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Timid Devotion (Part 24)
Tina opened her eyes to the sound of knocking and she smoothed her hands over the sheets until she felt warmth and turned to Bette who was laying beside her. They were entangled in bed after a long couple of sessions of lovemaking, and both women were exhausted. Happy, but exhausted.
Again the knocking persisted. Bette sat up, leaning over to kiss Tina’s cheek before moving over to the edge of the bed. "I’ll get it."
Tina smiled at how sweet her girlfriend was with her and turned her head to curl up in the warm spot she had.
Bette stepped into some pyjama pants and a tank top to answer the door. She stopped in her tracks with a deep sigh when she noticed Alice in the little window of the door. She thought about just walking back into the bedroom, but was brought to reality when her friend spoke.
"I can see you," Alice said with her hands on her hips. "Come on, open up!"
Bette shook her head and walked up to the door, opening it slightly. "Yes?" She brought her hand up to shield her eyes from the bright sun.
"What the fuck? Pj’s at three in the afternoon?" Alice asked, raising her hands up in question.
"And what should I be wearing on a Saturday afternoon Alice?"
"Okay, whatever Porter," Alice started, earning a raised eyebrow from the brunette, "I just came here because I was trying to get back to Tina about her message and then I really started worrying because I called like … a few times and-"
"A few?"
"… Okay, whatever. And she wasn’t home." Alice said, crossing her arms against her chest.
"Or maybe she just didn’t want to talk to you," Bette smiled, crossing her own arms.
"If it were you – fine. But this is Tina we’re talking about. Sweet Tina," Alice said, stepping up to get inside.
"Sorry Al," Bette said, standing in the way, "I just … I’m kind of busy right now."
"Busy?" Alice asked with sudden suspicion. "Hmm …"
"Stop analyzing it," Bette said, shaking her head and dropping her arms. "Will you please just go right now? I’ll explain later."
"Sure …" Alice said, bringing her hand underneath her chin and squinting her eyes.
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(54 votes, average: 3.85 out of 5)
omg! it’s so hot in here. that was freakin awesome!
Wow. So much for the shy little Tina that started this tale. Amazing!
funny Alice is less child like in this one…hehehaha
Woah, I’m the one who’s hot now!
Damn! Now that is one hot way to have breakfast (LOL) I’m pretty sure Tin a has found her calling and uif anyone is unsure of what that calling may be….it’s Bette Porter. great update. post soon.
I love it!!!! Glad you are feeling better. Thank you
Love your story as ALWAYS.Thank you.
OMG, mama mia :)PPS
biisexi, am I missing a page here??? :pHey girl, glad you got your sexy, sassy writing back. Really missed yah. PPVS!
OMG!!! that was damn hot, loved it! They are so sweet and sexy together. Loved the surprise ‘attack’ in the kitchen. Beautifully written. PPS!!!
Oh Wow, surprise attacks are really great. TAkes your breath away but man, what a way to go. Thanks for posting.
Wow, now that was a quick response on Tina’s part. Glad that both Bette and Tina enjoy that part of their love making. Alice always has to know what is going on in her friends’ life.
wow!! that was amazing!! incredibly hot!! wow!
Holy freak, it getting hot in here, I need something to cool me down lol!
Wow Tina certainly got braver after that talk! Thanks for posting a great update! I was missing this story.
I’ll say fck’n purrfect…
Yay you’re back! Hope you’ve been doing fine. I like rabbits tibette. I’m sure people wouldn’t mind more of this. Hahaha.. take care now.
I’m so glad you’re back. I really love your 2 stories. I’ve been spending my time rereading them while I waited for you to continue.
Hey, Bi, glad you are feeling better. Happy to see you haven’t missed a beat. They are still a HOT and SEXY couple. I’m sad to see this end.
Yes,fucking perfect! :o)
hoo my…hoo my i need air, i need a shower hoo my godddddddddd!!! can i marry your fucking perfact tina??????
Welcome back!!! Yay! I love this story. Let me rephrase I love all of your stories. Tina is just too cute and surprising so hot and f-ing perfect indeed!
Welcome back! This was an awesome upate. :) I need a cold shower but before I go what happened to our shy Tina :) Thanks for this great update.
SO…WORTH…WAITING…FOR!! welcome back…:)
Bi is BACK! I’ve missed your stories..Note to self, do not read NC-17, specifically ones written by B.I.S. at work. Jeez Bi I almost fell out of the “company car”. How embarrassing would that be?
Yep our girl’s back