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    Tina, Chapter 15

    Story written on February 25, 2005 by perfection.
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    Number of Comments: 13
    Words: 2154
    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=52317
    Author Notes:

    Tina talks to Bette.

    TheRealJLO”I am honored that you would read my humble fanfic. I am a huge fan of yours. In fact, youre the reason I am addressing individual comments in the first place. You have a real talent for imagery and capturing the essence of your characters.

    Ness, bvhall”I dont think Tina IS prepared for what shes about to see. Read on.

    Polarice, Wildtouch, c2bc, MiamiGrl, Amanda, Nouvelle, Christy “I thank you for your comments. It takes me a looooong time to write my chapters and I come back and read the comments several times for inspiration. Be patient and rememberyou keep me going.

    Tinawho?”I thank you for the kind words. I have been trying to play with imagery and that compliment tells me to keep doing it. Thank you.

    mc”Tina will get to know Father Andy even morestay tuned.

    Karen”if you ever have a question about the content of my story you can PM me in the discussion boards or ask the question here. Someone else may have the same question but is too afraid to ask. FYI: flowers are not allowed in the ICU, but Tina appreciates the gesture.

    Gte103j, bvhall, TheRealJLO”I had to research the existence of a hate crime unit long distance as I am in DC not LA. I could find anything but a procedural protocol so included the disclaimer. Thank you for noticing. I always notice the minute details and Im glad someone is here to keep me on my toes.

    Gina”youll have to keep reading if you want closure with this one. The ride isnt over by a long shot.

    Del”Tried the dashes.they didnt work for me. Ill have to stick with the ellipses.

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    Previously”

    Ready? Her words send a shiver through my body. Im more scared than I have ever been in my life. I can merely nod my head in acknowledgement. Lets go. She leads me to a doorthe blinds are drawn closed and the lights are turned off. She opens the door and waves me in. Just be careful with the wires and tubes. Her final instructions dont do enough to prepare me for the site I lay my eyes on as I peak around the corner.

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    Comments

    1. What to say, what to say? In my heart, I know you won’t allow Bette to won’t die ’cause plenty would kill you if you did. But this ongoing torture is killing me…Not. I love it! Thanks.

    2. What to say, what to say? In my heart, I know you won’t allow Bette to die ’cause plenty would kill you if you did. But this ongoing torture is killing me…Not. I love it! Thanks.

      My bad, sorry.

    4. OMG please dont let Bette Die……ahhh this story is great.. and your a great writer.. but seeing Bette like this is so depressing.. and its so true if you kill bette..there will be alot of dishappy people… but your doing a great job.. please continue

    6. We have a hate crime law in Texas, had a terrible crime in Joshua and they pass the law. I know that you will not Bette die. She has to much to live for. Thanks

    8. This was intense and I love how you show Tinas love and need for Bette and I sure hope Bette does not die as I really do love her, more than Tina, just kidding, great story though keep them coming.

    12. humble? honored? thanks for being a fan….~almost blushing~ yeah i try to address everyone but lately i’ve been slacking off. I don’t consider myself good with imagery…i consider myself long winded….but you’re amazing at POV stories….read my chptr 33 and then read yours…you’ll see….there’s a method to my madness, but alas, its still madness

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