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    Traced in the Stars: Chapter 20-A Home Turned Upside Down

    Story written on July 1, 2006 by IAmAlexM.
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    In the final chapter of this FanFic, Carmen’s secret is revealed and Shane and her daughter are put to the ultimate test…survival!

     

    Shane: Carmen are you nuts? Aren’t you stuffed?

     

    Shane rubbed her bloated stomach, she felt like she was going to burst.

     

    Carmen: I really want Kraft Dinner.

     

    Shane sighed. Carmen lit the burner and put the pot of water on it. She dumped the contents of the box in the water and set the box on the counter next to the stove. She then turned around and walked over to Shane. She smiled down at her and then straddled her midsection on the couch. She leaned down and kissed Shane’s sweet sexy lips.

     

    Shane: What are you doing? Alex could walk in.

     

    Carmen shook her head and kept kissing Shane.

     

    Carmen: She’s in bed.

     

    Shane smiled and kissed Carmen back. They made out for over 10 minutes until Carmen remembered her food, then she leapt up and ran to the stove and Shane laughed.

     

    Carmen: Not funny, I could have burned this house down.

     

    Carmen poured the contents into a colander over the sink then back into the pot, this time stirring the mix into it with butter and milk. She returned to the couch with a bowl full of the cheesy pasta.

     

    Carmen: Why does this stuff taste so amazing?

     

    Shane: I don’t know but I’m gonna go to bed. So umm, come join me when you’re done?

     

    Carmen nodded and Shane got up and went to bed. Hermes followed her into their room. Carmen ate while she watched some TV, but fell asleep.

     

    Halfway through the night, Alex woke up, feeling really hot. She got up to go to the bathroom and the second she walked out of the room, her lungs filled with smoke. She got down and crawled to the living room to find her Madre asleep on the couch. She looked over and watched flames consume the kitchen. She panicked and stood up, grabbed the fire extinguisher and heard her Madre stand up and scream. She pulled the pin.

     

    Alex: Madre! Get out of the house! I’ll meet you out there.

     

    Carmen ran out, crying and Alex tried to put out the fire. When she had used up all the substance in the extinguisher, she let it fall to the floor and ran out, coughing. She saw her Madre standing there and ran up to her, being pulled into a hug.

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    5. what! how can it just end like that? Shane can just know that carmen is “in the past.” it’s a really great story and I really hate to see it end this way. Happy birthday

    6. HAPPY BIRTHDAY, BABY-GIRL!!!!!!!I love this story it fuckin’ kick ass!! I really don’t want to see this end . . . and so sadly :( . . . Shane can’t just let Carmen go like that . . . I have faith that those two are gonna’ find each other with Alex’s help, of course!! I’m excited for this sequel, don’t keep us waiting for too long!! Good luck with that movie, I’m sure it’s gonna’ be off the fuckin’ chain!!! And again, “HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!”, and like always, LYLAS ;-p

    8. Happy Birthday TODAY WAS amazing had lots of fun hope u liked ur presants um i liked the last chapter but HATE you for making me wait to read them 6 fucking hours its just not nice ARHHH and after that awesome present and everything… HAPPY B-DAY

    9. That was great and I can’t wait for the sequel I think that would be better in some way thanks for all the great updates good luck with the movie and happy birthday and please post a sequel soon I loved every bit of it

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