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Tina — Plan B; pt. 61
“Thanks for this,
“Hey, what are hardworking friends for, anyway?”
I gripped the armrest a little tighter, but couldn’t help call her on what she’d said. ‘Hardworking?”
“Hard working. Hardly working. Almost the same.”
I looked out the window, at LA zooming by. “I’m wrong to be worried, to come home early, right?”
“Well”
“It’s just, I don’t know, but there’s something about Jess and Bette together.” Was that it? Or, should I ask myself, was that all? Fear of being supplanted as a mother.
“Look, TK, I don’t know what you think, but if anything, you should be happy to come back to a house with no chalk marks on the floor.”
“I’m sure it wasn’t that bad,
“Not that bad? Jess with Bette started somewhere along the line of surly, sulky, and obnoxious. You know, every bizarre-world dwarf there is.”
Lovely image of my beloved child that brings up. I do know, however, that Jess can pull an attitude when she sets her mind to it. And, around Bette, it did seem that her mind was set often. “They were getting chummy, I thought. Bette and Jess.”
“So that’s the problem.”
“What?”
“The ‘my daughter likes Bette’ problem.”
“That’s not it.” As if
She mashed the horn as she wove the car through a group of motorcyclists. I returned my gaze to the side window; being a passenger didn’t seem as bad as knowing what was coming.
“Sure it’s not,”
While I wasn’t sure what I wanted the answer to be, honestly, I did give voice to the question. “Jess really hates Bette?”
“Now that’s a tough one.”
Since when isn’t my life as it intersects with Bette Porter not a ‘tough one.’
“I think,”
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OH MY GOD!!!!! So glad you’re back!…Great chapter as ever. thanks for the update
great chapter as always — you have been missed — thanks
oh my where have you been??? i´ve missed your story a lot..so glad you back..hope Tina dont feel threated about Bette and Jess relationship and she wants to help to build their relationship B&J and B&T..ok another great chappy please post as soon as you can thanks :o)
im doing my happy dance pseud. youve been so missed. this was great. toooo short . i cant help myself, i just want more when you post. thanks.
Wonderful to see your back with this story. Missed you & it:-)
its good to have u back writin these great stories…cant wait til the next one…post soon and great update!!!
i m totally grateful that u r back. my eyes open wide seeing your post eventhough it is 5 am, in my time. hmmm love uuu. Muaaaahaaahaaa
Have so missed this story – good to have you back!
You were badly missed. Stay awhile now that you are back.
Yay! You’re back! Bring on the Bette benefits ;)
Welcome back. This is great and can’t wait for more. Congrats on your award.
Hey Welcome back pseud Thanks for writing again still Wonderful Story Please continue Please Thanks.
Welcome Back! Great update as usual. Glad your okay!
wow..i am glad your back… now jess will be jess…. but bette and tina need to get together soon… and i hope that is the real reason tina came home early…
glad u are back psued. i have missed your story. love your jess. hope tina is ready for her homecoming. post soon
“thanks to those who selected me for a fanfiction award.” You’re welcome… now will we still have to whine for updates? ;-)
I’m doing backflips and waving pom poms! It is so good to see you back and your writing ROCKS as always. You had some super fantastic lines in this one that left me rolling. You are the IT Girl! Happy Dance Happy Dance Yay for me! The PSEUD is BACK!
Yay! Thanks for finding the time to write more of this story that I have so missed. That so many have missed in fact.
welcome back, longed for your story but waited ever so patiently, all you writers are entitled to your own lives after all. Great Chapter glad to have you and this story back.
Hey, that was great! it’s nice to see you back, don’t stay away too long this time ok.
Welcome back, pseud. Nice to see your story continued.
Loved the remark about “…no chalk marks on the floor”. Tina’s lucky that Alice isn’t driving her to the county jail or the jeuvenile detention center.
Good old Alice, giving Tina just enough information for her to fill in the rest of the picture with her own brush strokes.
Tina needed to understand Jess’ insecurity in her place in the pecking order. Now, she can assuage Jess with more confidence.
Tina needed to give voice to her feelings about Bette. They might have only been voices in her head, but at least making the effort.
Curious to see just how much Bette and Jess reveal to Tina.
Excellent chapter. Looking forward to more!
Omigosh! I had to clean my contacts to make sure I was indeed seeing a psued post! I hope you had a good fill of bon-bons.
Great story; I liked how you had Alice driving – traffic and Tina crazy! Can’t wait for the drama of Tina being home early. Will Bette and Jessica mis-interpet why Tina is home early?
Hope for most posts from you.
Thank you for returning and posting!
WELCOME BACK!! I was wondering where you”ve been. Thanks for the latest update! Great!!
Glad to see you back. Love this story and can’t wait for it to continue. Thanks.
P!!!!
it feels like I just got back the use of my left arm. lol
girl I have missed you. hope to see you soon.
LorddyingJeee! You’re back! I miss your posts big time. Welcome, welcome. Great update AS EVER! Please stay awhile longer and post soon. Cheers!
I had almost given up hope! I’m so glad you are back.
Pseud, I’m wondering, do you think I could trade my 401K plan in for Bette-benefits????
This is gonna be fun!
Well it is good to see you back, writing! I just re-read some of your past fics and thought I was seeing things when I saw this update! Nice to see Tina back in scene. Funny convero with Alice. (I always wondered if canon conversation would run this way) It will be interesting when she sees how things have turned out! Hope the next post won’t be soo long!
Glad to see you back.Nice update.
Glad you’re back. Tina, Jess and Bette really need to sit down and talk.
Hey Pseud: If loving you is wrong, I don’t wanna do right.
And if giving you a fanfic award means you immediately go away for a month and don’t post, then you’re not getting any more. I don’t care how good your future stories are.
So, there…
welcome back pseud, this story has been missed……..I look forward to loads more chapters
Does ‘stuff’ go???????
OMG! Somebody, break it to me gently…
Yaaaaayy P is back!!! Great chapter, wonder what tina is coming home to?