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Tina — Plan B; Pt. 81
Bette’s over for dinner, again. Post-dinner at this point.
I see her, up to her elbows in suds, taking care of the few pots I didn’t trust to the dishwasher. To the side of the sink sits her wine glass, stem sudsy from stolen sips.
Even involved in such a basic task, I could watch her for hours. Her body, the way she moves. The way the curls fall to her back and catch on her creamy sweater. It’s all mesmerizing.
I’m sure if Jess was out here she’d say I was being a total dork.
And I am.
And it feels wonderful.
I’m still working on my issues about her trip. She leaves in a couple days. But she did tell me a few days ago. Since then, she’s been here every evening. We’ve been falling into a sort of pattern, with her taking the lead role in cleanup.
She offered to cook tonight, also. I’m not sure I’m quite ready for that.
Okay, so I shouldn’t denigrate her cooking. She did do some for herself and Jess while I was gone. Or so they tell me.
They. Sometimes, they are starting to seem like they get along.
It’s quite strange. I don’t know why I should find it so, but I do. Isn’t this what I had once hoped for? A complete family? Still, given their start, it’s interesting to see them when they are together, and especially when they’re getting along.
It’s someone else in my little girl’s life. Someone very special, but still.
Tonight, over dinner, Bette was spinning a tale of being in a small hotel in
Jess and I haven’t traveled much. I’m not sure why. Maybe I was just too settled, too comfortable here in my cocoon, too protective. Maybe Jess will benefit from Bette’s ease of travel, and gain an understanding of other people, other cultures. Sometimes I feel like LA is culture enough for anyone, but I know that there’s more of the world that I’ll have to, someday, let me little girl move within.
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what the hell was that..i cant believe in my eyes..Bette didnt have that ball to mess it up with Tina that way again..cuz i will kill her in person..damn..thanks pseud..im so happy now..lol..ggezzz..can you please FIX this?..
wheres the 80 ch?
Beautiful and wellpaced at first and then just troubling. You’ve got me more than a little worried here *biting my fingernails*
“stem sudsy from stolen sips” … wicked alliteration! And a welcome continuation to the story. Whenever you can…
yea i thought so too..we’re missing a chapt here…..and what in the world is going on?!….better post soon to explain yourslef!
I’m sure Bette’s doing something really nice for TIna and Tina’s just going to play ‘jump to conclusions’ and possibly ruin it. I can see how this will later play in that “teasing” future scene you left us with. I think, for once, Bette had her priorities straight and Tina just needs to learn to trust again. Great Update!!!
What?! Who?! Coast? West or East? I hope it’s Bette planning a special surprise for Tina and Jess and nothing bad. Please, oh, please, take care of this old heart of mine. Thanks for your time (I know how busy life can get, after all, the bon-bons won’t be eaten by themselves!). Hope to see another post soon.
Uh oh! Has Tina not learnt anything? When trying to resolve trust issues it does no good to jump to conclusions! EVERYONE ends up getting upset. Oh boy, let’s hope they talk this one through before things get out of hand. I very much doubt it though. Since Bette does end up staying I figure things are okay enough, or Tina doesn’t know how to say she’s changed her mind.I wanna see what Jess’ reaction is to having Porter stay over for a few days…and nights. Me thinks she will not be liking it one little bit.
Ohh the big blow up is on it’s way. I think Tina is probably jumping to conclusions.
RUTRO, don’t mess this up Bette!
This is still one of my favorite stories… please continue when you can.Thanks!!!!
Still loving this story, thanks for posting, next NC17 huh, yummy!!!
Why didn’t I see pt80? Did I miss something? There’re 3 more chapters to pt85–the exploding one. I guess Tina won’t ask Bette, but will still second guess till explode…
Oh my…the things we imagine when we overhear…this is just not good!
Who was….what the….when did….MAAUUUGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! What is going on, and why is Bette being sneaky? Why, Pseud, WHY?!? :(
oh, um…glad to read the update, by the way. :)
pseud, as always I’ve enjoyed yet another chapter of your amazing writing, thank you for sharing your gift with us.I’d also like to encourage all of the non-writers, such as myself, who enjoy reading all of these wonderful stories to please subscribe, I have.
ok, first of all – what happened to ch. 80?; second of all – no way Bette would do something nasty and Tina just jumping to conclusions, all she needs is ask, TALK people, it’s Bette, ask her…oh, i’m so dreading ch. 85, you are killing us
I believe that Bette is planing a surprie for Tina, She is not crazy to mess with Tinas heart again,Tina needs to stop and think.and notjump to something that could cause trouble. thanks
im with betty and b&tf – bette wouldl never hurt tina again. and shes jumping to conclusions just like freaking out about her going to ny to do business. god. i i over heard that i would so be in her face and having her explain it right the fuck now. oh you are so evil. god please be nice. p
I love this story post when you can.
all I can say is it starts out so sweet and then ouch – and I can’t believe the Bette we’ve been getting to know would say such things in Tina’s house?
Oh, it’s that trust issue coming into play again. Bette wouldn’t mess this up again after what seems to be a new start for them…Thanks for the post.
Who’s more startled and jangled by that call – Tina or me? We were both lulled into a calm place and then brought back to reality. Damn that cell phone! Can we go back down memory lane again? Wait – let me go get my slippers and a glass of wine. Save me a spot on the couch. I’ll be right back…
This was by far your calmest and most serene chapter. I really liked it. More! More!
So Bette is probly talking about her new art galarie or something, right…please fix this or does this chapter lead us up to chapter 85? hmmmmm…post soon
Ok what the hell now!