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Timid Devotion (Part 18)
"No Tina. I think she’ll just be really happy that you trust her."
"Really?" Tina asked, her smile growing. "Maybe I’ll call her."
"Yeah," Alice laughed, "She’ll be the first woman to rocket herself across the city."
"Why? I shouldn’t call her?"
"Well, I think you should say it in person," Alice nodded to herself, "I mean, that way Bette can just jump you right there."
"She wouldn’t jump me," Tina said, her eyes looking around.
"I know," Alice laughed, "I’m kidding, Tina! Fuck you’re gullable. I’m sure she’ll be all cute and sweet and everything. You don’t have to worry. Just enjoy it."
"I guess," Tina sighed, "But I can’t see her today."
"Aww."
"I’m seeing her tomorrow though," Tina smiled, "And I’m really excited … but is there anything I should … know?"
Alice chuckled, "Yeah, stay away from her second drawer!"
"What does that mean?" Tina asked with curiosity.
"I’m kidding!" Alice laughed, very much enjoying herself as she took another bite of the candy. "Tina seriously, you’ll be really happy you took this next step with her."
Tina furrowed her brows at Alice’s last insinuation before smiling again. "I know."
After some more talking, the call ended and Tina got out of bed to grab something to eat. While she was at the fridge, she heard a buzz and rushed over to the door, pressing the little button, "Who is it?"
"It’s Bette."
She buzzed her in with a smile, skipping back over to the fridge. Then she stopped, realizing she was a complete mess. She was in sweats and her hair was all over the place. She ran into her room and tried to fix herself up.
The knock on the door made her frustrated, not looking any more put-together than before. She skipped back over to the door with excitement to see her girlfriend. She swung it opened and smiled.
"Hey gorgeous," Bette smiled, holding up a bag of food. "I picked some stuff up and came over for lunch. I hope you don’t mind."
"Oh no way!" Tina smiled, stepping out into the hall and wrapping her arms around Bette’s neck. "Thank you." The last conversation she had with Alice had worried her, but Bette’s presence made all of it disappear. She was so at ease with this woman.
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(58 votes, average: 3.50 out of 5)
Great story. Bette’s patience will be rewarded?
Maybe Tina will be the one who gets the teasing, now. Love every episode, thanks Biisexi.
If bette can’t make it tina should just surprise her! Are they finally going to make it happen? I hope so though I do love this sweet torture! I look forward to the next chapter as always ;)
B, you are STILL torturing me. PPS
Tina in control! Yes! Yes! Yes!
i wonder who will kill who with all this waiting Tina, Betteor maybe you will kill us! ;)
Until tomorrow… I hope Tina sets up something really nice…
can’t wait to see what you have planned for us for tomorrow night :)
You surprised me with another post YEAH! T
sorry my comment escaped on me…Tina said it all -FUCK! Well yes …eventually we all hope! This is such a sweet story..thank you for all your word and good luck on your exams!
maybe tina should plan something really nice?:)PPS
Umm Bette, I think you better make it tomorrow night, you don’t know what ya might miss! Maybe Bette is teasing Tina back right now?? PPS:)
I don’t think you understand how much I love this story! Tina is finally ready and Bette has been so patient. I wonder what Tina will have planned for Bette? I can’t wait! PPS!!
Holy Moly – two super long posts in the same weekend – you are just too good to us! THANK YOU! Ok now on the the story I guess my comment from last time still applies – so close but yet so far. Are they even any closer? Will Bette cancel their date? Will the ever unleash their desire? Will poor Bette be tortured forever? So many questions only you can answer! Please take more study breaks! PPS
well the ball is in Tina court…shoot girl..
‘oh god not another long chapter’ lol i can’t imagine anyone complaining about the long chapters This story is awesome, sweet and HOT. Still surprised that Bette is hanging in with Tina testing/teasing her so much and giddy Tina is way cute. I loved how helpful Alice was lol. can’t wait to read more thanks and good luck with the exams.p.s i can’t believe you find the time to write i felt guilty just reading when i had mine last week. pps
Study breaks are awesome :P Great chapter as always, glad that Tina finally feels ready :) Your stories make me happy, unlike my stories which kinda make me hate a lot of people :s Keep em’ coming! ^~
Guess its Tinas turn to wait this time around. Its so sweet that she’s planning to surprise Bette with it. Im sure if she lets her know she will drop anything just like that. LOL
you just love to torture us with this one don’t cha….bring it on. pps
Wow, Bette is so into Tina and Tina is loosing her body and soul. They are so into each other. Can’t wait for the big night.
Hey P…*waving from the floor* I’m just hangin’ out down here waiting for “tomorrow night”.
Oh god!!!! This is torture!!!!!!!! :)PPVVVVS!!!!!
That was great!
Now it’s Tina’s turn to plan a thoughtful, romantic surprise for Bette. I can’t wait to see what happens next. Thanks for posting!
Great Update. Love their interaction. It was so sweet. Thank you :)
Sounding like a broken record babe..But Bi This story is so amusing and awesome and leaves us all wanting more! SO on that note PPVVS! xxx
You’re the best bliss – but no more Alice – absolutely can’t stand her!! Big mouth, annoying whinger – there I’ve said it!!
I totally understand how Tina feels but it’s incredible I love the way you write my talented friend you are amazing your describtion are really so atractive and exciting I feel like I am with them in all of that thank you so much for giving us such pleasure and am really excited about how the story will continue love