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Timid Devotion (Part 9)
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‘Further,’ Tina pleaded in her mind, ‘Touch me.’ She wriggled her hips gently, wishing Bette would go further. She couldn’t control herself or think, but her body was fully aware of what it wanted.
The fury of lips and tongues was bringing them to a sort of dreamland, where neither was acknowledging their surroundings, or time itself, for that matter.
Bette decided to move her hand down Tina’s hip over her shorts so she wouldn’t be tempted to move their intimacy any further. She knew Tina wasn’t ready.
As her hand moved down, Tina’s hand moved up Bette’s side and over her shoulder. She rested the palm of her hand beside Bette’s neck, unsure if she could go any further. She hoped Bette was as aroused as she was.
After seeking for only a moment, Bette found the soft skin just below Tina’s shorts, and let out a quick puff of air against Tina’s cheek. It felt so good on her fingers. She wanted to feel more, she wanted to slide her hands up Tina’s shorts, but she knew she would have to wait. ‘Dammit, there’s no safe place to touch her … ahhh this is fucking torture! I wonder if she’s suffering this much,’ the brunette thought to herself. She felt like she was going crazy. She let her hand rest on Tina’s thigh, gently kneading her exposed skin.
Tina’s heart was beating faster than she thought possible and her breathing had become erratic. Her whole body was moving as she breathed, wishing and hoping that she could feel Bette’s hand where she really needed it. And need it she did. She felt like she would collapse if she was forced to stand at that moment. All she could think about was the location of Bette’s fingers, and their hopeful destination. "Bette," she breathed quietly, very slowly pleadingly, moving her hand down to Bette’s chest.
That caused Bette to gasp again, her lips quickly attaching to their counterpart. She could feel Tina’s gentle hand laying over her breast and she was losing her mind. Even though a shirt and a bra were separating their direct contact, Bette still felt shaky. Her hand froze in place as she felt Tina’s palm press a little harder, the tips of her fingers pressing down around her destination. Bette felt Tina’s hot breath against her cheek and all she wanted was to take her right there.
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OMG the tension, how in god’s name are they gonna walk?LOL :)PPS
I wonder if the walk will be a short one to the bedroom…they might actually make it there without starting to remove articles of clothing…whew! There is so much desire between these two, it’s like a powderkeg waiting to explode. Did you per chance take time to write two chapters???
So,this is “taking it slow” huh? Feels like the speed of light to me…! LOL
Love it! I love both the stories, but this one best, so far.You have a fan. ;o]
I am exhausted, the tension between them sucks the energy out of me. Making out…… it’s been awhile. LOL
Love this .. thank you so much for the update… so they’re not going to last with this “taking it slow”… LOL!!!! But I can’t wait to see how their walk goes… Great update! :D
“can we just kiss?” is the sweetest question ever! but really Tina? how can you “just kiss” bette? nearly impossible as this chapter has clearly portrayed! love it!
I don’t know if I could “just kiss” either one of these women..thanks for another great chapter. pps
How can they take a walk? Would’t they rather re-watch Jumanji..its such an entertaining film LMFAO
Mercy, I don’t know how they can find the strength to walk to the door let alone outside the house. The sexual tension is so high they could float to wherever they wanted. I can hardly walk after reading what they were doing. This just can’t last for much longer. How can you write this wihout falling off your chair biissexi? Lovd it. PPS
Mercy, I don’t know how they can find the strength to walk to the door let alone outside the house. The sexual tension is so high they could float to wherever they wanted. I can hardly walk after reading what they were doing. This just can’t last for much longer. How can you write this wihout falling off your chair biissexi? Lovd it. PPS
Mercy, I don’t know how they can find the strength to walk to the door let alone outside the house. The sexual tension is so high they could float to wherever they wanted. I can hardly walk after reading what they were doing. This just can’t last for much longer. How can you write this wihout falling off your chair biissexi? Lovd it. PPS
why r they teasing themselves? enuff already!!!! lol.
I love the tension between the two. They are so loving and playful…I really like your story. I wonder how they are going to last. lol PPS!
Their desire for each other put together is like a bomb waiting to explode…and when it does, it will be a hell of a night for both of them. I think the make out sessions are really fun…Bette is so cute trying to contro, herself :P Great chappie, good luck with school ;)
I am not sure that either one can hold out much longer. I know that Bette wants to take it slow, but their bodies are not allowing that to happen.
Ahh you such a tease my friend for leaving us like that lol. They are sweet and hot but they taking things slow its killing us here lol. Please post more, thanks!
mmmmmmmmmm….yummy…You could cut a block out of the all the tension in the air!I liked the Bonnie Hunt touch~Hunt…=)
They aren’t exactly going slow anymore. :) Love it. Love this story. Thanks for posting!
Timid ….Right
These two can’t possibly last much longer – they are on fire for one another – and dirty thoughts – Yikes – if even one mentions something to the other – its on! They are so cute together – trying to be respectful of one another – but all the while tourerching themselves
Yikes i hit leave comment before I was done. See thats how little I comment on stories but since your stories are so amazing I could not be a silent reader anymore. PPS – can’t wait to read more!
“Apparently we can read each other’s minds”, well that my dear friend is because great minds think alike! lol Oh the tension between these two, I have a feeling they’re not gonna be walking anywhere but to the bedroom! PPS:)
They will need to walk very, very slowly. They are one HOT couple. Great job!!!!! PPS
great chapter. tension between these two is incredible! PPS!
OH Babe…WOW…WOW…I know I am sooo behind but had to leave you a message. What a magically wonderful chapter..I LOVED their interactions. My dear..you rock my world;)