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Timid Devotion (Part 22)
Bette awoke with a grin. All of her memories from the night before brought a beaming happiness back to her as she closed her eyes again. ‘Can this be real?’ She turned slowly and smiled at the back of Tina’s head, her hair splayed all over the pillow. ‘I’m the luckiest woman in the entire world.’ She heard Tina take in a deep breath and let it out, shifting in her sleep. She just admired Tina, relaxing completely with a smile.
She reached her hand out and touched Tina’s back softly, tracing her fingers down. As Tina shifted under the gentle touch, Bette felt the muscles in her back reacting to the caress. She moved over the blonde quietly and kissed her back softly, smiling as Tina shifted again, this time turning her head towards Bette.
The brunette didn’t stop. Gently up and down the length of Tina’s back, her fingers touching the soft skin.
Tina awoke to the touch, so soft it felt like a tickle. She smiled when she looked up to Bette’s expression. "Hey," she said sleepily.
Bette placed her whole hand onto Tina’s back and looked into her girlfriend’s hazel eyes. "Morning beautiful."
Tina’s smile multiplied as she closed her eyes and took another deep breath in, "Oh my god … last night …"
Bette chuckled at her gleeful expression. "I know, T. It was amazing."
"Ahhh!" Tina giggled, hiding her head in the pillow and rolling over so that she could curl up and hide against Bette’s chest. "I still can’t believe how good it was," Tina mumbled.
Bette chuckled and held her there, kissing her hair, "Well, I’m gonna jump in the shower quickly, unless you want to go first."
"Ooh," Tina smiled, bringing her head up, "But we can shower together, right?"
Bette chuckled, "We could."
"Oh my god! Let’s shower together!" Tina giggled, reaching her hands up to touch Bette’s sides. Her touch moved around to her back, roaming over the toned structure of the brunette’s body.
"I would love to," Bette smiled, combing her hands through Tina’s hair.
Tina rolled so that she was ontop of the brunette, straddling her as she placed her hands on Bette’s chest with a smile, "I can’t wait to see you all wet … mmm …"
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Sorry to hear you’ve been sick, but thanks for these two chapters. Take it easy. And if you think you are catching bugs from your characters, then maybe stay away from writing about anything really nasty (e.g. bubonic plague) just in case…
Sorry that you are sick, maybe it’s Jodi-itis or kelly-itis. If you don’t mention them in your chapters, you will deifintely get better soon. LOL Feel better very soon. Drink a lot of liquid, it works for me, whiskey, vodka, rum, etc….. or a nice hot bath, sweat out whatever you have. Anyway, awesome post. You know I love this story. Tina is one HORNY a Bi**h. Get well soon and post soon after. LOL
Get well soon, teasing again r u…shame, shame…
ok again forgiving the teasing cause you been ill..but when you are back 100% no more forgiving. LOL Thanks for the updates
This was quite sweet to say the least. I like the lightness you have written into this chapter, having the girls get a little playful in the shower! Always fun when that happens. Thanks for the chapter, and I hope you are feeling better soon.
Aw im sorry to hear youre not feeling well! Thank you for postingthis it was sweet and as always wonderfully written!!!! Feel better soon :)
Take care babe – can’t have one of my favourite writers being crook (Aussie for sick)
Ahhh simply the best way to take a shower! PPS:) and get well soon!
Hope you get well soon. Love how they are discovering their new-found love and taking time to explore each other. Take good care and rest well.
Hope you feel better soon. That was an awesome chapter Tna is learning very quickly. Can’t wait for the next chapter. PWYC
that was amazing my friend , i love this story very much Cami, they are so sweet together. Thank you so much and post soon My lovely friend
love how excited Tina is :) please take care of yourself. we’ll be here when you’re feeling better!
Thank you, I love your stories. Take care of yourself and stay in bed for a while.
Oh Bi I’m so sorry to hear that you’re not feeling well. Please take care of yourself. I love this story. I loved the reference to the Adams Family and Bette’s comment to herself about Tina being the future mother of her children. I enjoy your stories so much…I hope you feel better soon.
I like the shower scene. Playing that turned into passion that seems to lead to two bodies that are on overload. Sorry that you have been ill.
Get well soon! Great post.
hoooo lucky u that theres a med st’ in here, whats the probla, hun? and thats for the chapter tina in soooooo sweet and bette gosh have it bad lol. i loved the joining showers….VERY MUCH SO
I hope you feel better soon! I really love this story. It’s nice to see that Tina is gaining some confidence, but she’s still getting used to everything. Thanks for posting!!!
Tina’s excitment is so cute and Bette seems movingly tender! Hope you feel better soon!
thanks for the update! feel better
take care, plenty of Vit C and flush out with lots of water [not too hot, that kills the vitamins] laced with lemon, cayenne, garlic and olive oil if u have cold or flu symptoms. Loving the story.
So very cute!!! Thanks for writing, I hope you’ll feel better soon!!! I love your fics so much!! PPVVVS!!!
Feel better soon! nothing like a shower :)PPS
Sorry to hear that you’ve not been well and are sick. You need plenty of rest and more scenes of Tina and Bette like this.:) Do that care and get some rest. Hope you’ve been to the doctors! Great chapter by the way. Love the morning after conversation and the little action in the bathroom that you stoped suddenly :( But will forgive you cause you’re not well :) Take care!
What a lovely chapter!!! Happy to see Bette and Tina so sweet. I so hope you get to feeling better soon. Thank you
Why you sending your sicknesses here? Lol…know how you feel hun…take it easy..ok!Showers..gotta love them…especially when our two ladies are in there…all wet;)thanks lady for another great one!