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True love – Chapter 5
Alice: “She couldn’t come. She has to work early tomorrow. You know, you can have fun at the Planet, too.”
Papi grins: “Yeah, I know. Would you like to dance, Carmen?”
Carmen doesn’t listen. Instead she keeps looking at Shane who is dancing with the girl who flirted with her at WAX the day before.
Papi doesn’t see what Carmen is looking at, so she looks confused at Alice who shrugs.
Papi: “Carmen.”
Carmen: “Yes…Sorry. What did you say?”
Papi: “ I asked you to come and dance with me.”
Carmen: “Yes, sure.”
They join Shane and Kelly at the dance floor.
Papi: “Oh Vanilla, you’re here, too.”
Shane grins: “Hey Paps.”
When Shane sees Carmen she looks surprised and a bit jealous, too. She just shakes her head and continues to dance with Kelly.
Carmen dances sexily with Papi and looks at Shane, to see Shane’s reaction. When she sees that Shane seems to be upset, she grins and continue to make her jealous by flirting with Papi. Suddenly Shane gets a phone call. She excuses herself to Kelly and disappears which worries Carmen. She stops dancing.
Carmen: “Hey, I’m a bit tired. Can we get a drink?”
Papi is disappointed but agrees. They join the girls.
Carmen: “Do you know where Shane is?”
Tina: “She’s dancing with her stalker.”
Carmen: “Stalker?…Anyway, I saw her and she just disappeared. Didn’t she tell you where she wanted to go?”
Papi: “Maybe she left with that blonde girl.”
Bette: “No, look. Kelly is over there.”
Alice: “Kelly! Hey Kelly. Where’s Shane?”
Kelly: “I don’t know. She got a phone call. It must have been very important because suddenly she became very upset and told me that she had to go.”
The girls look at each other in a concerned way.
Carmen: “She doesn’t leave without telling anybody. Something must have happened.”
Bette: “You’re right. I think we should go home and see if everything is fine.”
Carmen: “I’ll come with you…if you don’t mind, Papi.”
Papi: “No…that’s ok.”
Carmen:” Thanks. It was a wonderful night.”
She gives Papi a hug and leaves with Bette.
Papi: “She still loves Vanilla, doesn’t she?”
Alice: “I think so…Do you like her?”
Papi: “Yes, but you know me. I love beautiful women.”
She grins at Kelly.
Papi: “Would you like to dance with me?”
Kelly giggles: “Yes, sure.”
Alice watches them and shakes her head.
Alice: “I think no one deserves the title ‘player’ more than Papi.”
Jenny and Tina just nod their heads.
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(36 votes, average: 4.14 out of 5)
SHARMEN = True Love
I Love it…it’s awesome…….I hope Shan dumps Paige becuz I don’t like her at all…..she dosen’t even compare to carmen…keep up da good work..PEACE
Great update. I’m glad nothing really happened between Carmen and Papi…ick I really don’t like the idea of them together. I hope Carmen finds Shane cause I have a feeling that this “friendship” thing isn’t going to last much longer. PPS
Im loving this story! please keep going. i like that you are not rushing them back together. looking forward to reading more.