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Trouble in designer suits Ch.8
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Previously:
Bette & Tina’s (7:00am) Wednesday morning.
——-Andy—–
She looked at me then for the first time since we started talking three hours ago and I knew what she was going to say before she opened her mouth, she had said it so many times and it broke me a little more each time I heard the words come from her mouth.
“I’m so sorry I should have listened I should have listened to you and then it would have all been fine.”
I hated to hear it because I know that for a second the first time she said it when she woke up I agreed and I blamed her, for our pain. It was only brief but I still let myself and for that I have hated myself since.
I looked around the room and realised everyone was looking at me this was the part only I could tell the part when she was away in another world healing physically from the attack. The longest month of my life.
New York Eighteen Months ago:
——-Andy——
Peggy phoned to let me know and as soon as she called I got on the next fight home I ran like a woman possessed through the hospital until I found her waiting for me.
Rachel was still in surgery but that was not top of the list of priorities for the doctors. Rachel last wish as she had succumbed to her attacker was granted. I got to spend a few precious minutes with my daughters before one and then the other passed from my reach, as their bodies could not survive the trauma of the attack and the world outside of their mother’s womb being made to leave to early they died at twenty two and twenty four minutes old I thank go every day for those minutes that meant I got to meet the most precious people I will ever know.
——-Peggy——-
I waited outside while Andy met her daughters praying to anyone who would listen for them to survive. But they didn’t they were too small and the attack had been brutal. Andy stayed with them after they had gone. When she came out two hours had passed. She was holding something in her hand. They were photos of the children that she would never get to know. They were beautiful and to this day I have no idea how I held her as she collapsed into me. But I did until the nurse helped me get her into a chair. She just sat there and stared into space holding onto those pictures as if she would never again put them down.
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Beautiful I have tears in my eyes again and I only hope that they can all help rachel and andy to find happiness once again please post soon I love this so much but it does break my heart to read all of the pain that they had to go though
oh ellie this is breathtaking. i really look forward to read more because in this story there are just so many interesting issues waiting for solutions. thanks again.
Heartwrenching….beautiful. Wonderfully written. Thank you.
Damn that was beautiful and amazing, so sad and so sorry for them. Glad they meet Bette and Tina and Peggy Peabody and the gang and they will help them to go throught this pain. Ok post soon please, thanks!
I was never able to understand the sense of loss that engulfs you when you lose someone you love so very much. I’m lucky I suppose to have never experienced that, but reading the FanFic that’s here – especially the Tina and Bette storyline, has helped me to understand it more. When I read stories of how they miss their child/children even if they’re away from them for a brief time I find myself wanting to go and see my god-daughter and just spend time with her and fall in love with her over and over again as she starts to discover the world as only a baby can. When I read this story it breaks my heart because even though I don’t have kids myself I can understand what it would be to lose one, let alone to lose one the awful way Rachel and Andy did. I guess what I’m saying is that even though this hurts to read and I’m as close to tears as I can probably get, thank you. Thank you for writing this and thank you for helping me to understand it.
It still amazes me that seemingly out of nowhere a story of such detail, love, strugle can be born. I wish that I had the ability to form words like this, to have a though and make it into some giant tale. Simply amazing that you have this ability to tell a story and it be to captivating, I’m totally at your mercy…post soon pls
I absolutely love this story. Those tw young ladies are really hurting and who if not this group can get them back together with all the love they share. Love it. Post soon, please.
OMG….this was simply beautiful; especially this part – Fate hade bought them into our lives and we had let them into our hearts. Now we would help them let the world back into theirs.
I absolutely love it.
Damn I actuall teared up there in the beginning. I dont like you right now….na just kidding that was really touching…
1st………brb
Beautiful, just beautiful. I lvoe this story, Somehow I have missed this story, sorry about that, and I started to read it last night, and I love it. Let Andy and Rachel be good again, they deserve it, they’ve been through so much. Please post again really soon ;)
That was so sad and yet so beautiful, Bette and Tina are such understanding and the gang they are there through thick and thin. Andy and Racheal are very lucky to have found them. Peggy Peabody also. What did Helene do guess I missed that part. thanks