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    Trouble in designer suits Ch. 31

    Story written on June 5, 2006 by Ellie R.
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    Helena wakes up, Inspector Diego arrives, The girls return home and Bette and Andy go to see peggy.

     

     

     

     

     

    ——————-Helena————–

      

    I struggle to open my eyes as I wake up; it is as though I am fighting through some kind of heavy fog towards the voices I now hear. Recognisable, some of them yet not familiar, I can’t quite place them.

     

    My body feels heavy and numb until I try to move then I become aware of a distant pain which I know is mine but yet seems detached from me. As I lay with my eyes still fighting my brain to stay shut I have flashes of the past few hours, the terror and confusion, the shear desperation, as I lay helpless. Then faces and voices, soothing words and gentle touches, but who had come, who was here now?

     

    Finally I force my eyes to open; the room is not dark but is dim, calm and soothing. I blink a few times to clear my blurry vision as I move to sit up the pain that was distant slams into me with the force of a sledge hammer. I feel a hand on my shoulder and look to see who possesses the calming voice I remember from earlier in the evening that is now telling me to lie still. The face I see as I turn my head is not the one I expected, a woman I had managed to turn into my enemy with my actions of the past few months was sitting at the edge of the bed I was now lying in imploring me to stay still and not try to get up again yet.

     

    “Thank you.”

     

    I don’t really know what else to say to express the gratitude I feel towards this woman at the moment.

     

    “You have nothing to thank me for, I am just so glad that we showed up when we did. How is the pain are you ok?”

    “If I don’t move I am ok. Thank you for that I don’t know how I am still in my own house but I have a feeling you made that possible.”

    As I speak more I feel the strangeness of my mouth and hear the slightly strange sound as the words come out of my mouth and it occurs to me that I should know how badly I am injured other than the teeth I can feel that are missing from my mouth.

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    1. Hey Ellie this is a really good story. It´s a difficult subject but I hope it brings everybody closer to each other… Looking forward to your next chapter… Post soon if you can.

    2. I absolutely love this fic, poor Helena, nobody deserves something like this to happen to them. Looking forward to that sick b*stard vito getting what’s coming to him. Can’t wait for the next one!

    3. Great chapter Ellie R. Maybe Helena and Peggy can reconnect and become as mother and daughter should be. Don’t think they will ever be close but maybe this situation can begin to help heal them. Everyone else is being so supportive and loving and I am glad to see their interaction.

    4. Even a baby calf needs its Mother even if the Mother is dryed up. Helena needs Peggy more now than ever. This will put every one on even footing. even Bette and Helena. thanks so much for posting. thanks

    5. That was heart breaking, but it was also written so beautiful in only the way you can write it. So, you are forgiven for the long delay. Maybe let Lena (detective) and Helena find the love, healing, and support between the two of them so they can have the happiness that the others have. What you think???????

    6. Awesome chapter! its so great to see you posting..i really love Bette and Andy..they are really great toguether as friends. Poor Helena..i hope she gets better fast. I love your story! Post soon :)

    7. Hey Ellie I read the beginning of this story when you first posted it, but somehow I’ve lost touch with it. Soon I’ll go back and read the missing posts, but in the meantime….post, post and post some more :o)) Your writing is great.

    8. Ellie, I like this story of your. Hopefully everything will work out well for Helena, she needs Peggy. Maybe love interest for Hel & Lena :)

    9. Good chapter. Poor Helena and Lena will get that baster and kick his ass to jail for Helena. Love Bette and Andy, they are so cool. Ok post soon please, thanks!

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