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Truly, Madly, Deeply: Chapter 8
Carmen held nothing back as she laughed at the spectacle. She picked up the frizbee and with a graceful toss, sent it sailing towards the girl.
“Thanks! Sorry about that!” the girl yelled one more time.
“No problem.” Carmen responded and turned her attentions to her ‘injured’ girlfriend. “Aw baby are you okay?”
“No. That fuckin hurt man.” She pouted and continued rubbing the back of her head.
Rolling her eyes playfully with a smile, Carmen reached out and placed a hand on Shane’s long arm, bringing it down and then turned her around. Getting on the tips of her toes, she kissed the sore spot amongst the raven hair and wrapped her arms around the slender body from behind. “Better?”
Shane gave a contented sigh, “A little bit.”
Carmen kissed the spot again and gave a squeeze before she let go and broke off into a skip towards the trees. She jumped up and hit one of the branches, making the petals break from their hold and float towards the ground around her. Spreading her arms out to either side, she closed her eyes and lifted her face towards the sky. The flowers fell on her, decorating her body with the beauty of nature.
“Everything she does is beautiful.” Shane said to herself. A lop-sided grin on her face as she stuck her hands in her pocket and walked towards her. ‘Like poetry in motion.’ Her body seemed to take a mind of its own as her ams went around Carmen and lifted her in the air.
She let out a quick yelp in surprise and wound her legs around Shane’s waist. Her hands went upwards and grabbed onto a branch, shaking it slightly and sending more flowers cascading downwards. She let go of the branch and wrapped her arms around Shane’s neck, watching as the petals fell around her and into her hair. Carmen couldn’t help but get lost in those enchanting green eyes, the windows to her soul.
“I didn’t know you had such a good arm.” Shane said with a slight chuckle.
“Well I played on the softball team in high school.”
“A jock huh?”
“You better believe it.” she brought her lips down on Shane’s for another breath-taking kiss. “Oh wait.” she said in a muffled voice.
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NOOO… You left me hanging!! :) I loved the lastes update and can’t wait for the encounter to continue. Babysitting should be interesting.
Great update! lol i could really picture Shane in a daze with her pants unbuttoned and unzipped :P They are HOT toguether :D Post soon!.
okay, if i were shane i’d have killed the clerk, so much torture and no reward not fair man! great story, sooo wanting more action LoL
That was HOT! Very glad they bought that bathing suit :D This update was great. Can’t wait for the adventures in babysitting. Post soon.
HOT HOT HOT!! loved this chapter. btw, great song choice. i had it playing in my head as i read the whole fitting room scene. update as soon as u can.
Great stuff!!!! Please continue
OMFG….please curse at that wrinting book of yours again and soon dammit…you cant keep haing like that grrrrrrrrThat shop clerk should be fired hahaha
hey girl? What’s going on , where you’ve been???? You left us like that with your story unfinished?????Come on , it was such a great story!!!!! You have to post the rest!!! I know it’s been like 1 year and a half but it doesn’t matter you have to end it , you know. Come on please give us that pleasure!!! Waiting for you……
nice
I’m still waiting for that update. Please continue with the story.