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To Hell And Back part15
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“Will you come home with me?
“But Bette don’t we have to get our thins ready for tonight?”
“You know as well as I, that we both know exactly what we’re going to wear. So I’ll ask you again come home with me, just for a little while. I promise not to try anything.” Bette couldn’t contain the smile that spread across her face.
“Well if you don’t try anything I may just be a tad upset with you.” Helena gave her a smile of her own. “Lead the way I’ll follow.”
The drive to Bette’s seemed to go on forever even though in reality it really wasn’t that long. Pulling her car into her driveway she cut her engine and took in a deep breath. It’s now or never Porter so just do it. Getting out of her car she waited for Helena to park. As Helena made her way onto the walkway Bette couldn’t imagine her looking any more beautiful then she did right now. Not taking her eyes off her she met her halfway in an almost hypnotic trance. Stopping directly in front of her. Reaching up she slid her fingers through her hair which made Helena instantly grabbed her by her wrists.
“Bette is something wrong?” concern could be heard in Helena’s voice. Bette then pressed their foreheads together.
“I don’t want to be your mystery woman Helena.” she whispered. “ I know what we agreed to, but I don’t want you to be a secret. Hell I‘m to old to play that game and after what you said early I would have to be out of my mind to ever want to… unless?”
“Unless what?”
“Unless you had someone else in mind.”
“Bette I won’t even dignify that with an answer. But I will say this, if you want to be open about us. I won’t fight it. But I must also let you know, that I want all of you. Not 10% you, not 50 or even 99.9%. I want the full 100. Now if you don’t want this?
“Oh fuck yes.” Bette eagerly replied.
“So is that a fuck yes you want it or a fuck yes you don’t?”
“Now I won’t dignify that with an answer at lest not a verbal one.” And pulled her into a slow but demanding kiss. In that one kiss she hoped to leave no room for uncertainty, but one of which this relationship was hopefully going. This is what she wanted…she was what she wanted. And that was worth taking a chance on. As the kiss was nearing it’s end each woman couldn’t help but think could a kiss get any more perfect then this? Helena eyes were still closed when Bette gently nuzzle her cheek and spoke softly in her ear.
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First ???? Looking around yep definitely first
Ok serious now. This was again a great chapter. So Bette decided they should go public huh? I wonder what they’re friends are going to say, I can already hear there reaction, especially Alice. I really love how you write these two, you make it sound as if they belonged together all their life and there haven’t been other partners along the road. Great stuff really. I’m definitely hooked and can’t wait until your next instalment.
Ok there… the first thing I am going to say is you are lucky you didn’t have any of these at the end ??? or else something would have had to have been done :P… ok… so yeah you are a master… and don’t you sit there shaking your head… you have so much passion flowing through your words that it is almost blinding… your grasp of these two woman is so powerful that I can feel each and every breath they take… each and every movement they make… you have such a gift at creating such a powerful emotional connection… and that is an incredible gift… I remember how nervous you were when you first started this incredible journey and you have done nothing but surpass yourself… you were amazing when you first started and you are amazing still… I cannot wait to see where you go… what you do… so rest assured I will be here when you return… hugs, JC
Who cares what people will say,as long as they have each other. thanks Oh by the way loved it
Some serious loving going on here…I am still shocked that Bette was open to being so public about their relationship. This certainly sets up some interesting drama and dynamics for future chapters. Don’t stop here…
wonderful and vivid Jac, and a great way to return to reading fanfic pour moi:) thankx for this shot of belena wonderfullness Jac, i really liked your writing once again, but may i say that you seem to be hitting the mark increasingly with each story? pps, when you can
JOC I spent all day today catching up on your sweet tale. I loved last chapter’s grilling from the friends and the sweetness on Helena’s decription to Bette on her being a keeper. Looking forward to hearing what the girls are going to think about the BeLena love.
awesome chapter!the previous chapter was great too, i loved how helena talked about bette to the gang. post soon!
how good was that…realllll good, that’s how good!!