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    Too Late, Ch. 4

    Story written on October 12, 2005 by Foxfire.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=57075
    Author Notes:

    Dana has realized she misses Alice and wants her back, but does Alice want her back? Is it too late to undo the damage that’s been done? Major Danish angst.

    *Warning – Heavily influenced by certain Season 3 spoilers/rumors!* (So slowly step away if you’re not into the whole spoilers thing)


     

     

    The next night found Dana once again settled at a stool in The Planet’s bar.  And it once again found a disapproving Kit serving her again.

     

    Watching Dana take another shot, and realizing she’d lost count of how many the young athlete had already consumed, Kit shook her head.  “Dana, what did I tell you last night?  This don’t solve *****.”

     

    “But it sure makes it feel a little better,” Dana told her, giving her a sad, inebriated smile.

     

    Kit put her hands on her hips.  “Now, I don’t want to have to refuse to serve you, but if I have to, I will.”

     

    Dana leaned onto the bar, gesturing at Kit as if she had some big secret.  “But if you do, then I’ll just wait till someone else is working behind the bar and you’re busy.  Or – ” Hiccup.  “I’ll just go someplace else.”

     

    “The sad thing is, she ain’t lyin’,” Kit muttered to herself, running a washcloth across the surface of the bar, shooing Dana’s arms out of the way.  “Well, if you wanna talk, I’m here,” she offered, slipping the bottle out of Dana’s line of sight, hoping the tennis player wouldn’t miss its absence.

     

    Dana frowned.  “If I told you, would you promise to quit bothering me?  And,” she added, gesturing at the bar, “would you give me my bottle back?”

     

    Kit sighed, pulling the bottle back out and setting it down with a thump.  “Fine.”

     

    “And you promise not to tell anyone?  Not even Bette?” Dana added, running a finger around the edge of the glass.

     

    “I won’t tell anyone,” Kit told her.

     

    “Say it,” Dana demanded.

     

    “Say what?” Kit was rapidly becoming confused.

     

    “Say you promise,” Dana instructed.

     

    Kit rolled her eyes.  “I promise.”

     

    Dana looked up.  “Cross your heart?”

     

    “Yeah, yeah, cross my heart.  Now go on and tell me before I get tired of your drunk ***** and leave you to wallow in this big secret of yours,” Kit replied.

     

    Dana leaned in close, hesitating, before beginning in a whisper, forcing Kit to lean closer to hear her.  “I have cancer,” Dana mumbled.  She leaned back and smiled slightly.  “Oh my God, it felt so good to finally say it out loud to somebody.  You just don’t know, Kit.  It’s like this weight has been – “

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    1. im glad Dana decided to fight..she can win that miserable desease and i hope she open up to the others they are her family too and Alice still love her..they have to talk..ok great chappy post soon thanks :o)

    3. good to know that Kit knocked some sense into her…drinking herself into oblivion—what the hell is that gonna solve? I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again…when the hell is Alice gonna find out?!! LOL!! Post soon!!

    4. I’m glad Kit talked to Dana the way she did, That was my favorite part of your chapeter. This is turning out great, looking forward to your next post!!!

    5. Exciting stry…Dane was selfish, it may be over with Alice but Dana was Al’z 1st luv…her best friend..she should least fight 4 her friendship..Im glad Dana is gunna be doing treatment….Kit is right, jus cuz Al has moved on is no reason 4 her life 2 be over…love is love..you can luv mre then once.. I hope Dane gets better – I dun think she’s ready 2 give up drinking&tell p3ople though..I luv the way you write..Yet again a Great chapter..THNK U 4 writing, dun stop..Post so0N..

    7. Finally Kit is being put to good use, I can’t say the same for the show. Good that you choose to use Kit as the voice of reason, I can see that happening. I love the aniticpation of waiting for Alice to find out and her reaction.

    8. I am also glad that dana wants to fight this but I just hope that she will have some fight left in her to try and win alice’s heart back once and for all please post soon this is a great story

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