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Too Late, Ch. 4
Dana looked at her hands, popping the knuckles nervously. Muttering to herself, she said, “Not Alice.”
Kit’s eyebrows went up. “Did I just hear you right? Is this some ***** over Alice? You don’t think it would hurt her to have you gone? No matter what, that woman is still gonna care about you, and if you let yourself die, it’s gonna hurt her even worse than anything you ever did to her. And that,” she banged her fist on the bar for emphasis, “is just pure selfishness.”
Dana looked away, suddenly feeling guilty. Kit barged on ahead. “The Dana Fairbanks I know has never been this selfish. The Dana Fairbanks I know never would give up this easily. You’ve changed, girl, and I don’t like it.”
Having said that, Kit went to turn away, but then turned back around to add in one more thing. “I can’t pretend to understand this ***** drama, but I can tell you one thing, girl. You’d better get your ***** together. Just because Alice has moved on don’t mean you have to stop livin’. Get out there and live your life while you still have the chance.”
Dana dropped her head down to her crossed arms. “Kit, I don’t feel too good,” she said, her voice muffled.
Kit groaned. Is her drunk ***** even gonna remember a word I’ve said? “I’m going to call Bette to come get you.”
Dana’s head shot up. “No! Don’t wake them up,” she insisted, looking a little green.
“Who do you want me to call?” Kit asked, pulling out her cell phone.
“Just call me a cab.” Dana yawned and blinked several times.
“No. I’m making sure you get your drunk ***** home safely,” Kit persisted.
“Well, then call Shane. She’s probably up,” Dana mumbled, her head dropping back down.
Kit shook her head and made the call, then sat on the stool patiently beside Dana to wait. Dana kept her head down on her arms, not stirring. Within minutes, a worried Shane and Carmen burst in the door and made a beeline for the bar.
“Is she okay?” Shane asked, looking concerned.
She was answered by a low snore from Dana. Carmen bit back a giggle. Shane had to chuckle.
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(38 votes, average: 3.34 out of 5)
im glad Dana decided to fight..she can win that miserable desease and i hope she open up to the others they are her family too and Alice still love her..they have to talk..ok great chappy post soon thanks :o)
Glad that Dana is going to take Chemo. It make you sick,but It can help you stay alive. thanks
good to know that Kit knocked some sense into her…drinking herself into oblivion—what the hell is that gonna solve? I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again…when the hell is Alice gonna find out?!! LOL!! Post soon!!
I’m glad Kit talked to Dana the way she did, That was my favorite part of your chapeter. This is turning out great, looking forward to your next post!!!
Exciting stry…Dane was selfish, it may be over with Alice but Dana was Al’z 1st luv…her best friend..she should least fight 4 her friendship..Im glad Dana is gunna be doing treatment….Kit is right, jus cuz Al has moved on is no reason 4 her life 2 be over…love is love..you can luv mre then once.. I hope Dane gets better – I dun think she’s ready 2 give up drinking&tell p3ople though..I luv the way you write..Yet again a Great chapter..THNK U 4 writing, dun stop..Post so0N..
Oh my God, I’ve got goosebumps. It’s awesome. I can’t wait for the gang to find out. Post, post, post… =)
Finally Kit is being put to good use, I can’t say the same for the show. Good that you choose to use Kit as the voice of reason, I can see that happening. I love the aniticpation of waiting for Alice to find out and her reaction.
I am also glad that dana wants to fight this but I just hope that she will have some fight left in her to try and win alice’s heart back once and for all please post soon this is a great story
I’m also glad Dana decided to fight. I liked Kit being involved in putting some sense into Dana.