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Timid Devotion (Part 24)
"Bette …" Tina smiled, pretending to shoo away Bette’s hand, but she really wanted her to explore further.
"You’re so perfect it scares me," Bette chuckled, earning a light slap on her arm.
"Heyyy, I don’t wanna scare you," Tina scowled as she turned to Bette, her expression only seeming humorous to the brunette.
"Baby, even your first time with a woman … I couldn’t – still can’t – believe how amazing you were."
"But I could be bad," Tina said, making Bette laugh before she realized what she had said. "I meant I’m not flawless, you pervert!"
Bette chuckled, rolling over onto the blonde. "You couldn’t be a bad lover if you tried baby."
"I could so," Tina said weakly, smiling as she brought her hand between Bette’s legs without her noticing before she felt the touch.
"Ah …" Bette’s breath was taken when she felt Tina’s fingers on her.
"Tell me something you don’t like," Tina giggled, rubbing her fingers up and down over Bette’s clit before she pulled them back away.
"I don’t like it when you stop," Bette breathed, looking into Tina’s eyes with wonderment and happiness. In that moment, she could see they were meant to be together.
Tina kissed her lightly on the lips before getting up and throwing a shirt on.
"What? … Where-"
"I’m hungry," Tina shouted over her shoulder as she turned down the hall, "Don’t move! I’ll make something."
"Mmm … my personal sexy maid," Bette teased, watching as Tina peeked her head back into the door of her room.
"Just for that, I’m only bringing you vegetables."
Bette chuckled as Tina disappeared again, "Nooo … I’m sorry." She got up with some difficulty, before following the blonde into the kitchen. "Just kidding baby."
"You’d better be just kidding," Tina smiled, shaking her head.
Bette came up behind her and hugged her girlfriend. "I love you so much baby."
As Tina brought some food out of the fridge, she turned her head slightly with a smile, "Babe?"
"Yeah?"
"What does it feel like to you when you’re going down on me?"
The boldness of Tina’s question surprised Bette, but seeing the blonde’s curiosity urged her to answer. "Uh … I love it."
"But what does it feel like?" Tina asked, turning around in Bette’s arms.
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(54 votes, average: 3.85 out of 5)
omg! it’s so hot in here. that was freakin awesome!
Wow. So much for the shy little Tina that started this tale. Amazing!
funny Alice is less child like in this one…hehehaha
Woah, I’m the one who’s hot now!
Damn! Now that is one hot way to have breakfast (LOL) I’m pretty sure Tin a has found her calling and uif anyone is unsure of what that calling may be….it’s Bette Porter. great update. post soon.
I love it!!!! Glad you are feeling better. Thank you
Love your story as ALWAYS.Thank you.
OMG, mama mia :)PPS
biisexi, am I missing a page here??? :pHey girl, glad you got your sexy, sassy writing back. Really missed yah. PPVS!
OMG!!! that was damn hot, loved it! They are so sweet and sexy together. Loved the surprise ‘attack’ in the kitchen. Beautifully written. PPS!!!
Oh Wow, surprise attacks are really great. TAkes your breath away but man, what a way to go. Thanks for posting.
Wow, now that was a quick response on Tina’s part. Glad that both Bette and Tina enjoy that part of their love making. Alice always has to know what is going on in her friends’ life.
wow!! that was amazing!! incredibly hot!! wow!
Holy freak, it getting hot in here, I need something to cool me down lol!
Wow Tina certainly got braver after that talk! Thanks for posting a great update! I was missing this story.
I’ll say fck’n purrfect…
Yay you’re back! Hope you’ve been doing fine. I like rabbits tibette. I’m sure people wouldn’t mind more of this. Hahaha.. take care now.
I’m so glad you’re back. I really love your 2 stories. I’ve been spending my time rereading them while I waited for you to continue.
Hey, Bi, glad you are feeling better. Happy to see you haven’t missed a beat. They are still a HOT and SEXY couple. I’m sad to see this end.
Yes,fucking perfect! :o)
hoo my…hoo my i need air, i need a shower hoo my godddddddddd!!! can i marry your fucking perfact tina??????
Welcome back!!! Yay! I love this story. Let me rephrase I love all of your stories. Tina is just too cute and surprising so hot and f-ing perfect indeed!
Welcome back! This was an awesome upate. :) I need a cold shower but before I go what happened to our shy Tina :) Thanks for this great update.
SO…WORTH…WAITING…FOR!! welcome back…:)
Bi is BACK! I’ve missed your stories..Note to self, do not read NC-17, specifically ones written by B.I.S. at work. Jeez Bi I almost fell out of the “company car”. How embarrassing would that be?
Yep our girl’s back