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Timid Devotion (Part 6)
"Thanks for umm … showing me around," Tina said nervously as Bette pulled out of the parking spot.
"You can call it a date if you want," Bette smiled, driving down the street cautiously. After all, she had precious cargo.
"Okay," Tina beamed, trying to stop looking so goofy.
After some small talk in the car, they had finally reached Tina’s apartment.
"I had a wonderful time," Tina said genuinely with a soft smile.
"I can walk you to the door if you want," Bette offered, taking the keys out of the ignition.
"Sure," Tina smiled, getting out and walking with Bette to the door.
When they got there, they just looked at each other.
"I had a wonderful night too," Bette nodded with a smile, wanting more than anything to feel those lips again, but she knew Tina was shy.
Just as she was wondering when she should lean in, she saw Tina move closer. She smiled and leaned in as well, surprised to see Tina take the initiative. This time the kiss felt deeper, even though their mouths were still closed. Suddenly, Bette felt Tina’s hands in her hair and she instantly loved that feeling. She let her hand brush againt the side of Tina’s face, feeling completely lost in the kiss.
Tina never wanted to pull away, but thought she should now before she really loses it. She resistantly pulled her hands away and her body as well, her lips being the last to follow.
When the two women were standing face to face they could see the desire in each other’s eyes.
"I’m umm," Bette started with a smile, completely thrown off at Tina’s unexpected instigation of passion, "I should go."
"Yeah," Tina breathed, wishing she could feel Bette’s lips again.
"You have a good night," Bette smiled as she made her way to the car.
"You too," Tina smiled back before opening the door and waving to Bette.
As Bette drove away, she let out a breath of laughter. "Pleasant surprise."
Tina smiled as she watched Bette’s car drive away. She ran upstairs to her apartment with the biggest smile, flying up to her place. Once she was inside, she called Alice immediately, but then remembered Alice didn’t even know she was into women. Instead, she called her friend Megan from back at home. She needed to talk to somebody about this. She dialed the number almost impossibly fast.
"Hello," a voice answered, sounding groggy.
"Meg?" Tina asked with a smile.
"Mmm hmm?"
"It’s Tina."
"Oh hey, Tina," Megan smiled, waking herself up quickly. "I haven’t talked to you for a while! How’s it going?"
"Good," she started with a smile, "Why do you sound so tired?"
"Well, some of us have sex," Megan whispered as she chuckled, moving into another room.
"Shut up," Tina laughed, "Okay, I have some news that you might love."
"Unless you’re seeing some woman, then no."
"Well, yes, but she’s not just some woman. She’s the woman."
"Oh my god! No fucking way!" Megan squealed, suddenly giddy for her friend. "How long have you guys been going out for, you saucy minx?"
Tina laughed at that, "Well, this was really our first date."
"And you know already," Megan started, causing Tina to expect that she’d say it’s impossible, but she surprised her. "Wow, you’ve got it bad." Tina giggled again. "And you’re laughing like a little schoolgirl! Wow, I bet she’s special."
"She is," Tina smiled to herself, leaving a pause as she remembered back to the kiss, "She really is."
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(44 votes, average: 4.25 out of 5)
Ah, that rush of first love…..intoxicating.
nothing like the feeling of new love :) love the update! keep it coming!
That was very sweet. This shy Tina is very sexy.
Giddy like a school girl, yup that’s the rush of love! PPS:)
I have to agree with the other comments – this was such a sweet, feel good chapter – just brings a smile to your face! I am so happy that they got the nerve up to kiss – and more than once! I can’t wait to read more – and you are amazing by the way – both your stories are my favorite – and I love that you post them together! You Rock! PPS
tina’s turn to ask bette on a date!! love it! :)PPS
Now that was sweet. I take it Tina’s friend Meg knows about her being into women. Bette wants to take it slow and do everything right and Tina seems to know exactly what she wants to do. We don’t really know what if This is Tina’s first female relationship. PS
There’s nothing quite like a new crush no matter what age you are. Love. More please.
I’m already want date #2 that was so sweet! PPS!
Loved yet another chapter of yours!! This is a really great story! I can’t wait to hear what Alice has to say about this! lol PPS!! Great job!
Sweet chapter. Love this story. Thanks for posting!
They are so cute and sweet, Tina is funny! Please more, thanks!
Really love this story…great chapter… Please post when you can :)
so sweet love this story and youre other ones as well!!
Good greif..you wrote that so well it reminded me of the first kiss I ever had with a woman…oh the butterflies that swirl in your tummy..its the best sensation in the world. Thanks for the memory love;)
love it when Shy Tina takes the initiative …and Bette is so sweet so understanding with butterflies and all..
What a sweet chapter…they both have it bad.
very nice… now it on to date # 2… i wonder who starts he kissing first.. i think it will be tina…
wow, that brought back some personal memories. So happy for Tina…and Bette, of course.
Cute Cute Cute!
Love IT!!!! Thank you