to be." She smiled up at the ceiling.
"Uhh Porter and her cheesy romance."
"Not cheesy," Tina smiled, settling deeper into the mattress. "She’s adorable."
"So what’s stopping you then?"
"Nothing really. Just last night, being in her arms and being so in love … I think a light just went on and I realized that’s what I want."
Alice smiled, "Aww my little baby’s all grown up."
"I’m not a baby!" Tina whined, rolling over onto her other side.
"Well you’ll always be my little baby," Alice teased with baby talk.
"Al," Tina groaned, "I just … what if I can’t do anything right?"
"Well, how was it with your first guy? Did it all work out?" Alice teased.
"First of all, I am not talking about that," Tina chuckled, interrupted quickly.
"Was his dick like so small it wouldn’t work?" she laughed uncontrollably.
"Al," Tina sighed with a smile, getting cut off again.
"Oh my god, you know I HAVE to know about this loser, right?"
"Al, seriously. I am not talking about this," Tina chuckled, "And second of all, I don’t know … I didn’t really worry."
"Poor guy," Alice joked.
"You’re such an ass," Tina smiled, "I don’t know … it wasn’t that special really. I mean, with Bette … I want to please her so much … more than I want to be pleased. You know?"
"Nope," Alice said, pulling out a twizzler before cracking up, "Okay I guess I get it. But I’m sure you’ll be fine Tina. You just really need to tell her though or she won’t know what the hell is wrong with you, all worried about this."
"Do you think she’s worried that I won’t be enough?" Tina asked self consciously.
"Yeah … that’s what she’s worried about," Alice said with sarcasm, biting off another piece of the candy.
"Alice, seriously, I-"
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Great story. Bette’s patience will be rewarded?
Maybe Tina will be the one who gets the teasing, now. Love every episode, thanks Biisexi.
If bette can’t make it tina should just surprise her! Are they finally going to make it happen? I hope so though I do love this sweet torture! I look forward to the next chapter as always ;)
B, you are STILL torturing me. PPS
Tina in control! Yes! Yes! Yes!
i wonder who will kill who with all this waiting Tina, Betteor maybe you will kill us! ;)
Until tomorrow… I hope Tina sets up something really nice…
can’t wait to see what you have planned for us for tomorrow night :)
You surprised me with another post YEAH! T
sorry my comment escaped on me…Tina said it all -FUCK! Well yes …eventually we all hope! This is such a sweet story..thank you for all your word and good luck on your exams!
maybe tina should plan something really nice?:)PPS
Umm Bette, I think you better make it tomorrow night, you don’t know what ya might miss! Maybe Bette is teasing Tina back right now?? PPS:)
I don’t think you understand how much I love this story! Tina is finally ready and Bette has been so patient. I wonder what Tina will have planned for Bette? I can’t wait! PPS!!
Holy Moly – two super long posts in the same weekend – you are just too good to us! THANK YOU! Ok now on the the story I guess my comment from last time still applies – so close but yet so far. Are they even any closer? Will Bette cancel their date? Will the ever unleash their desire? Will poor Bette be tortured forever? So many questions only you can answer! Please take more study breaks! PPS
well the ball is in Tina court…shoot girl..
‘oh god not another long chapter’ lol i can’t imagine anyone complaining about the long chapters This story is awesome, sweet and HOT. Still surprised that Bette is hanging in with Tina testing/teasing her so much and giddy Tina is way cute. I loved how helpful Alice was lol. can’t wait to read more thanks and good luck with the exams.p.s i can’t believe you find the time to write i felt guilty just reading when i had mine last week. pps
Study breaks are awesome :P Great chapter as always, glad that Tina finally feels ready :) Your stories make me happy, unlike my stories which kinda make me hate a lot of people :s Keep em’ coming! ^~
Guess its Tinas turn to wait this time around. Its so sweet that she’s planning to surprise Bette with it. Im sure if she lets her know she will drop anything just like that. LOL
you just love to torture us with this one don’t cha….bring it on. pps
Wow, Bette is so into Tina and Tina is loosing her body and soul. They are so into each other. Can’t wait for the big night.
Hey P…*waving from the floor* I’m just hangin’ out down here waiting for “tomorrow night”.
Oh god!!!! This is torture!!!!!!!! :)PPVVVVS!!!!!
That was great!
Now it’s Tina’s turn to plan a thoughtful, romantic surprise for Bette. I can’t wait to see what happens next. Thanks for posting!
Great Update. Love their interaction. It was so sweet. Thank you :)
Sounding like a broken record babe..But Bi This story is so amusing and awesome and leaves us all wanting more! SO on that note PPVVS! xxx
You’re the best bliss – but no more Alice – absolutely can’t stand her!! Big mouth, annoying whinger – there I’ve said it!!
I totally understand how Tina feels but it’s incredible I love the way you write my talented friend you are amazing your describtion are really so atractive and exciting I feel like I am with them in all of that thank you so much for giving us such pleasure and am really excited about how the story will continue love