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Timid Devotion (Part 22)
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"Mmm I really like your derriere too," Tina smiled, putting her hands on Bette’s lips as she heard her girlfriend chuckle.
"Oh Morticia … you spoke French!" she joked, taking Tina’s arm and kissing up to her elbow.
"Bette," Tina laughed, finally looking into her eyes again, "But I do."
"Like my … derriere?" Bette asked with a smile.
"Well I don’t like some other words for it," Tina said, pulling Bette closer.
"Mmm me neither," Bette smirked, leaning in to press her lips to Tina’s hot skin. She could feel the water falling down Tina’s shoulder and around her mouth.
"You do so," Tina smiled, closing her eyes at the sensation. "I just … I just don’t like them."
"Mmm then neither do I," Bette whispered, taking Tina’s earlobe between her teeth and gently biting it before kissing down her neck again.
Tina was melting at the sensation, and couldn’t even remember what she had been saying. All of this felt too good. Her body was on overload.
Bette smiled at the way Tina’s wet hair fell over her shoulders and became wavy with the temperature of the water. She held Tina in her arms and enjoyed her warmth even more so than the shower.
"Do you have any idea how much I love you?" Bette asked with her eyes closed, letting her hands travel softly over Tina’s curves.
"Is it close to how much I love you?" Tina grinned, turning slowly to face Bette. Her eyes lit up when she watched the water cascade over Bette’s shoulders and over her breasts. Tina brought her hands up and followed the path of water with her hands.
Bette looked into Tina’s eyes and adored her expression. She had always been so shy, and now the blonde was allowing herself to enjoy what she liked. It was such a beautiful sight.
"Bette … after feeling that … umm …" Tina started, speaking very quietly.
"Orgasm?" Bette smirked, feeling Tina take her nipples inbetween her fingers.
"Yes," Tina whispered, just barely audible over the sound of the water dropping onto the floor of the shower. "… I can’t believe it …"
Bette could see the amazement in Tina’s eyes as she reached out with her own hands with a smile, very much enjoying Tina’s touch. "I can’t either."
"But you’ve felt that before, right?" Tina asked, unable to wait as she dipped down and took one of Bette’s nipples in her mouth, smoothing her tongue over it patiently, feeling droplets of water on her face, and a flow of water passing over her lips. She just closed her eyes and continued to pleasure Bette that way, keeping her hand on Bette’s other breast.
"Not … like that …" Bette whispered back, breathless whenever Tina used her tongue. She trembled gently. "Never like that."
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Sorry to hear you’ve been sick, but thanks for these two chapters. Take it easy. And if you think you are catching bugs from your characters, then maybe stay away from writing about anything really nasty (e.g. bubonic plague) just in case…
Sorry that you are sick, maybe it’s Jodi-itis or kelly-itis. If you don’t mention them in your chapters, you will deifintely get better soon. LOL Feel better very soon. Drink a lot of liquid, it works for me, whiskey, vodka, rum, etc….. or a nice hot bath, sweat out whatever you have. Anyway, awesome post. You know I love this story. Tina is one HORNY a Bi**h. Get well soon and post soon after. LOL
Get well soon, teasing again r u…shame, shame…
ok again forgiving the teasing cause you been ill..but when you are back 100% no more forgiving. LOL Thanks for the updates
This was quite sweet to say the least. I like the lightness you have written into this chapter, having the girls get a little playful in the shower! Always fun when that happens. Thanks for the chapter, and I hope you are feeling better soon.
Aw im sorry to hear youre not feeling well! Thank you for postingthis it was sweet and as always wonderfully written!!!! Feel better soon :)
Take care babe – can’t have one of my favourite writers being crook (Aussie for sick)
Ahhh simply the best way to take a shower! PPS:) and get well soon!
Hope you get well soon. Love how they are discovering their new-found love and taking time to explore each other. Take good care and rest well.
Hope you feel better soon. That was an awesome chapter Tna is learning very quickly. Can’t wait for the next chapter. PWYC
that was amazing my friend , i love this story very much Cami, they are so sweet together. Thank you so much and post soon My lovely friend
love how excited Tina is :) please take care of yourself. we’ll be here when you’re feeling better!
Thank you, I love your stories. Take care of yourself and stay in bed for a while.
Oh Bi I’m so sorry to hear that you’re not feeling well. Please take care of yourself. I love this story. I loved the reference to the Adams Family and Bette’s comment to herself about Tina being the future mother of her children. I enjoy your stories so much…I hope you feel better soon.
I like the shower scene. Playing that turned into passion that seems to lead to two bodies that are on overload. Sorry that you have been ill.
Get well soon! Great post.
hoooo lucky u that theres a med st’ in here, whats the probla, hun? and thats for the chapter tina in soooooo sweet and bette gosh have it bad lol. i loved the joining showers….VERY MUCH SO
I hope you feel better soon! I really love this story. It’s nice to see that Tina is gaining some confidence, but she’s still getting used to everything. Thanks for posting!!!
Tina’s excitment is so cute and Bette seems movingly tender! Hope you feel better soon!
thanks for the update! feel better
take care, plenty of Vit C and flush out with lots of water [not too hot, that kills the vitamins] laced with lemon, cayenne, garlic and olive oil if u have cold or flu symptoms. Loving the story.
So very cute!!! Thanks for writing, I hope you’ll feel better soon!!! I love your fics so much!! PPVVVS!!!
Feel better soon! nothing like a shower :)PPS
Sorry to hear that you’ve not been well and are sick. You need plenty of rest and more scenes of Tina and Bette like this.:) Do that care and get some rest. Hope you’ve been to the doctors! Great chapter by the way. Love the morning after conversation and the little action in the bathroom that you stoped suddenly :( But will forgive you cause you’re not well :) Take care!
What a lovely chapter!!! Happy to see Bette and Tina so sweet. I so hope you get to feeling better soon. Thank you
Why you sending your sicknesses here? Lol…know how you feel hun…take it easy..ok!Showers..gotta love them…especially when our two ladies are in there…all wet;)thanks lady for another great one!