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TRUE TO MYSELF Chapter 4
John thats enough! I am so tired of you cutting me down all the time. I work just as hard to support us. You know what! Ive had enough. We will discuss this later. I have to concentrate on driving not arguing with you all the time.
Do what ever you want Tina. I wont be home tonight I have to work. John said as he slammed the phone down.
Tina was mad as fire, but knew she had to get control of herself. Day after day she helped other women with controlling abusive husbands and here she is allowing herself to be controlled by her own husband. Hero by day, victim by night. What a world. Tina was starting to see the light though. The more she thought about John missing the appointment the more she knew. Their marriage could be coming to an end.
5 months later
Tina arrived home two days early cutting her vacation short with her parents in
As the taxi pulled up to the house Tina noticed another vehicle in the drive way. As she entered the house she heard an unusual sound coming from their bedroom. Dropping her bags on the floor all Tina could think of was that bastard brought another woman in their home. As she neared the bedroom she could tell the laughter was coming from the shower in their bathroom. Tina stopped at the closed door feeling like she was about to loose her breath. Then she felt the anger building. Tina entered the bathroom and opens the shower door.
You bastard! How dare you fuck someone else in our home? Tina screamed and then fell back against the sink.
Tina please, I can explain. John said as he stood there with his lover.
John how could you do this to me? David, youve been our best friend for 6 years. How could you? Tina said as she ran from the bathroom.
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(33 votes, average: 3.33 out of 5)
Great update! Hope Bette can comfort Tina and that their friendship grows into something more than just friendship! They belong together! Oh btw didn’t expect John to fall in love with his best friend, nice twist! Well post soon please
wow did not see that coming!!!!!!!!!!!!! her name should be kai
Whoa, I sure didn’t see that coming with John and David. Has he run off??. Let me see, how about Emily? Love your story.
i like predictable, i want B&T to get together…elizabeth sounds great, unless you can name it angelica LOL…i hope bette will be there for tina all the way, get rid of john, bette’s gf and let them get together, slowly but surely
Glad that he didn’t hurt Tina and now this happen I think its time for you to take john and Bette’s girlfriend out of the picture and let Bette and Tina be together. Ok about the baby name, Elizabeth or Jennifer or Laurel or Jessica. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Another great chapter OCD can’t wait for more!!!
I’m really enjoying this story. More pls.
I think that the baby should be named after Tina’s mom (whatever her name is) or after Tina. It is too early or presomuous to name the baby after Bette, they can do that for their next child–Hint, Hint. Great job OCD and this story and chapter. Nice twist with John being on the down low, it may help with Tina’s parents being more accepting of her and Bette :o)
Hey OCD… you were sooo right… John & David… no-one saw that coming. It was a great twist that explained some of his bad behaviour… guilt will make people CRAZY. Hey, how about the name MARTINA for the baby. She gets to be named after a woman who’s a strong, fearless, courageous and her mother’s name is incorporated as well. Post soon again. Thanks.
ELIZABETH CHRISTINA. They can call her Bth Bethey Or Chris Christy John shoulsnt have a say so in this. Hell, she had to go to a Cyerbanks to get pregnant. David is married withchrildren, So two family life we messed up/ That is why John was so guilty. thanks
Hi Baby, This must be love for me to be reading your stories instead of watching the Super Bowl ! I really loved this chapter that was full of love and heartache. Love for Tina because of her daughter being born and heartache for the knowledge her marriage is in trouble to say the least. Thank you for the sweet dedication a few chapters back.I love supporting you and I love you so very, very much. Boo
Great chapter. Looking forward to more.
Oh, I forgot to comment on the last chapter. ABC!!!
Had a feeling that he was having an affair, but did not know who with. I am with UT go with Jennifer, Laurel, maybe Elizabeth (Elisabeth). Great story, can not wait until the next chapter is posted.
OMFG!!!! That was great. I am so glad your back
where is the rest of the story…..
That was very considerate of John not to rape Tina. Less considerate to A. have an affair, B. have it in their home. What a pair of Gumpsters those guys turned out to be. Talk about chickens (not the ones Tina’s mother rises with)! How about ‘Talulah’ as in Bankhead, a notorious actress from the south from the 20s to the 60s with a large lesbian following? Besides, it would give everybody a break from all the little Tiffanys, Chelseas and Brandys running around these days.
wohooooooo ur back love this story i think they should call the girl elisabeth just like her soon to be new mommy i hope please continue :)
Looking forward to what is going to happen, get rid of Bette’s girlfriend and make sure John stays out of the picture, and let us see Bette and Tina together as a family. Definitely call the baby Elizabeth.
That’s right Bette, soothe Tina’s soul, you’re the only one who can!! Thanks!
Oh, so he’s man enough to try to rape Tina, but not man enough to see her to the hospital. He hurt her in so many ways. An affair and then having it in their home. He treated Tina as a “wife” (ironing his shirts, having dinner ready..etc)probably only to disguise his homosexuality. Jeez, Tina should be tested. I feel sorry for Tina, because she’s embarassed and it’s not her fault. It’s a good thing John isn’t there…there sure is a long line of people who would be more than happy to kick is a$$. Sorry, I had a friend in the same situation and she was left devastated and with child (beautiful baby girl – Alexandra). Ok, thanks for the update, please continue. As for a name, hmmm, something strong. Jeez, that’s quite hard. LOL. (Rebecca, Quinn, Katherine…just guessing)
The drama queen is back (doing the happy dance) – I can´t belive I missed your story TK. I haven´t seen that you startet posting again, sorry about that. So happy to have you back – missed your writing and I do hope you are well. Absolutely amazing new story TK – this is really amazing as always, so do post again and don´t keep us waiting too long. Loving it :o)
Hey TK – I guess the anonymous comment is me – sorry about that I don´t know what happend :o)
I am with SHAZ on this Elizabeth would be nice. I can handle John being closeted..explains the temper and drinking…just glad he didn’t rape T. OK..OCD….give us some more. thanks
Another great chapter, this story is amazing….what a drama – I’m so glad Tina didn’t get raped….but she is really looking forward to some hard times in the next couples of months….Now is the time where Bette has to show Tina that she is there for her as her best friend, so goodbye little jealous Rachelle…..The babys name should definitely be Elizabeth, Tina can always say it’s after some grandmother LOL….I’m so looking forward to the next post….
been reading all 4 ch tonight and watching the final basketball game between duke and maryland toight (girls game) hey maryland the underdogs won yea!!!! duke girls played a mean game -went into over time—-enough glad your writting another great story for us lots of twists and turns here–two guys didn’t see that coming–hope b and t continue to get closer i see sparks here– oh i’m glad to see whit and stacey again loved them in other story belook’n for more
Hi, I’ve only been reading the stories for like 6 or 7 months,when i came to your stories and lady let me tell you, you know how to keep someone interested in the story itself, all the drama, God, I love it. I’m sorry for all the troubles you have had, and I do hope and pray that you are Ok, just maybe a dry spell. If you are feeling Ok ,could you please maybe finish this one story. If not, its your readers loss, it just seems like everyone loves you and your stories. It just seems like whenever I find a great story, the author doesn’t finish it. Please, if you are ok, can you maybe find it in your heart to finish it for us. thank you so very much, in advance. Sarm