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Trouble in designer suits Ch.7
At least I had eaten well. Actually this was the best meal I had had in forever. I had stumbled upon this little Mexican place on my way home from a meeting. Small it was but it appeared to be well known and I had to wait over an hour at the bar to get a table. I didn’t mind it was Friday and I found the place relaxing and the food was truly worth the wait. Once I had finished bold from alcohol I decided to pay my compliments to the chef and asked the hostess to take me back to the kitchen.
That is when I first laid eyes on Rachel, my future wife. She was in a white chef’s uniform leaning against a counter as her staff cleaned the kitchen she had stopped working once the last meals had been served. She was obviously in charge and the rest of the kitchen workers moved to her orders.
The hostess went over and whispered in her ear and Rachel turned and started to come over. I lost all ability to think in the first second we made eye contact gorgeous blue like the moment between night and day. They sparkled with fun and energy. They were perfect and set beautifully in a golden face her long blonde hair let out after a night under a chef’s hat was tousled and waved over her shoulders. She was as tall as me, which was rare at 5 feet eleven, and she had a body I new I just had to touch full is exactly the right places.
——–Rachel——-
Oh my god, what am I going to do I managed to walk over to her but I have no idea if I can still speak let alone make intelligent conversation. She is the most beautifull woman I have ever seen her gorgeous mahogany hair and soulful black eyes that shine set off her porcelain skin and ***** full mouth that I must kiss. And she is as tall as me I can’t believe it. She is not our usual client dressed to kill in a tailored business suit black with a vibrant purple pin stripe that matches the silk shirt that clings to her deliciously full *****.
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(39 votes, average: 3.72 out of 5)
So sad, but its explaining things.
So sad ome human are just flat evil and mean. He took four lifes. thanks
Truely devastating, how cruel humans can be to each other…And sadly the odds are against the union ever really comming back from such a loss/trauma..this doesn’t look good for them…tks the for update…pls post soon
wow that was so deep
Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreat story post soon
Gosh reading this story just brought a tear to my eye. Its very well written and described! I cannot wait to read the next chapter
My heart’s breaking for Andy and Rachel and I hardly know them. Their story hurts but I hope the next chapter isn’t too far away.
Damn, just this part alone was breaking my heart; but I know there is more to tell. Post again soon!
this is truly sad. to overcome such trauma takes so much time and love is so needed. but the most saddest thing is that even two persons who love each other so much are all wrapped up in their own pain and it is hard to show your love to one another. thanks for each great chapter.
Fuck this is sad and painful, they will be more coming in next chapter, post soon please. Thanks!
Ellie you write so beautifully – this is the time old story of tragedy that hits us all and either breaks us or transforms us somehow in the suffering of it. I really want to see these two girls heal from the bad behaviour of another which caused them so much devastation. I love the picture of Bette, Tina, the girls and Peggy being part of that as a matured group of people who have learnt what love and committment are all about – not just to a partner, but to the other people in our lives who come to mean so much tto us. Thank You
I was right very sad and tears in my eyes but please post soon this is great the way you write it helps everyone understand the pain that most women would feel
Holy shit..sad.Tears r running down my face..your writing is jus SO fuking BEAUTIFUL..Please Post so0N..
wow!!!