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True love – Chapter 21
Bette was already there when I got out of the hospital. I got into a car and sighed heavily.
Bette: “Was it that bad?”
Shane: “Nah…it was okay, I guess. But I can’t wait to be able to walk normally again.”
Bette: “Don’t worry, Shane. Just take this seriously and in a few weeks you’ll be able to do whatever you want.”
Shane: “Yeah…Wow, you got the roses.”
Bette: “Yeah, they’re beautiful, aren’t they? Too bad we have to kill them.”
Shane: “Yeah, but Carmen will love it.”
Bette: “I bet she will.”
Carmen’s POV
After spending two hours with Alice in a sex shop where she tought me how the toys were used I decided to buy handcuffs and a strap-on. The latter was because of Alice, she practically forced me to take it. I found it rather embarassing but I have to admit that it turned me on imagining Shane using it on me.
I arrived at Shane’s house and saw that she must be at home since the lights were on. I hoped that Shane was in the bathroom taking a shower so that I could hide the sex toys in the closet, so I tried not to make any noise when I came into the house. To my surprise I smelled cheese and I could hear Shane swearing in the kitchen. I walked into the kitchen and saw Shane sucking on her finger which she must have burned. The stove was open and I could see a noddle soufflé. I put one and one together and realized that Shane made something to eat and burned herself trying to take it out of the stove. I smiled brightly and when she saw me she tried to hide the food.
Shane: “Carmen! You’re already back? I thought we’d meet at the Planet?”
Carmen: “Yeah, I…uh wanted to check on you. What is this?”
Shane: “I…well…okay I wanted to surprise you with this. I made a noodle soufflé! Okay, Bette helped me, but still…I did it.”
She grinned proudly. How sweet could she be? I walked over to her and put my hand on her cheek looking into her eyes.
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(38 votes, average: 3.29 out of 5)
well worth the wait! a cliff, you sure know how to get that hook in deep!! :)
oh my god enough with the cliff hangers, you are killing me…lol…i have to admit that i could stop laughing when i read the “you want me to rape her” comment…cant wait for the next chapter! PPS
hey landon, the one thing i really dislike to see in your fic is a cliffhanger, lol. thanks for the update, great as always :) i laugh when carmen asked alice for the rape… i have no idea how carmen managed but if i were she i’d really rape her~!! and its funny to read that carmen checked/ tidy her look after shane left the kitchen, lol. PPS!!
oh, i forgot to say (this is a bit annoying)… is the noddle soufflé done? when shane asked carmen to wait i was thinking if she’s going to fix the noddle soufflé, lol~ maybe i was hungry all i could think was food, lol