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    True love – Chapter 2

    Story written on February 26, 2007 by landon.
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    This story starts right after “Lesson Number One”, but Carmen is back. And she’s back for good.

     

    Shane looked at Carmen but when Carmen glanced at her she quickly looked down.

     

    Shane: “Uh…yes…she left…”

     

    Everybody noticed the tension between Carmen and Shane, but they didn’t know what to do.

     

    Alice: “Ooookayyy…I think we should leave you two alone, huh? But Carmen, please. If you have the intention to beat her. Remember that she needs her hands to do her job, okay? Oh and she needs her eyes, too.  So be careful when you hit her face, alright?”

     

    Tasha: “Alice, I think that they can handle the situation. Let’s leave them alone.”

     

    Alice:” Hey, you never know with these two. Shane, Carmen: caliente, you remember, right?”

     

    The others including Carmen and Shane can’t help but laugh. Though Alice’s comments are never really helpful, she always succeeded in easing up situations full of tension. Carmen and Shane are left alone and the tension begins to rise again. Shane looks down at her feet. She feels stupid, but she just couldn’t say a word to her ex-fiancée. Carmen observes Shane. She feels angry because of all the pain and suffering she had to go through. After 3 months she comes back and sees her dancing around with another girl. Having fun like if she already forgot Carmen.

     

    Shane: “It’s a bit loud here…Can we go to Kit’s office and talk?”

     

    Carmen doesn’t answer but she follows Shane into Kit’s office where they are able to communicate without yelling. Shane closes the door to have some privacy. She looks nervously at Carmen who crosses her arms.

     

    Carmen: “I can see that you have a lot of fun. Are you happy to have your old life back, now that you got rid of me??! Do you feel better now, after leaving me at the altar in front of my friends and family??! Do you feel better after humiliating me??! “

     

    Carmen almost screams. At the same time her eyes fill with tears. She approaches Shane like if she was ready to hit her but Shane stays still and keeps looking at her. Carmen couldn’t bare the look that made her melt every time.

     

    Shane: “I’m sorry…”

     

    That was enough. Carmen can’t control her anger anymore. She slaps Shane in her face and yells at her.

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    3. it wasn’t abuse exactly… it’s more like a radical way to change something in Shane that obviously needed a makeover – like her non-belief in a happy, monogamous relationship. Jesus effing Christ.

    5. ohhh great fic, please im hopeing for forgiveness adn some gettingback together i miss them on the show and fic is all i have please let shane adn carmen work it out the obviousyl still love each other …

    6. This is disgusting. Carmen abuses Shane for all of season three and then she comes back to physically abuse her in this fic. Horrible. You should be ashamed of supporting such an abusive, unhealthy ship – much less writing a fic that puts Shane back with her abuser. Shame on you.

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