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To Hell And Back part15
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“I know I said I don’t want this to be a secret but, I do have two problems.”
“Mmm, and what’s that? Answered Helena as her lips found some exposed skin to latch on to.
“Well, one is making out with my girlfriend with the whole neighborhood watching.”
“Really Bette the whole neighborhood,” Helena smirked. Raising her head up she turned around and was startled. “Oh bloody hell where did they come from?” standing in front of Bette fence was indeed a group of 7 or more of people from the neighborhood. Who all began to applaud at the two very red face women. “And what would the second problem be.”
“That if I don’t get you inside right now, kissing won’t be all they will be seeing of you or me.”
“Rea..lly, are you sure about that Bette?” ask Helena.
“I’m very sure.” Bette said with such a calm but serious look on her face that Helena knew if she wanted to take her right then and there she wouldn’t stop her. Turning toward the small crowd, she gave them a wave. Then extended her hand to Bette and walked to the front door. Placing the key into the slot, Helena began to caress the small of Bette’s back as she unlocked the door.
Pushing the door open Bette stood to the side to let Helena in. Closing and locking it when both were in. Even though Helena had her back to Bette she could still feel her staring her up and down in the most intimate way. Bette slowly walked up behind her. Moving her hair to the side she began to inhale the scent that truly belong to Helena. With the tip of her tongue she slowly began to traced a line down from bottom of her jaw to the muscle between her neck and shoulder and sucked on it for a bit.
Looking up she could see Helena eyes were closed and she was licking and biting her lips. Trying to contain some of her composure. Stepping back she walked around and stood in front of Helena touching her chin. Lust filled eyes slowly open.
“You know Helena, some things you should do in private. And you are definitely one of them.” as her eyes roamed up and down Helena’s body. “As often as possible.”
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First ???? Looking around yep definitely first
Ok serious now. This was again a great chapter. So Bette decided they should go public huh? I wonder what they’re friends are going to say, I can already hear there reaction, especially Alice. I really love how you write these two, you make it sound as if they belonged together all their life and there haven’t been other partners along the road. Great stuff really. I’m definitely hooked and can’t wait until your next instalment.
Ok there… the first thing I am going to say is you are lucky you didn’t have any of these at the end ??? or else something would have had to have been done :P… ok… so yeah you are a master… and don’t you sit there shaking your head… you have so much passion flowing through your words that it is almost blinding… your grasp of these two woman is so powerful that I can feel each and every breath they take… each and every movement they make… you have such a gift at creating such a powerful emotional connection… and that is an incredible gift… I remember how nervous you were when you first started this incredible journey and you have done nothing but surpass yourself… you were amazing when you first started and you are amazing still… I cannot wait to see where you go… what you do… so rest assured I will be here when you return… hugs, JC
Who cares what people will say,as long as they have each other. thanks Oh by the way loved it
Some serious loving going on here…I am still shocked that Bette was open to being so public about their relationship. This certainly sets up some interesting drama and dynamics for future chapters. Don’t stop here…
wonderful and vivid Jac, and a great way to return to reading fanfic pour moi:) thankx for this shot of belena wonderfullness Jac, i really liked your writing once again, but may i say that you seem to be hitting the mark increasingly with each story? pps, when you can
JOC I spent all day today catching up on your sweet tale. I loved last chapter’s grilling from the friends and the sweetness on Helena’s decription to Bette on her being a keeper. Looking forward to hearing what the girls are going to think about the BeLena love.
awesome chapter!the previous chapter was great too, i loved how helena talked about bette to the gang. post soon!
how good was that…realllll good, that’s how good!!