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    Trouble in designer suits Ch. 31

    Story written on June 5, 2006 by Ellie R.
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    Helena wakes up, Inspector Diego arrives, The girls return home and Bette and Andy go to see peggy.

     

    “It’s about fucking time. Where the hell have you been and what the fuck is going on?”

     

    Bette’s low voice belied the anger I could hear in the tone she was using as we came through the front door.

     

    “Bette I need to explain what is going on to you and then we have to go out.”

     

    I heard the trepidation in Andy’s voice and knew then that she realised how hard the conversation she was about to have could be. I took the time to usher everyone else into the living room as Andy hugged Rachel and had a hushed conversation with her before motioning Bette out into the yard.

     

    I sat with a reassuring arm round Rachel and explained, with many interruptions from Alice, what had happened and where we had all been. As we sat and discussed all the options and what was going to happen in the future I was secure in the knowledge that we would do all we could to ensure that Helena was ok no matter what the history.

    The one person who would take a lot of convincing was Bette.

     

     

    Meanwhile outside.

      

      

    ——————Bette————–

      

    I just couldn’t believe it; it made no sense and as such after Andy finished the story of where they had been I just sat unable to speak. I hated Helena but I could not stand back and let her suffer. She was Peggy’s daughter and I loved Peggy as a mother. This was why Andy and I had to go and see her, we were possibly the only two people who could reveal what had happened to her and still ensure she respected Helena’s wishes.

     

    “Andy, this will devastate Peggy. How do we tell her this, I know they do not speak hardly at all but she is still her daughter. If this had happened to one of my girls I would hunt the bastard down and torture him slowly to death.”

     

    “I know but the fact is we must tell her. Maybe if we can get them through this then they can get on and rebuild their relationship. Bette maybe it’s a chance for Helena to be accepted and to accept others in return. Are you willing to give her that chance? Now after this can you take a chance on helping a woman who has been the target of your hate and who has hated you with equal malice for the last 17 years.”

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    1. Hey Ellie this is a really good story. It´s a difficult subject but I hope it brings everybody closer to each other… Looking forward to your next chapter… Post soon if you can.

    2. I absolutely love this fic, poor Helena, nobody deserves something like this to happen to them. Looking forward to that sick b*stard vito getting what’s coming to him. Can’t wait for the next one!

    3. Great chapter Ellie R. Maybe Helena and Peggy can reconnect and become as mother and daughter should be. Don’t think they will ever be close but maybe this situation can begin to help heal them. Everyone else is being so supportive and loving and I am glad to see their interaction.

    4. Even a baby calf needs its Mother even if the Mother is dryed up. Helena needs Peggy more now than ever. This will put every one on even footing. even Bette and Helena. thanks so much for posting. thanks

    5. That was heart breaking, but it was also written so beautiful in only the way you can write it. So, you are forgiven for the long delay. Maybe let Lena (detective) and Helena find the love, healing, and support between the two of them so they can have the happiness that the others have. What you think???????

    6. Awesome chapter! its so great to see you posting..i really love Bette and Andy..they are really great toguether as friends. Poor Helena..i hope she gets better fast. I love your story! Post soon :)

    7. Hey Ellie I read the beginning of this story when you first posted it, but somehow I’ve lost touch with it. Soon I’ll go back and read the missing posts, but in the meantime….post, post and post some more :o)) Your writing is great.

    8. Ellie, I like this story of your. Hopefully everything will work out well for Helena, she needs Peggy. Maybe love interest for Hel & Lena :)

    9. Good chapter. Poor Helena and Lena will get that baster and kick his ass to jail for Helena. Love Bette and Andy, they are so cool. Ok post soon please, thanks!

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