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Timid Devotion (Part 6)
They were both entranced in the moment, staring into each other’s eyes.
‘Kiss her, go for it,’ Tina ordered in her mind, althought she held the same position. Her heart began to race, but she forgot about everything else when she looked into those eyes. She wanted Bette’s lips more than anything right now, but wasn’t sure if she could muster up the courage to lean in for her first kiss with a woman.
‘Mmm I need those lips,’ Bette smiled to herself as her mind started racing, ‘I hope she wants me to kiss her.’ She threw away her doubts and decided to go for it before the moment passed. She leaned it slightly and happily met Tina’s lips on her way over.
Tina closed her eyes as she felt those beautiful lips press against her own. ‘Uhhh this feeling … I love this feeling,’ she thought to herself. That was the only thing that was running through her mind. Nothing else would fit alongside her passion and ability to lose herself in that moment.
Bette enjoyed every second, the moment filled with simplicity. She was kissing Tina and Tina was kissing her back. Although it was a soft kiss, there was already tension. Bette was melting in her place as she felt herself pull back. ‘That had been at least three seconds’ she thought, excited that Tina hadn’t pulled away.
Tina was filled with emotions, her heart pounding so loud she could hear it. She smiled as she drew back and looked up to Bette. She suddenly knew what she had been missing all her life. And she found herself with just one kiss. ‘This is so right,’ she thought to herself.
‘Oh my god, that look,’ Bette smiled to herself, ‘She wants me.’ "Umm," Bette started with a big smile, "Do you want me to show you around a bit more? There’s one collection that is absolutely wonderful."
"Yeah," Tina nodded with a beaming smile as well. Although she was speaking, all she could think about was Bette’s lips and that wonderful kiss. She couldn’t stop smiling, and she knew she probably looked like an idiot, but she couldn’t control it.
After they had reached the collection, they shared their thoughts, both minds in another place.
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(44 votes, average: 4.25 out of 5)
Ah, that rush of first love…..intoxicating.
nothing like the feeling of new love :) love the update! keep it coming!
That was very sweet. This shy Tina is very sexy.
Giddy like a school girl, yup that’s the rush of love! PPS:)
I have to agree with the other comments – this was such a sweet, feel good chapter – just brings a smile to your face! I am so happy that they got the nerve up to kiss – and more than once! I can’t wait to read more – and you are amazing by the way – both your stories are my favorite – and I love that you post them together! You Rock! PPS
tina’s turn to ask bette on a date!! love it! :)PPS
Now that was sweet. I take it Tina’s friend Meg knows about her being into women. Bette wants to take it slow and do everything right and Tina seems to know exactly what she wants to do. We don’t really know what if This is Tina’s first female relationship. PS
There’s nothing quite like a new crush no matter what age you are. Love. More please.
I’m already want date #2 that was so sweet! PPS!
Loved yet another chapter of yours!! This is a really great story! I can’t wait to hear what Alice has to say about this! lol PPS!! Great job!
Sweet chapter. Love this story. Thanks for posting!
They are so cute and sweet, Tina is funny! Please more, thanks!
Really love this story…great chapter… Please post when you can :)
so sweet love this story and youre other ones as well!!
Good greif..you wrote that so well it reminded me of the first kiss I ever had with a woman…oh the butterflies that swirl in your tummy..its the best sensation in the world. Thanks for the memory love;)
love it when Shy Tina takes the initiative …and Bette is so sweet so understanding with butterflies and all..
What a sweet chapter…they both have it bad.
very nice… now it on to date # 2… i wonder who starts he kissing first.. i think it will be tina…
wow, that brought back some personal memories. So happy for Tina…and Bette, of course.
Cute Cute Cute!
Love IT!!!! Thank you