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    Truly, Madly, Deeply: Chapter 6

    Story written on December 3, 2005 by buildmeupbreakmedown.
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    This can’t be life

    Chapter 6

    The dull glow of the lamp on the bedside table spread across the sheets and onto the naked skin of two sated women. Slow, rhythmic breathing and closed eyes made Shane think that Carmen was sleeping, but she was as wide awake as she had been two hours before.


    The dark skinned beauty was spread on top of her lover, head on her chest, listening to the steady pace of a heart that she knew only beat for her. Long pale fingers were intertwined with her own while the other set were drawing slow concentric circles along her smooth back. She relished the moment because she knew it couldn’t last. She would have to tell Shane everything about her and Casey.


    Shane’s eyes were wide and unblinking as she stared towards the ceiling. Their love making had been passionate and desperate. She asked Carmen questions with lips, tongue, and teeth along her body and was answered with moans and declarations of love. She could at least decipher one answer; Carmen only had eyes for her.


    Yet, even still, Shane could not get Casey Young out of her mind. The past that the scarred woman shared with Carmen was significant. Apparently something had occurred between them, a something that Carmen didn’t want her to know about yet.


    She had always known the woman who slept on top of her to express what she felt. ‘She’s strong and passionate and doesn’t give a ***** what anybody thinks just as long as she knows that I know that she loves me. But this… Casey. The way they looked at each other, the way she acted tonight… what the ***** was that all about?’


    As patient as she usually was, Shane was beginning to feel a bit of her composure unravel. Her brow furrowed in annoyance and thought as she tried to figure out what Casey meant to Carmen, what was it that was too much to be spoken? She was so lost in the fray of her mind that she didn’t notice she stopped drawing circles on the smooth brown skin of her lovers back… but Carmen did.


    “Babe, you okay?” Carmen asked without raising her head.


    Knocked out of her thoughts by the sultry voice, Shane blinked twice before answering. “Huh? Oh, yeah I’m good.”

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    1. Dat was off the chain!!!! Man you really got this whole thang down pack. Please post soon . . . and remember there’s no such thing as posting to much, lol;) Anyways,LYLAS, C-ya

    2. WOW! Casey really kicked Clive’s ass. My take on this is Carmen & Casey really seem to have a strong bond. Althopugh I do feel that bond is because of the history they shared as young lovers. Her connection to Shane is a more mature one. Its just going to take Carmen some time to decipher the emotions she feels for these two women. Excellent post, I just wouldn’t want to be in Carmens shoes right about now.

    4. I’m back again :), I just read this post a second time and a couple more questions came to mind. I also want to know the background on Casey and Carmen’s realationship. It seems like something pretty bad happened to cause them to separate/break-up like they did or if not that something bad happened to both of them similar to this insident and I hope you give us more insight on that . . . . Oh well just wondering.LYLAS, C-ya

    5. dang, casey kicked ass!! clive got what he deserved. that fight scene was well-written and intense! can’t wait to read carmen/casey’s story unfold, and for shane to tell hers. thx for the update. good luck on final exams. ^ – ^

    8. oh yeah that´s great.I feel sad for carmen´I think she was happy with casy, I hate if poeple lost each other.but hey she´s now with shane and I hope they will both work everything out.great update!

    9. This is a fantastic story. Please keep it coming. Give me more…soon. The drama and suspense are great…. but waiting for more is killing me. I luv it.

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