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To Live Without You (Chapter 21)
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There was an intense silence between them, the exact moment in time when a friendship turned intimate. Dana’s hands gripped Alice’s waist and the athlete found her own knee rising between the writer’s legs; there was no sound only a sharp gasp from Alice as the athlete pushed against her. They paused, each woman terrified to go further; if they stopped now they could laugh it off maybe blame it on the alcohol. They weren’t so drunk that they could excuse going further, a moment of weakness perhaps but this was more and as Alice’s chin slowly rose from Dana’s chest the athlete knew those clear brown eyes would be looking straight through her.
Dana closed her eyes for a moment opening them slowly to the writer’s intense gaze, Alice’s stare traveled to the athlete’s lips and paused there the writer was obviously struggling with her decision. Dana wanted so badly to kiss the writer but she would have to let Alice figure this out on her own. Dana’s heart was beating hard in her chest and she was sure Alice could feel it as the writer leaned forward and tentatively placed her lips on Dana’s.
The athlete’s lips tingled as Alice pressed against her, the soft pressure of the writer’s lips and the increasing closeness of Alice’s knee was sending Dana into a frenzy. The athlete forced herself to stay calm which was near impossible since there was chaos all around her. This was Alice, her best friend, the same friend that said she wasn’t that desperate, now kissing her. Instead of Gabby, which was a big deal, because it meant that it wasn’t out of desperation or loneliness. No, it couldn’t be about that, if it was about that Alice would have simply fucked her ex right? Right?
Dana kept asking herself a question she could answer in her own mind, it was a question, a fear really that only Alice could calm. The writer pressed her lips against Dana’s a little harder, pulling back to gauge the athlete’s reaction. Dana waited…she thought, her body ran through what seemed like a million emotions at once, fear and love fought in Alice’s eyes and Dana decided to fuck all these contrasting emotions and do what felt right. Because honestly, this felt so right, everything about this moment was something that Dana had dreamed of for a long time…granted that dream didn’t involve Alice but the look in the writer’s eyes made Dana wonder why she hadn’t been dreaming of Alice.
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Ok, first of all, why they hell didnt I comment your last chapter of this story?! I mean hell, it was excellent! Anywho, this chapter was AMAZING! Wow. You made up for your lack of updating with this one! Ha ha. There was one certain part that I literally fell out of my chair laughing at, and you know exactly which part I am talking about. So god damned fucking funny! God, I love you CD, and I am so glad you updated. It made my heart happy. I might get on tonight to talk, but we have to see where the evening takes me! ;-) And shut up, because I already know what you AND Suzie are thinking…. fucking whores!
A while coming, but worth the wait – fanbloodytastic chapter. Those business trips really suck if they are getting in the way of your writing, but I guess you have to earn a living. Looking forward to more from you soon.
ha pinnicle of purity!!! good lord they r so adorable and hot!!
Awesome chapter…and they are slowly getting there arent they? Im sure there is more drama to come because love is never ever simple!! Although i truly believe that when you fall in love with the right person [your true soulmate] you will face lifes good and bad times together!!.Ive been with my babe for 10years and the love changes and grows day by day on a much deeper level… I feel very blessed every day!!
well…damn…that was pretty fuckin hot! lol. especially the part where dana fantasized that whole sex scene with alice. seeing as how they just created the challenge the same day they’re making out on the dance floor, i doubt they’re gonna be able to keep their hands off each other for a week. much less a month. but i can’t wait to watch them try! or at least read about it. great post! hope u had a successful business trip and your upcoming one goes well too. and now i need a cold shower.
When you sent me the snippet of the challenge I thought “what a fucking great idea” and I can see that attachment to this story again… makes me so very happy. You got me again with Dana fantacizing… that got me going in more ways then one. But you know how to get me going….7 is my favorite number. I can always change my favorite number… hint, hint. I love the full description of the intimate moments between Alice and Dana…. so very hot and makes me want so much more. You make me feel all things and I can’t tell you how much that means to me. I loved the Gabby comment about wasting an incredible night of mind-blowing sex to watch cartoons with some closet-dyke with a crush on you. And the part about Alice’s breasts talking to her…. priceless, lol. I loved the part where Dana and Alice dance together… I can imagine how hard it is to have self-control. I feel like I have none sometimes. This challenge is going to be hell for the both of them (if you were that close I know I’d say the hell with it and just do what felt good, lol) I can’t wait to see where this leads… maybe I’ll be blessed with another snippet? I love you sugar… and that will never change.
Apogee. Apogee. Apogee. Apogee!So excited to see you back… I have to be polite and say, update apogee when you have the time. But What I really mean to say is “GET A CHAPTER OUT NOW DAMNIT!” *Kidding kidding*
Wow…the agst, the longing and the hotness that defines Danish all at the same time. Satisfying. Frustrating. Can’t wait for more! Update soooooon please.
Great!And this is classic: By the time they’d reached the Planet Dana was much better, she’d only looked down Alice’s shirt seven times since leaving and the athlete felt a sense of accomplishment, she’d limited herself to ten.
Oh that was really good. I welcome the challenge…I know for sure they won’t be able to go without for an entire month (I know I can’t and pretty sure you couldn’t)..alcohol I mean. And the odd look and peak here and there. We’re getting close too a hot reunion?? (right?) Don’t worry about getting into the working life, I’m just getting back into school all over again and it sucks big time, man homework is a bitch! Keep up the writing when you can…I’ll be waiting!
Ah! Seeing there was a new chpater just made me so happy. lol We all waited a long time but we obviously were rewarded. Such a great chap. Can’t wait for more. :D And god no! Don’t want you to be miserable, ever. :P
YAAAAAAAAAAAAY! Danish loving…suze is grinning from ear to ear right now :D Damn, you can write…bitch. LOL. So I had read some of this already, but the final draft is a six star winner from me :D It was fantastic babe. Now moving on to other matters…the scene that poop was laughing her ass of at…fuck you bitches…FUCK YOU! See if I ever share a classic like that again. My lips are sealed from here on out…damnit. Who am I kidding…that was funny shit. LMAO. *sigh* Looking forward to the next update as always babe! And yes…I am a fucking slacker with no excuse as to my lack of posting. I will post tonight! I swear! Damnit…I know. I said that twice now. But this time I mean it! I’m off to finish. Have a safe flight. And I am glad to be one of you support beams…one of your gay support beams. lmao. Ivory to the rescue. HAHAHA. OK. really going now. Love you babe. ~The fucking gorgeous, hilarious, charming, and sometimes drunk 1/3 of suzieshitinthecloset…(yeah I gave in to the name change), the new AlShaDane signing off. Oh Fuck…almost forgot…(_*_)
Damn … that was freakin’ hot!!! This is exactly why I love this story. And that’s alright to call me crazy … wouldn’t be the first time & I have certainly been called worse things. You need to update more often with hot Danish action … How I am supposed to sleep now?
this is great can’t wait to see what will happens please post soon great update
You’re such a tease! I see NC-17 and I think finally they’re going to get together…and it’s a flashback! Execellent flashback, but a flashback none the less. I’m so sorry that I didn’t comment on the last chapter. I never read it. Somehow I missed it. How I did that, I have no idea. Amazing job though, on both. I loved the scene in the car on the way to the planet. Dana thoughts were really funny. “DANA! HEY DANA LOOK! LOOK AT US!'” She limited herself to 10 looks. Haha. That was great! It’s good to see Alice and Dana getting closer. Awesome work. I can’t wait to read more.
Ok, I’m a bit late on commentin…but loved the update. That one month bet is a tough one. But I have this feeling it will work out considering you can be a tease when it comes to the two of them. Especially when kissing is allowed (is it?). And you can just always put a flashback in to spice things up. ;) Hallelujah for the dancing-scene, a good Danish story has to have at least one dancing-scene in it. :P And I’m glad to hear Emily will be back…yay!! :D