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True love – Chapter 21
Before I got into the house she put her hand on my stomach and just a little moment later I could feel her lips on mine. “I love you.” She whispered into my ear as we sepearted. I felt my knees weaken and had to admit that a breakfast would do me good. I still had my eyes closed when she pulled away and gave me a wicked, but sexy look. She went into the house without waiting for an answer.
“I love you, too…” I said watching her disappear.
Damn it, I really need a shower now.
Carmen’s POV
I drove Shane to her first appointment with the physiotherapist. During the ride she kept watching out of the window and playing with her crutches.
When we arrived she was even more nervous. I put my hand on her thigh to get her attention.
Carmen: “Are you sure you don’t want me to stay with you?”
Shane: “Yeah…”
Carmen: “But don’t you think that it might help you to have me around?”
Shane: “It’ll make me nervous. Plus…I don’t want you to see me like that…”
Carmen: “Like what?”
Shane: “Helpless…”
Carmen: “Shane… You haven’t been walking without crutches since an eternity. It’s normal that you need physiotherapy now. You’re not helpless. I am here for you.”
Shane: “I know…I just…I want to do this on my own…I’ll see you tonight, okay?”
I couldn’t help it. It hurt me that Shane didn’t want me to be there for her. Nevertheless I had to respect her decision. She must have sensed my disappointment so laid her hand on my cheek.
Shane: “Carmen…this doesn’t mean that I don’t love you or that I don’t trust you, okay?”
Carmen: “Okay…”
I kissed her softly which made her grin.
Carmen: “When do you want me to pick you up?”
Shane: “You don’t need to pick me up. Bette will.”
Carmen: “Oh…okay…”
Shane: “See you tonight at the Planet?”
Carmen: “Okay…good luck.”
Shane: “Thanks.”
I got out of the car and watched her drive away hoping that she wasn’t hurt.
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(38 votes, average: 3.29 out of 5)
well worth the wait! a cliff, you sure know how to get that hook in deep!! :)
oh my god enough with the cliff hangers, you are killing me…lol…i have to admit that i could stop laughing when i read the “you want me to rape her” comment…cant wait for the next chapter! PPS
hey landon, the one thing i really dislike to see in your fic is a cliffhanger, lol. thanks for the update, great as always :) i laugh when carmen asked alice for the rape… i have no idea how carmen managed but if i were she i’d really rape her~!! and its funny to read that carmen checked/ tidy her look after shane left the kitchen, lol. PPS!!
oh, i forgot to say (this is a bit annoying)… is the noddle soufflé done? when shane asked carmen to wait i was thinking if she’s going to fix the noddle soufflé, lol~ maybe i was hungry all i could think was food, lol