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TRAIN. GO. SORRY. (Chapter 1)
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“I don’t see how that is relevant to her,” she quickly replied.
It was Tom’s turn to sigh. He cared deeply about this woman, but Jodi’s stubbornness often drove him mad.
“Don’t give me that look,” she said out loud when she saw the expression on his face. ‘What happened with Mary was a mistake! A mistake I don’t intend to repeat with Bette.”
“It’s not that,” Tom signed. He ran his hand through his hair in a gesture that told her he was getting frustrated.
“Then what is it?”
“Jodi,” he tried to explain. “You are one of the most honest and straight-forward persons I know… And you seem… you seem to be head over heels in love with Dean Por …”
She felt the sudden urge to interrupt him. “I don’t know if love is…”
“Let me finish.” The look in his eyes told her that it was a bit too late to ask him to stop this. “If you want your relationship with Bette to work… don’t you think she should know the truth about what you went through?”
She didn’t want to consider the possibility that Tom might just be right.
“It wouldn’t serve anyone,” she argued. “It’s in the past.”
Tom decided it was time to go in for the kill. “I saw you looking at Alex’s picture.”
He knew her temper very well, and wasn’t surprised by her acidic response. “Were you spying on me?”
“Don’t be stupid,” he calmly replied. “I’m not spying on you. What little I saw was enough, though.” Tom waited for this to fully sink in before adding, “It still hurts, doesn’t it?”
It was a question she didn’t have an answer to.
Tom continued. “And because it still hurts, it will affect your relationship with Bette… and with her little girl.”
“Please,” Jodi said. “Don’t bring Angelica into this.” She closed her eyes, an unfamiliar knot tightening at the pit of her stomach. She felt an almost overpowering urge to cry, but she fought it back, and won.
She opened her eyes to find Tom looking down at her with a sympathetic expression on his face. Jodi would find it annoying from anyone else, but Tom knew her story very well, and had been one of the few that helped clean the mess left behind.
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I’m not a Jodi fan, but you write so well I’d really like this story to continue (especially when Bette enters the picture).
Awesome prologue!!! I can’t wait to read more about your version of Jodi’s background!!
Despite the name I’m a massive Jodi fan and a huge JoBette fan (nice to know there’s others) I’m really glad someones giving Jodi a back story and think your writing is great Anasazi. Looking forward to the next installment
Great start. I think the back story on Jodi and her “fear” of children is full of great fanfic potential.
Thank you, I am very interested in this story and how it will go on. Jodi’s character certainly deserves an intelligent background story, I’m glad you took up that challenge.
You write really well but I am such a TiBetter that I don’t want to feel any sympathy towards Jodi. :-(
I am looking forward to reading a story about Jodi! I listened to MM’s video with IC and what MM thought was the reason Jodi said she didn’t like children, so I am glad someone is going to write about this. AND, you writing is very good…so thanks!
Very well written Anasazi! Can’t wait for chapter 2!!
Your write is very good. The Storyline also. But I’m a absoluty Tibette-Fan. I dont like Jodi. So I will wait of the next 3-4 chapters . If it runs at a B&J Story, then I am out.