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True love – Chapter 21
Carmen: “Thank you…”, I whispered into her ear.
She pulled me into her arms and hugged me tightly.
Shane: “Oh you went shopping? What did you buy?”
Before I could react Shane took the bag and looked into it. We both blushed immediately.
Shane: “I’m sorry…I didn’t mean to…”
I pulled her into a kiss so that she couldn’t talk anymore. At first she seemed to be surprised but then she kissed me back passionately. I leaned back to catch my breath. I sat on the table straddling my legs giving her a sign to join me. To my surprise she didn’t need the crutches to do so.
Carmen: “Hey, you don’t need them anymore.”
Shane: “Well I can walk without them for a couple of minutes now.”
I pull her into another kiss wrapping my legs around her hips. The kiss is soft at first but it becomes more and more passionate. It makes me want her more and more. Suddenly she stops kissing me and looks into my eyes. I could see the honesty, desire and love in her eyes.
Shane: “I love you…”
Carmen: “I love you, too.”
Shane: “Can you wait a few minutes?”
Carmen: “What?”
Shane: “Yeah…just a couple minutes, please.”
Carmen: “Uh…sure…”, I said clearly confused.
I expected her to make love to me at the table or on the ground but not that. She disappeared in the bedroom. I took the chance and ran into the bathroom where I hid the lingery I bought. I put it on as quick as I could and checked if my makeup and my hair was okay before I got back to the kitchen. Thanks to her injured foot I was quicker.
Shane: “Okay…come in.”
She was standing in the door frame offering me her hand which I took happily so that she could lead me into the room. When I saw what she had prepared I cried out happily and hugged her.
Carmen: “Shane…I can’t believe you did this.”
The room was full with rose blossoms and candles.
Shane: "I’d do anything for my princess. Come here…"
When I sat down she took my hand and looked at me revealing a little black box behind her back. I looked at it nervously wondering what it was.
Shane: “Go on…open it.”
I looked at her not knowing how to react. Was it what I thought it could be?
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(38 votes, average: 3.29 out of 5)
well worth the wait! a cliff, you sure know how to get that hook in deep!! :)
oh my god enough with the cliff hangers, you are killing me…lol…i have to admit that i could stop laughing when i read the “you want me to rape her” comment…cant wait for the next chapter! PPS
hey landon, the one thing i really dislike to see in your fic is a cliffhanger, lol. thanks for the update, great as always :) i laugh when carmen asked alice for the rape… i have no idea how carmen managed but if i were she i’d really rape her~!! and its funny to read that carmen checked/ tidy her look after shane left the kitchen, lol. PPS!!
oh, i forgot to say (this is a bit annoying)… is the noddle soufflé done? when shane asked carmen to wait i was thinking if she’s going to fix the noddle soufflé, lol~ maybe i was hungry all i could think was food, lol